1、Unit 1 TEENAGE LIFE Part 4 Writing 专项练专项练 写作题目写作题目 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jack 刚刚升入高中,但他一时无法适应新的校园生活, 写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封建议信,内容主要包括: 1.实际上很多新生对于高中生活感到困惑,因此不必过多担心; 2 建议: (1)报名参加课外活动,这有助于结交更多的新朋友; (2)制作好学习日程安排,要特别关注学习,因为作为一名青少年,学习好是我们的 责任。 3.希望建议能适合你。 注意:1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。 Dear
2、 Jack, I am sorry to hear that youre having trouble adjusting to your high school life. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨思路点拨 主题就适应高中生活给朋友建议体裁应用文 人称以第一、二人称为主时态一般现在时 布局 第一段:进行安慰,表明写作目的; 第二段:根据提示给出适应高中生活的建议; 第三段:希望建议适合朋友。 遣词造句遣词造句 I.用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1. _ adv 实际上 2. _ n.新生 3. _ v.建议 4. _ n.日程安排 5. _ v.改进
3、,改善 6. _ n.青少年 7. _ n.责任,义务 8. _ 对感到困惑 9. _ 课外活动 10. _ 集中,特别关注 11. _ 适合 II. 完成句子 (1)实际上,很多新生对于高中生活感到困惑。 _, _ _ _ _ _ high school life. (2)我建议你报名参加课外活动,这能帮助你结交更多的新朋友。 I recommend that you _ _ _ _ _and it can help you make more new friends. (3)你应该制作好日程安排,并且把注意力集中在改进学习上。 You should _ _ _ _ and _ _ _ yo
4、ur study. (4)作为一名青少年,学习好是我们的责任。 _ _ _, studying well is our _. (5)我希望我的建议能适合你。 I hope my suggestions will _ _ _ _. 句式升级 (6)将句(2)升级为含有定语从句的句子。 _ _ _ _ (7)将句(4)升级为含有 it 作形式主语的句子。. _ _ _ _ 连句成篇连句成篇 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 写作积累写作积累 建议信常用句式 1.写信背景(写信的缘由) : I heard that. I am informed that. You said in your last le
5、tter that. Im sorry that you are having trouble/difficulty/ problems in. 2.写信目的: I am writing with my suggestions/proposals for. I am writing to express my views concerning. I am writing to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with. 3.具体建议: There are several simple suggestions for you.
6、To begin with,. Moreover,. Whats more, .Finally, Why not do.? /Why dont you do.? /What about doing.? How about doing.? Youd better (not)do. I advise/suggest that you (should)do. I strongly advise you to do. I highly recommend that you should do./It is highly recommended that you (should) do. You mig
7、ht/may as well do. 4.结尾: I hope you will find these ideas useful I hope my advice is of some help to you I do hope my advice is helpful to you 参考答案参考答案 I 1. actually2. freshman3. recommend4. schedule5. improve6. teenager7. responsibility8. be confused about9. extra-curricular activities10. focus on1
8、1. be suitable for II(1)Actually; many freshmen are confused about (2) sign up for extra-curricular activities (3) make a good schedule; focus on improving (4) As a teenager; responsibility (5) be suitable for you (6) I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you m
9、ake more new friends. (7) As a teenager, it is our responsibility to study well. 参考范文参考范文 Dear Jack, I am sorry to hear that youre having trouble adjusting to your high school life. Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life, so dont worry about it too much. Im writing to offer you
10、some useful advice. First, I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends. In this way you wont feel lonely and your school life will become colorful and interesting. Second, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study. As a teenager, it is our responsibility to study well. I hope my suggestions will be suitable for you. Yours, Li Hua