1、如何写基础性写作（二）如何写基础性写作（二）How to introduce an activity or a program?Writing order: 第一句第一句: what: An introduction of the activity/ program发生了发生了什么事什么事第二第二四句四句: who & when/where & how 活动活动(事情事情)的具体情况的具体情况:发生在发生在谁谁身上身上?什么什么时候时候/地点地点发生发生的的?是是怎么怎么进行的进行的?第五句第五句: Effect/ AimA conclusion of the activity/ progra
2、m活动活动(事情事情)的的目的或结果目的或结果.Words and expressions概述活动概述活动:修饰活动的形容词修饰活动的形容词: meaningful, important, unforgettable, colorful, instructive 修饰活动的短语修饰活动的短语:succeed in; fail in hold a party /meeting/ celebration/ ceremony organize an activitybroadcast a programspend ones time in many different ways; get every
3、thing ready for; 介绍活动的套语介绍活动的套语:attend / take part in / join in which was held in / which was sponsored by (由由主办主办) There are good programmes on TV on weekends. During the four days, a series of activities were held including There are a lot of activities at (the beach). In order to , an activity wa
4、s organized by during the week from to . 活动活动( (事情事情) )的过程的过程介绍活动过程的连接词介绍活动过程的连接词:At first, Then, After that, At last / Finally, 描述活动过程的短语描述活动过程的短语:have no trouble doing; make up ones mind to do;prepare sb for ; give up doing;do sth as usual; do what he wants us to do; set about doing; try ones best
5、 to do=go all out to do; get into trouble; help sb out; do ones bit for New China; wait for sb to do;find a way to do; make friends with sb; show (tell) sb. how to do; take (send) sb to ; 描述活动过程的短语描述活动过程的短语:cant help doing; do some good deeds to people; pass the time doing; feel excited about doing;
6、be prepared for more hard work; 描述活动过程的句型描述活动过程的句型:Im trying to find; Im afraid we are out of ; Some are doing A, others are doing B, and still others are doing C. 活动的影响或目的活动的影响或目的: :描述活动描述活动影响或目的影响或目的的短语的短语keep sb. from doing (prevent sb. from doing); call on sb. to do; speak highly of; think highl
7、y of; be designed / intended for sb. to do have a better knowledge/ understanding of enrich ones life; broaden ones horizons; gain the social experience; make a better sense of ones personal value 活动的影响或目的活动的影响或目的: :总结活动总结活动影响或目的影响或目的套语套语:1. provide sb. with a valuable opportunity to speak English,
8、make friends and exchange learning experience. I found my English much improved.2. Never in my life shall I forget the impressive days in . 3. gain a lot of social experience and learn to work for the society.4. Through these activities we can learn many things that cant be learned in class. 5. We e
9、njoy a change from our busy life in the city. 6. It was a very relaxing Sunday.7. makes you a useful person and it is also full of joys.时间时间8月月26日（上星期六）日（上星期六）地点地点广州市青少年宫广州市青少年宫过程过程查资料；写演讲稿；上台时很紧张，但很快平查资料；写演讲稿；上台时很紧张，但很快平静下来。静下来。结果结果荣获第三名荣获第三名感受感受一方面自信心很重要，另一方面只有在不断使一方面自信心很重要，另一方面只有在不断使用英语的过程中，语言水平才
10、能到提高。用英语的过程中，语言水平才能到提高。你参加了一次以你参加了一次以“Protect Our Earth”为主题的英语演讲为主题的英语演讲比赛。请完成一篇短文。比赛。请完成一篇短文。Sample:事件名称事件名称+时间时间+地点地点过程过程 结果结果感受感受人称：人称： 时态：时态： 主题主题:I (第一人称第一人称)一般过去时（主要）一般过去时（主要）主题主题“Protect Our Earth” 的英语演讲比赛。的英语演讲比赛。took part in a speech contest at last.looked for information in and on; prepare
11、d a draft for the speech; felt extremelynervous when; tried to calm myself down; got the third place self-confidence can encourage us to do everything well and only by using the language constantly can we improve our English. Last Saturday，August 26 , I took part in a speech contest at Guangzhou Chi
12、ldrens Palace, whose theme was “Protect Our Earth”. After I looked for information in the library and on the internet many times, I prepared a draft for the speech. But when my turn came, I felt extremely nervous. I tried to calm myself down, and to my joy, I got the third place at last. By particip
13、ating in this contest, I came to the understanding that self-confidence can encourage us to do everything well and that only by using the language constantly can we improve our English.Writing 1假如在暑假期间你参加了一个英语夏令营，在最后假如在暑假期间你参加了一个英语夏令营，在最后一次举行的晚会上，你要一次举行的晚会上，你要对该夏令营进行简单总结对该夏令营进行简单总结并表达对这次夏令营的感激之情并表达对
14、这次夏令营的感激之情。英语夏令营：英语夏令营：时间：时间：7月月10日日-7月月28日日人数：人数：20 人（教师人（教师5人，学生人，学生15人）；人）；内容：练习口语、阅读英语文章、唱英语歌曲等。内容：练习口语、阅读英语文章、唱英语歌曲等。写作要求写作要求：标题：标题：Thanks to English summer camp;假如在暑假期间你参加了一个英语夏令营，在最后假如在暑假期间你参加了一个英语夏令营，在最后一次举行的晚会上，你要一次举行的晚会上，你要对该夏令营进行简单对该夏令营进行简单总总结结并并表达对这次夏令营的感激之情表达对这次夏令营的感激之情。英语夏令营：英语夏令营： 时间：
15、时间：7月月10日日-7月月8日日人数：人数：20 人（教师人（教师5人，学生人，学生15人）；人）；内容：练习口语、阅读英语文章、唱英语歌曲等。内容：练习口语、阅读英语文章、唱英语歌曲等。写作要求写作要求：标题：标题：Thanks to English Summer Camp;注意：时态注意：时态 What an unforgettable English camp we have had! / Its a great honor for me to stand here to say something about the unforgettable English camp we hav
16、e had. Our English camp which lasted from July 10th to July 28th has successfully achieved its aims. All the participants including five teachers and fifteen students contributed a lot to the camp. We held many activities, for instance, practicing spoken English, reading English articles, singing En
17、glish songs and so on, all of which have greatly improved our English. I feel very grateful to have the chance to know so many respectable teachers and kind friends, who have given me great help in improving my English. 写作（共两节，满分为写作（共两节，满分为4040分）分）第一节：基础写作（共第一节：基础写作（共1 1小题，满分小题，满分1515分）分）假设你叫李平，你在由英
18、国领事馆文化教育处所举办的假设你叫李平，你在由英国领事馆文化教育处所举办的“Experience UKExperience UK 的演讲比赛中获得了冠军，并有机会的演讲比赛中获得了冠军，并有机会参加了为期一周的参加了为期一周的“英国文化之旅英国文化之旅” 活动。回国之后，你活动。回国之后，你准备给你的美国笔友准备给你的美国笔友MichaelMichael写一封信，告诉他有关你的写一封信，告诉他有关你的旅英经历和感受。旅英经历和感受。【写作内容写作内容】请根据下面表格的内容和提示，给你的笔友请根据下面表格的内容和提示，给你的笔友MichaelMichael写写一封，信的开头和结尾已给出。一封，信
19、的开头和结尾已给出。【写作要求写作要求】只能使用只能使用5 5 个句子表达全部的内容。个句子表达全部的内容。【评分标准评分标准】句子结构的准确性、信息内容的完整性和连贯性。句子结构的准确性、信息内容的完整性和连贯性。旅英时间旅英时间10 10 月月22-3022-30日日参加活动者参加活动者2525位来自不同国家的中学生位来自不同国家的中学生去过的地方去过的地方伦敦伦敦(London)(London)、牛津、牛津(Oxford)(Oxford)、湖区、湖区(the Lake District)(the Lake District)最喜欢的地方及原最喜欢的地方及原因因伦敦：了解了许多英国的历史和
20、文化伦敦：了解了许多英国的历史和文化牛津：看到了很多古老的图书馆牛津：看到了很多古老的图书馆最遗憾的事及原因最遗憾的事及原因 湖区很美，但天气不好，下大雨湖区很美，但天气不好，下大雨最快乐的事最快乐的事结识了许多新朋友结识了许多新朋友Dear Michael, Hi! I just came back from Britain last week. _ Well, Id better get back to my homework now. Bye. Cheers, Li PingAt the language clinicsAt the language clinics1.审题审题1)多余内
21、容要点：多余内容要点：2)信息整合不恰当信息整合不恰当(相同信息应相同信息应整合在一个信息块里)I took part in a speech, which theme is “ Experience UK” and I got the reputation of champion. I had a chance to participate in the activity of the tour of English Culture. What a pity, when we arrived in the beautiful late, it rained strongly, but for
22、tunately, I made many friends in this activity.旅英时间旅英时间10 10 月月22-3022-30日日参加活动者参加活动者2525位来自不同国家的中学生位来自不同国家的中学生去过的地方去过的地方伦敦伦敦(London)(London)、牛津、牛津(Oxford)(Oxford)、湖区、湖区(the Lake District)(the Lake District)最喜欢的地方及原最喜欢的地方及原因因伦敦：了解了许多英国的历史和文化伦敦：了解了许多英国的历史和文化牛津：看到了很多古老的图书馆牛津：看到了很多古老的图书馆最遗憾的事及原因最遗憾的事及原
23、因 湖区很美，但天气不好，下大雨湖区很美，但天气不好，下大雨最快乐的事最快乐的事结识了许多新朋友结识了许多新朋友Dear Michael, Hi! I just came back from Britain last week. _ Well, Id better get back to my homework now. Bye. Cheers, Li PingI had visited London, Oxford,During the trip, we have been/ gone to London,And I loved London and Oxford the best, bec
24、ause I have /had knew many English historys and culturesI liked the London most because I could learn many history and culture of England. 2)2)句子结构混乱句子结构混乱, ,中式英语现象严重中式英语现象严重There were 25 students who from different countries joined in the activity25 students (who were/came) from different countries
25、 joined in the activity2.2.语言表达错误较多语言表达错误较多1)1)动词时态误用或混乱：动词时态误用或混乱： During the trip, I had been to London, Oxford and theLake District and I loved London, and Oxford best. Because I have learned a lot of culture and history of England in London and visited many old library in Oxford. During the trip
26、, I travelled to London, Oxford and theLake District and I loved London, and Oxford best, because I learned a lot about the culture and history of England in London and visited many old libraries in Oxford. I liked London and Oxford best, I could learn many history and cultures of England in London,
27、 I could see many old library in Oxford.I liked London and Oxford best, because I learned much about the history and cultures of England in London, and I saw/visited many old libraries in Oxford.放在同一句号当中的两个句子之间一定要有放在同一句号当中的两个句子之间一定要有连词连词！3) 3) 连接词语运用不恰当连接词语运用不恰当However, the Lake District is very bea
28、utiful but the bad weather with heavy rained made me feel reglet. All in all, I still feel happy with making many new friends.Unfortunately,/To our regret,/ It was a pity that though the Lake District was beautiful, we couldnt enjoy the beautiful scenery there as it was raining heavily when we were
29、there. The most exciting thing for me in Britain was that I made a lot of friends there. The Lake District was so beautiful but the weather washeavily rain. /but the day was raining heavily. The Lake District was so beautiful but the weather wasbad as it was raining heavily. I was lucky enough to be
30、 one of the 25 students from many different countries to visit/ took a trip to the U.K. from October 22 to 30. I, together with 24 students from different countries travelled to Britain from October 22 to 30. From October 22 to 30, 25 students (who were/came) from different countries, including me p
31、aid a visit to Britain.We visited many places, such as London, Oxford and the Lake District.London was one of my favorites because I learned a lot about British history and culture and I also liked Oxford, where I saw many old libraries. London and Oxford were the two cities that I liked best becaus
32、e I learned a lot about British history and culture in London and I saw many old libraries in Oxford. London and Oxford were the two cities that I liked best because it was in the two cities that I learned a lot about British history and culture and saw many old libraries. Unfortunately,/To our regr
33、et,/ It was a pity that though the Lake District was beautiful, we couldnt enjoy the beautiful scenery there as it was raining heavily when we were there. The most exciting thing for me in Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.Dear Michael, Hi! I just came back from Britain last week. I was
34、 lucky enough to be one of the 25 students from many different countries to visit the U.K. from October 22 to 30. We visited many places, such as London, Oxford and the Lake District. London was one of my favorites because I learned a lot about British history and culture and I also liked Oxford, wh
35、ere I saw many old libraries. The lake District was beautiful, but it was a pity that it rained heavily when we were there. The most exciting thing for me in Britain was that I made a lot of friends there. Well, Id better get back to my homework now. Bye. Cheers, Li Ping假如你是李华假如你是李华,昨天学校为你们举办了昨天学校为你
36、们举办了18岁成人宣誓仪岁成人宣誓仪式式.请根据下列要点给你在美国的笔友发一封电子邮件请根据下列要点给你在美国的笔友发一封电子邮件,描述宣誓仪式过程并简述你的感受描述宣誓仪式过程并简述你的感受.要点要点:1.宣誓仪式宣誓仪式; 2.感谢家长和老师的培养和教育感谢家长和老师的培养和教育; 3.老师送贺卡老师送贺卡; 4.表演节目表演节目注意注意:1.邮件必须包括以上要点邮件必须包括以上要点,可适当发挥可适当发挥;开头开头,结尾结尾已为你写好已为你写好. 2.用五句话描述所有内容用五句话描述所有内容,并连成一篇短文并连成一篇短文.参考词汇参考词汇:宣誓宣誓make an oathWriting 2
37、Dear Tom,Its great to receive your e-mail. Now Id like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday._ Yours truly, Li Hua 1. 举办举办18岁成人宣誓岁成人宣誓仪式仪式1. Our school held a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday.2. A ceremony was held in our school for us to make an oath as g
38、rown-ups. 3. There was a ceremony in our school for4. A ceremony took place in our school for2. 18岁成人岁成人1. The grown-ups of 18 years old2. We, the grown-ups of 18 years old3. 宣誓宣誓1. We made an oath to show that we were grown-ups.2. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of
39、 duty.3. We made an oath, which meant that we were already adults and would have more duties. 4. 感激父母和老师感激父母和老师1.We thanked our parents who had brought us up, and the teachers who have been educating us.2.We showed / expressed our thanks to 3.We thanked our parents and teachers for what they had don
40、e for us.4.We were grateful to for all they had done for us.5. We were thankful to them for their work.5. 送贺卡送贺卡1. The teachers gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us.2. The teachers gave us congratulation cards.3. The teachers offered us cards of congratulations.4. From the teachers we go
41、t cards with (full of) their best wishes.7. 表演节目表演节目1. We put on/gave some wonderful performances.2. In the end, the ceremony was followed by some wonderful performances.3. The ceremony ended with wonderful performances given by the students. In the afternoon we held a grown-up ceremony for our comi
42、ng 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty/responsibility for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. After our teachers
43、gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us, we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. Never will I forget the day in my life, which is very important for us. 假设你叫李平，你所在学校的英语俱乐部将举行一个英语假设你叫李平，你所在学校的英语俱乐部将举行一个英语晚会。你准备邀请你的外国朋友晚会。你准备邀请你的外国朋友John与你一起参加。与你一起参加。写作内容写作内容请根据以下海报的内容，给请根据以下海报
44、的内容，给John写一封邀请信，信的开写一封邀请信，信的开头和结尾已给出。头和结尾已给出。写作要求写作要求只能使用只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。个句子表达全部的内容。 评分标准评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整、连贯。句子结构准确，信息内容完整、连贯。 英语晚会英语晚会时时 间：间：4月月15日晚日晚7点点30分分地地 点：英语俱乐部点：英语俱乐部活动内容：用英语聊天交流、观看来自不同班级的学生的活动内容：用英语聊天交流、观看来自不同班级的学生的表演；互相交换小礼物、结交朋友表演；互相交换小礼物、结交朋友提提 供：水果和饮料供：水果和饮料 建建 议：如果你喜欢的话，可自带食物议：如果你喜欢的
45、话，可自带食物相信大家会共同度过一个美好的时光相信大家会共同度过一个美好的时光Dear John, How is everything? Im writing to let you know about an English Evening and invite you to join us._ Im looking forward to your reply. Cheers, Li PingAt the language clinicsAt the language clinics1.审题审题1)遗漏内容要点：遗漏内容要点： 相信大家会共同度过一个美好的时光。相信大家会共同度过一个美好的时光
46、。I believe everyone will have a wonderful time at the English Evening.The English Evening was heldThe English Evening will hold /will be hold 2.2.语言表达错误较多语言表达错误较多1)1)动词时态动词时态/ /语态误语态误/ /错用：错用：2)2)主语不恰当：主语不恰当：It /The evening will provide fruits and drinksWe will provide fruits and drinks for free.Fru
47、its and drinks will be provided for free. 3 3）汉语式表达，不符英语表达习惯：）汉语式表达，不符英语表达习惯：看表演看表演see some performances互换礼物互换礼物change little gifts/ presents来自不同班级的学生来自不同班级的学生from different classes students4 4月月1515日晚日晚7 7点点3030分分On April 15th on 7:30Dear John, How is everything? Im writing to let you know about an
48、 English Evening and invite you to join us. The English Evening will start at 7:30pm on April 15th and will be held in the English club. We have quite a few activities planned such as chatting with each other in English and watching some performances by students from different classes. What is more,
49、 we are encouraging participants to exchange small gifts with each other and make friends as well. We will be providing some fruit and drinks for the evening, but we suggest you bring some food with you if you like. I believe everyone will have a wonderful time at the English Evening. Im looking for
50、ward to your reply. Cheers, Li Ping文字报道类的活动叙事文字报道类的活动叙事第一节第一节 基础写作基础写作( (共共1 1小题，满分小题，满分1515分分) ) 5 5月月1 1日，高二（日，高二（3 3）班的学生志愿者）班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和和 Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院（去阳光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）开展志愿者活动（送水果开展志愿者活动（送水果. .打扫打扫. .聊天等）。聊天等）。 写作内容写作内容 假如你是校英语报的记者，根据以上情况，按下列要点，假如你是校英语报的记者，根据以上情况，按下列要点，写一篇采访报道
