1、GOING POSITVIEReading for Reading for organizationorganizationPara. 1Para. 2Para.3changes in thinking and actionsimprovement in wellnessgeneral statement of problemWriting tip 1: The text is well-organised with these linking wordsWriting tip 1: The text is well-organised with these linking words. .w
2、hats more, besides,for one thing, for anotherfirstly, secondly,lastlyWhat problem did Kayla have in the past?What problem did Kayla have in the past?She was worried about her appearance and weight.A. humorous A. humorous B. serious B. serious C. formalC. formal D. casualD. casualI tried no fat, low-
3、fat, 5:2, only bananas, no bananas I almost went bananas, too.What is Kaylas tone of telling her What is Kaylas tone of telling her problems?problems?Become crazy5:2 diet: to eat normally for 5 days of the week, but only eat very little on the other two days.A turning pointWhat made her change her m
4、ind?How does the author show her positive changes? A. By giving examples. B. By asking questions. C. By showing differences. D. By listing some data.Writing tip 2: Describe the positive changes Writing tip 2: Describe the positive changes by making comparison.by making comparison.= make a comparison
5、(= make a comparison(作比较作比较) )Reading for Reading for organizationorganizationWhat are the differences between the past and the What are the differences between the past and the present?present?The pastThe past worried about _ and tried _._myself withactresses and models. myweightevery new diet The
6、presentThe present think about _ _. _ _. made a list of things I liked about myselffitnessrather than weightwant to _or do 30_healthy foods to my mealsChanges in life:She became both happier and healthierChanges in thinking waysChanges in actionswanted to _three kilos _the foods I enjoyed loserunpus
7、h-upsaddcut outcomparedUnderline the words and phrases used in the text to show differences.rather than,instead ofbut,insteadReading for languageReading for languagehowever/though, not but, the difference is, on the other handmore expressions:Then I read an article that said instead of asking “Am I
8、fat?” I should be asking “Am I fit?” I had no idea a letter could make such a difference! Once I started thinking about fitness rather than weight, things began to change. Instead of saying “I want to lose three kilos”, I would say “I want to run two kilometres in eight minutes” or “I want to be abl
9、e to do 30 push-ups”. Rather than cutting out the foods I enjoyed, I added healthy foods to my meals. I could still have a burger now and then, but I would add a salad or an apple.Finally, I stopped comparing myself with actresses and models and looking for things that were wrong with my face or bod
10、y. Instead, I made a list of the things I liked about myself. By being positive about myself and my body, I became both happier and healthier. Writing tip 3: Make a comparison with these useful expressions.Writing tip 3: Make a comparison with these useful expressions.Now I start to walk to work _ d
11、riving to work.Choose the proper words or phrases to express the same meaning.Now I start to walk to work _ drive to work.Now I dont drive to work. _, I start to walk to work.I used to drive to work . Now I start to walk to work.rather thanInsteadinstead ofinstead, rather than, instead ofExpress the
12、 same meaning with the given words below.I put more vegetables than meat in my diet .instead ofrather thannot.butThe difference isI put more vegetables rather than meat in my diet. I do not put much meat but more vegetables in my diet.The difference is that there are more vegetables than meat in my
13、diet.I put more vegetables instead of meat in my diet .Express the same meaning with the given words below.Many peoples problems are like mine.similarsamealikehave.in commonMany people have the same problems as mine.Many people and I have problems alike.Many people have problems in common with me.Ma
14、ny peoples problems are similar to mine.The pastThe presentSumming upSumming upGoing Positiverather than, instead of, but,insteadTip 1: Describe the positive changes Tip 1: Describe the positive changes by making comparison.by making comparison.Tip 2: Make a comparison with these useful expressions.
15、Tip 2: Make a comparison with these useful expressions.Tip 3: Make the text well-organised with linking wordsTip 3: Make the text well-organised with linking words. .languagecontent+to live a healthy life both physically and mentally.Cathyvoice your opinionvoice your opinionThe pastThe presentalways
16、 wanted to be the top student even though it is hardalways worried about my score after each examstudy day and night think it is a waste of time doing exercisehardly talk with classmates feel stressed, cant sleep well,worse still, my grade dropped Please help Cathy live a healthy life both physicall
17、y and mentally.rather than,instead of,but,instead,then, finally _ always wanting to be the top student, Cathy should have a peaceful mind. _, try to improve her study methods. _ study day and night, she should spare time to do exercise which would build up her body and improve her memory. Dont worry
18、 about scores after each exam. _, she could make good preparations before exams. She could still keep the habit of being alone , _ good relationship with classmates would benefit her studies. _, by being positive about score and stress, Cathy would become happier and healthier in body and mind.rathe
19、r than, instead of, but,instead, then, finallyInstead of Rather thanInsteadbutThenFinallySampleSample书面表达123Start with a general statement about the topic and your situaition.Tell the reader about how and why you changed or want to change.Describe the changes and compare the possible results.假定你是高中生
20、李华,你校的英语俱乐部举行了一次演讲比赛,内容是介绍自己如何通过适当的锻炼和饮食获得健康了的体魄。请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿:4Tell the reader how the changeds have improved or will improve your life.Start with a general statement about the topic and your situation.1Hello, guys, Im Lihua. Im honored to have the chance to share my story of keeping fit with you.
21、 I believe many students may have similar experience with me. Since I entered senior high school, I have so much homework to do and I was always feeling sleepy and exhausted in class. My weight kept going up all the time until someone called me “Fatty” .Tell the reader about how and why you changed
22、or want to change.2I couldnt help feeling worried about myself. So I went to my head teacher to ask for his advice. He suggested that I take a jogging for half an hour after class every afternoon. What surprised me was that he even organized a group with several of my classmates who had the same pro
23、blem as mine. We keep jogging every afternoon and we enjoy each others company and encouragement. We cut down the fat in our diet and added more fruit and vegetables to it. Most importantly, we drink water instead of sodas.Describe the changes and compare the possible results.3Our efforts are not sp
24、ent in vain. We stopped putting on weight and, even began to lose it. We feel more energetic and less sleepy in class. What a cheerful turn! Tell the reader how the changes have improved or will improve your life.4Now I feel a lot more confident.I even won a prize in the schools sports meet. This in
25、spires me to determine to make jogging my life-time hobby. Time permitting, Ill try more forms of sports in the future. So guys, try some sports and youll fall in love with them. Try to write a speech draft with the sample above.Hello, guys, Im _. Im honored to have the chance to share my story of k
26、eeping fit with you. I believe many students may have similar experience with me. Since I entered senior high school,(problem 1) and I was always (problem 2). (Problem 3).I couldnt help feeling worried about myself. So (solutions). (Detail 1). (Detail 2). (Detail 3).Our efforts are not spent in vain. We stopped _ and even began to _. We feel more _ and less _. What a cheerful turn! Now,I (result 1).(Result 2).(Result 3).Time permitting, Ill try more forms of sports in the future. So guys, try some sports and youll fall in love with them.