1、中考话题写作课中考话题写作课: Nature and Travel Nature and Travel 九年级上册九年级上册 Module 1 Wonders of the worldModule 1 Wonders of the world九年级上册九年级上册 Module 10 AustraliaModule 10 Australia( (Introducing Introducing a placea place to others to others ) ) a place ?country city park beachLearning aims: 1. 学会审题，合理构建地点类学会
2、审题，合理构建地点类文章结构文章结构。2. 学会学会连词成句连词成句。3. 学会适当学会适当添加连接词添加连接词，组句成篇。，组句成篇。Guessing game ( guess the name of a place )The Giants Causeway Its huge. There are about 40,000 rocks. Most of the rocks have six sides. It runs for several hundred metres on the coast of Northern Ireland.Victoria Falls Its in Afric
3、a. Its about 1,700 metres wide and 100 metres high. You can hear the loud noise from a few kilometres away.The Three Gorges Dam Its in China. Its a man-made wonder. Its about 2,300 metres long, 185 metres high and 15 metres high. It produces electricity.Australia They speak English. It is in the sou
4、thern part of the world. The football they like playing is oval (椭圆的）, not round. It is a country which rides on the sheeps back. It is famous for Ayers Rock and the Great Barrier Reef. It is in the centre of Australia. The colours of it change during the day. It is 348 metres high and 3.6 kilos lon
5、g. It is a huge rock. Ayers Rock You can watch plays and operas here. It has water on its three sides. It is like a sailing boat. It is a symbol of Sydney. Sydney Opera House a place ?location details ?what to see what to doName AustraliaLocationWhat to see What to do Famous for: in the southern par
6、t of the worldAyers Rock; Great Barrier Reef;Sheep American football; go to the beach to do water sports; drink grape wine; eat ham and beefPre-writing (10 minutes)Lets talk!Name the Sydney Opera HouseLocationWhat to see What to do It is like in the north of Sydneya sailing boat with water on three
7、sides watch plays and operas enjoy its beautiful shape Lets talk!Name Nanhu ParkLocationWhat to see What to do in the southeast of Huidong green trees; lakes take a walk take photos play table tennis; take exerciseLets talk!Name AustraliaLocationWhat to see What to do Famous for: in the southern par
8、t of the worldAyers Rock; Great Barrier Reef;Sheep; American football; go to the beach to do water sports; drink grape wine; eat ham and beef变变形形记记：如何把如何把表格表格变成变成小短文小短文？Australia is in the southern part of the world. It is famous for Ayers Rock, the Great Barrier Reef and millions of sheep. beginnin
9、gWe can play American football, go to the beach to do water sports, drink grape wine and eat ham and beef. bodyendingWelcome to Australia. I believe you will have a good time here.Hello! Everyone! My name is Tony. Today Id like to introduce my country to you.升升级级版版： Hello! Everyone! My name is Tony.
10、 Today Id like to introduce my country to you. Australia is in the southern part of the world. It is famous for Ayers Rock, the Great Barrier Reef and millions of sheep. We like playing American football very much. We also like going to the beach to do water sports such as surfing, swimming and divi
11、ng because we live near the sea. Grape wine is good, but the food I like most is ham and beef because they are very delicious. Welcome to Australia. I believe you will have a good time here. beginningbodyending升级标志：升级标志：also/ such as/ because/ butName XunliaoLocationWhat to seeWhat to do clear sea;
12、blue sky many visitors southwest of Huidong（惠东）（惠东） walk on the beach without shoesgo swimming/surfing/fishing have a BBQ enjoy fresh air Lets talk!Name XunliaoLocationWhat to seeWhat to do clear sea; blue sky many visitors southwest of Huidong（惠东）（惠东）go swimming/surfing/fishing have a BBQ enjoy fre
13、sh air While-writing: Practice 1Hello! My name is Ah Gui. Today Id like to introduce my hometown Xunliao to you. Xunliao is in the southeast of Huidong. It is very famous for its beautiful beach, clear sea and blue sky. Every year many visitors come here with their family and friends to have a vacat
14、ion. Every person can find his favourite things to do here. You can go swimming or go surfing, but if you want to stay out of water, it is a good idea to take photos while going for a walk on the white beach without shoes. It feels comfortable. At night, some people like to have a BBQ while others l
15、ike to set fireworks. It looks really beautiful. Welcome to Xunliao. I believe you will have a good time here. beginningbodyendingSample（示例（示例 范文）范文）Locationwhat to seewhat to do假如你是Li,惠东旅行社的一名志愿者，要向三位来惠东旅游的游客推荐合适的旅游地点（a place)。 A: Diana, 平时工作繁忙，只有半天休息时间。平时工作繁忙，只有半天休息时间。 B: Jackie, 初中学生，有一天休息时间。初中学生
16、，有一天休息时间。 C: Mike, 在中国工作的美国人，有两天休息时间。在中国工作的美国人，有两天休息时间。请选择其中一人(A，B 或C), 用英语写一封回信，不少于70词。内容包括：1.推荐旅游地点的名称及地理位置。（Name and Location）2.有什么可看的（what to see), 有什么可做的(what to do) ( (每种每种2-32-3件事情）件事情）。Writing practice_Dear , Im glad to hear that you are coming to visit Huidong. You only have day(s) off, so
17、here is my advice. beginningbodyendingYours,LiWhile-writing: Practice 2 bodyThird, Second , First ,Whats more 连接词连接词 Ending To sum up,Above all, In a word, In short,写作前：认真审题，划出要点写作时：注意要求，规范写作写作后：反复检查，追求完美 展示展示（show your passage） 自评（自评（check by yourself）Read your passage aloud, then check it byyourse
18、lf.1.要点齐了吗？2.句子结构对了吗？3.句子连贯吗？4.单词都写对了吗？5.有没错误的语法？6.书写整洁吗？大声朗读文章并自查是否符合以下要求。大声朗读文章并自查是否符合以下要求。Post-writing (10 minutes)第一档：第一档：12-15分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖所有所有的要点，表达清楚，的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有几乎没有语言错误。语言错误。第二档：第二档：11-12分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖所有所有的要点，表达清楚，的要点，表达清楚，但有但有少量少量语言错误。语言错误。 第三档：第三档：8-10分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖大部分大部分要点，表达要点，表达尚尚清楚清楚 ,但有但有一些
19、一些语言错误。语言错误。 （以上为及格线）（以上为及格线）第四档：第四档：4-7分分 内容涵盖内容涵盖部分部分要点，写出少量句子，要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。 第五档：第五档：0-3分分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。清楚。评分档次和要求：统一批改符号统一批改符号，例如：例如： 删除删除 插入插入 替代替代 佳句佳句 句子不通畅句子不通畅记住批改符号记住批改符号Look the book read1、批改符号2、内容要点和分数分布3、档次和标准 时态：时态：一般现在时一般现在时Beginning开头部分开头
20、部分EndingBody正文正文 （已给出部分）（已给出部分）（1分）分）（满分13分）其他（卷面书写，单词拼写及语法、其他（卷面书写，单词拼写及语法、过渡词）酌情加减分（过渡词）酌情加减分（3分）分）1 推荐旅游地点名称及位置推荐旅游地点名称及位置 （2分）分） 2 描述描述可看的可看的和和可做的可做的事事（每项至少（每项至少2点）（点）（1个点个点2分，分，4个点共个点共 8分）分）小组讨论互评，作文满分小组讨论互评，作文满分1515分分Beginning开头部分开头部分Body正文正文 Beginning开头部分开头部分EndingBody正文正文 Beginning开头部分开头部分Po
21、st-writing(10 minutes)EndingBody正文正文 Beginning开头部分开头部分3 祝愿旅途愉快祝愿旅途愉快 。 （1分）分）Dear, Im glad to hear that you are coming to visit Huidong. You only have one day off, so here is my advice. Xunliao is in the southeast of Huidong. It is very famous for its beautiful beach, clear sea and blue sky. Every y
22、ear many visitors come here with their family and friends to have a vacation. Every person can find his favourite things to do here. You can go swimming or go surfing, but if you want to stay out of water, it is a good idea to take photos while going for a walk on the white beach without shoes. It f
23、eels comfortable. At night, some people like to have a BBQ while others like to set fireworks. It looks really beautiful. Welcome to Xunliao. I believe you will have a good time here. SampleYours,Li In the writing lesson:I have learned_ 1. 请把课堂上所写的介绍巽寮旅游景点的短文修改后上交。请把课堂上所写的介绍巽寮旅游景点的短文修改后上交。2. 请请A层次学生按照游客层次学生按照游客C的情况，写封回信。的情况，写封回信。 请请B层次学生按照游客层次学生按照游客B的情况，写封回信。的情况，写封回信。 请请C层次学生按照游客层次学生按照游客A的情况，写封回信。的情况，写封回信。 请请D层次学生把范文照抄上交。层次学生把范文照抄上交。Homework （二选一）（二选一）
