1、英语微写作教学可以实践的几种形式01.翻译句子翻译句子是最常见也是最简单粗暴的方式,一般是给出一个句子的中文,并在后面给出可能用到的句式或者技巧。例如:制作爆米花似乎比他们想的要难得多。(动名词作主语)Makingpopcornseemedmuchmoredifficultthantheyhadthought.(2020新高考全国I,读后续写)02.仿写句子仿写句子,类似于我们通常说的依葫芦画瓢。我们可以给出一个例句,然后学生模仿进行写作。例如:例句:SofrightenedwasJanethatshedidntdaretosleep.(2016,浙江)仿写:我是如此的害怕以至于我在马背上大声
2、地尖叫。(2018-6月浙江)SofrightenedwasIthatIscreamedatthetopofmyvoiceonthebackofthehorse.例句:Itoccurredtomethatthebearmightbeattractedbythesmellofourgarlicbread.(2020浙江)仿写:John突然想到他们可以制作爆米花来让Bernard去卖.(2020新高考全国I)SuddenlyitoccurredtoJohnthattheycouldmakepopcornforBernardtosell.03.改写句子改写句子,相当于句式的升级,将原有的句子用更高级
3、的方式表达出来。例如:原句:Becauseallofmyfriendswereopposedtomyplan,Icouldntresistsobbingsadly.改写:Withallofmyfriendsopposedtomyplanjcouldntresistsobbingsadly.(用with复合结构改写)原句:Hewassonervousthathefelthistonguetiedandpalmssweating.改写:Sonervouswashethathefelthistonguetiedandpalmssweating.(运用倒装句改写)04.扩写句子扩写句子是指在学生写的过
4、于简单的句子上添枝加叶,让句子内容更丰富。此处引用网络流传的一个经典扩写例句:原句:Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.扩写:Curiousandexcited,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.(力口形容词)Withouthesitation,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.(加介词短语)Screamingwithexcitement,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.(力口分词做状语)Withhermouthwideopen,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.(力口with的复合结构)The
5、girlunwrappedhergiftbox,whichshehadbeenlookingforwardto.(加定语从句)05彳散场景写作在2022年年初参加飕记英语孙三五老师的第一次心灵鸡汤编写,对精选文章的处理分为四部分:文章梗概、生词识记、佳句积累和微写作。其中微写作指的是设计一个和文章中一样的微场景,并把文章中积累的佳句尽可能用上。以下是我的两篇作业中的微场景写作。请描写一个母子在人群中相拥的场景。Ispreadmyarms,invitingAaronintoahug,andhesnuggledin.Ilookedathimthroughmistyeyesandsmiled,tha
6、nkfulforsomuchatthatmoment.Aaronlookedupatme,hisbrowneyesshining.TheshoutsandmurmursofthecrowdfadedawayasIfocusedonmyboy.请描写一位母亲睹物思人而后心生希望的场景。Clutchingthebutterflytomyachingchest,thetearsstreameddownmyfaceasIremembered.Vividimagesofthedaymyeight-year-oldsonpresentedthebutterflypinhedmadeformerushedtomind.However,thebutterflyremindedmeofthenewlifethatawaitedme.Nomatterwhathappened,Ishouldletgoofthepastandguidemyselfwithhope.NowwhenIwearthebutterfly,itisasymbolofvictoryoverdeathandanewlifenotjustforMark,butformeaswell.