1、How to write a How to write a betterbettercompositioncomposition Composition is a kind of pain. Its in the last corner of the paper,which makes me feel afraid. .What are your feelings about English compositions? 书面表达属书面表达属试题，是试题，是考查考查学生运用学生运用各项语法各项语法知识知识、正确进行书面表达的能力正确进行书面表达的能力以及善于以及善于理解情景提示的理解情景提示的内
2、容内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力抓住要点和中心思想的能力，是，是“压轴题压轴题”，属英，属英语考试的重要题型。能否把书面表达题型做好对于英语能语考试的重要题型。能否把书面表达题型做好对于英语能否考好非常重要。否考好非常重要。书面表达（共书面表达（共1 1题，满分题，满分1515分）分） 假设你是初三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下内容提示给孙校长写信申请举行以下活动。活动时间本周日上午8 : 0012 : 00活动地点太阳敬老院(Sun Old Peoples Home)活动理由老人疾病缠身，身心孤独，需要关爱活动内容（请你补充两条以上）注意：1.词数：80词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词
3、数）； 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 01一般现在时一般现在时本周日上午8 : 0012 : 0002Our class is planning to do some voluntary work from eight to twelve this Sunday morning. We will go to the Sun Old Peoples Home to help the old people who are suffering from illnesses and they are quite lonely.They need our love. 本周日上午8
4、 : 0012 : 00太阳敬老院(Sun Old Peoples Home)老人疾病缠身，身老人疾病缠身，身心孤独，需要关爱心孤独，需要关爱First of all, we will raise money, clothes and books for them. Secondly, we are going to sing songs and make a role play to make them glad and relaxed. Finally, we will take photos with them.活动内容：（请你补充两条以上）Dear Mr Wang, We are wr
5、iting to ask permission for our voluntary work. 。 。 。 。 。 。 。 。 。 。 Our class is planning to do some voluntary work from eight to twelve this Sunday morning. We will go to the Sun Old Peoples Home to help the old people who are suffering from illnesses and they are quite lonely. They really need our
6、 love. First of all, we will raise money, clothes and books for them. Secondly, we are going to sing some songs and make a role play to make them glad and relaxed. Finally, we will take photos with them. I hope we can get your permission and support. Thank you so much.Yours sincerely, Li HuaClass 1,
7、 Grade 9英语作文中常见的表达错误：英语作文中常见的表达错误：No. 1No.6No.5No.4No.3No.2名词单复数问题名词单复数问题主谓一致问题主谓一致问题时态和语态问题时态和语态问题ChinglishChinglish现象现象行文的逻辑问题行文的逻辑问题作文提升之道The The methods ofmethods of improving your improving your writingwriting01Our class are planning to do some voluntary work from eight to twelve this Sunday mo
8、rning.Our class is planning to do some voluntary work from eight to twelve this Sunday morning.本周日上午8 : 0012 : 0002Our class is planning to do some voluntary works from eight to twelve this Sunday morning.Our class is planning to do some voluntary work from eight to twelve this Sunday morning.本周日上午8
9、 : 0012 : 0003We will go to the Sun Old Peoples Home to help the old.We will go to the Sun Old Peoples Home to help the old people who are suffering from illnesses and they are very lonely.They really need our love. 太阳敬老院老人疾病缠身，身老人疾病缠身，身心孤独，需要关爱心孤独，需要关爱They are suffering from illnesses and they are
10、very lonely.高分建议一、 怎么把句子写“高级”添词原则 l、学会使用形容词。Secondly, we are going to sing some songs and make a role play to make them glad and relaxed.2、学会在名词后面加上定语从句。We will go to the Sun Old Peoples Home to help the old people who are suffering from illnesses and they are very lonely.高分建议3. 在“助系情之后，实义动词之前”加“副词”
11、They really need our love.4. 多使用短语Our class is planning to do some voluntary work from eight to twelve this Sunday morning. We will go to the Sun Old Peoples Home to help the old people who are suffering from illnesses and they are quite lonely. 高分建议二、 怎么把句子写“高级”换词原则1. good1. goodexcellent, excellen
12、t, fantastic, perfect, fantastic, perfect, attractive. attractive. 2. 2. thinkthinkbelieve, believe, in my opinion, in my opinion, I hold the opinion I hold the opinion that.that.高分建议3. like3. likebe fond of, be fond of, fall in love fall in love with. with. 4. want4. wantlook forward to doing look
13、forward to doing sth., sth., cant wait to do sth., cant wait to do sth., would like to do sth.would like to do sth.高分建议5. can5. canbe able to do sth.be able to do sth.6. cant 6. cant dodofail to do fail to do sth.sth.7. 7. shouldshouldought to do sth.,ought to do sth.,had better had better do do sth
14、.sth.高分建议8. very8. veryquite, reallyquite, really9. because 9. because ofofdue to, due to, as a result as a result of,of,10. so10. sothus,thus,therefore,therefore,as a resultas a result.宾宾 语语 从从 句句I hope we can get your permission and support.三、 怎么把句子写“高级”扩句原则We will go to the Sun Old Peoples Home t
15、o help the old people who are suffering from illnesses and they are very lonely.定语定语 从从 句句1.1.表示顺序：表示顺序：first, second, third, first of all, then, next, finally, at the same time, in the end, at last4.4.表示转折：表示转折：though, although, but, however3.3.表示因果表示因果: : as a result, therefore2.2.表示举例：表示举例：as for, such as, for example, for instance5.5.表示并列：表示并列：as well as, both and, whats more, not only. but also6.6.表示结论表示结论: :in a word, all in all, generally speaking四、 怎么把句子写“高级” 用好连接词连接词连接词谢谢听聆Practice makes it better
