1、1读后续写Continuation Writing武汉市第六中学 张岚2以2016年10月新高考首考试题为例阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started
2、 to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, , “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, , she turned around, hoping to see the
3、lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused s
4、he became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear
5、 water trickling ( (滴落滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it wo
6、uld lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she
7、 should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _3注意：注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为150左右左右；2. 至少使用至少使用5个短文个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为续写部分分为两段两段，每段的，每段的开头语开头语已为你写好；已为你写好；4. 读写完成后，请用下划线读写完成后，请用下划线
8、标出你所使用的关键词语标出你所使用的关键词语。评分参考：评分参考：阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：1.与所给短文及段落开头语的与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接衔接程度；程度；2.内容的内容的丰富性丰富性和对所给关键词语的和对所给关键词语的覆盖覆盖情况；情况；3.应用应用语法语法结构和结构和词汇词汇的丰富性和准确性；的丰富性和准确性；4.上下文的上下文的连贯性连贯性。41.Whats the style of the passage?A. Narration (记叙文)B. Exposition (说明文)C. Argumentation (议论文) whowhen wherewha
9、thowwhy2.Person(人称): First person? Second person? Third person? 3.Tense(时态): Past tense ? The simple present tense?Read for the clue of the story5Para( )Para( )Para( )1,2,3,45,6,78 who whenwherewhathow Read for ComprehensionJane & Tom (a couple)One weekend in JulyIn a forestquarrelledwalked awaygot
10、lostheard a helicoptertake off yellow blouseIn vain.?angry,scaredexcited,helpless?6Decide the theme for the storyTrue love never failsCherish what you haveSolve the problems positivelyNever give up when in trouble(A)(B)(C)(D)7Decide the theme for the storyTrue love never failsCherish what you haveSo
11、lve the problems positivelyNever give up when in trouble(A)(B)(C)(D)My theme for the story: No matter how difficult it was, their love would lead the way for them. 8 Predict the DevelopmentPara. 7But no more helicopters came and it was dark.Para. 8It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Time: the night b
12、eforesleptFeeling: disappointedFind a place to sleeptry to get out9 separatePara7: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Para 8: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. whowhenwherewhat / howJanenightin the forest how Jane felt what Jane did darkdaybreakwhowhenwherewhat / howJaneTom
13、dayin the forest or other places how Jane survived how they feltreunited disappointed tiredwalk, find, climb, stop, sleepTom, helicopter, find, tell, love, hug happy Draw a Mind-MapPlots: logical meaningful positive10 Classify the ten words into six groupsJane, Tom, lake, walked, climbed, at a dista
14、nce, stream, To her great joy, helicopter, yellow blouseChoose at least five out of ten words and expressionslake, stream, helicopter, yellow blouseJane, Tom walked, climbedtime lapse （时间推进）at a distanceTo her great joyan object （物线）a character （人线）an event （事线）spatial alternation （空间变换）authors thou
15、ghts &emotions （作者的思想感情）11 Some steps to analyze before Continuation :1. Find the style、person、tense、theme of the passage 2. Read for Comprehension3. Predict the Development4. Draw a Mind-Map for the following two paragraphs5. Choose at least five out of ten words and expressionsan object、a characte
16、r、an event、time lapse、spatial alternation、authors thoughts &emotions 12GuidanceBe well connected to the given passageand the beginnings of the two paragraphs.Be well organized with at least 5 of the 10 given underlined words.Make sure the story develops logically and reasonably.Never ignore the basi
17、c tone of the article.13Write the continuation阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quar
18、rel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, , “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, , she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To
19、 her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she becam
20、e. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water t
21、rickling ( (滴落滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead
22、 her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should
23、go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _14Evaluation15Summary How to complete a narrative articleStep one: thorough reading(who; when; where; what; why; how)Step two: logical plotting(the plot, the
24、underlined words, the given two sentences, reasonable ending)Step three: vivid writing (linking words, details, sentence structures)16Homework Book 2 Page 14: The story of Atlantaunderlined words: run, rules, foolish, marry, fast, kill, princess, Goddess of love, apples, front. 注意：注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为所续
25、写短文的词数应为150左右左右；2. 至少使用至少使用5个短文个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为续写部分分为两段两段，每段的，每段的开头语开头语已为你写好；已为你写好；4. 读写完成后，请用下划线读写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 When the race started Hippomenes ran fast, but Atlanta ran even faster. .Paragraph 2When she finally caught up with Hippomenes the second time, he threw the third and last apple. .17Thank you!
