1、英语24字整体教学法Section Reading for Writing有关节日经历的记叙文本单元的写作项目是阅读一篇关于参加“那达慕”大会的经历的文章后，写一篇有关节日经历的记叙文。.Prewriting()Learning to write after the modelMY AMAZING NAADAM EXPERIENCEI experienced the Naadam Festival in Chinas Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year.The festival falls on the f
2、ourth day of the sixth month of the lunar calendar，usually lasting for three days.Naadam means “games” in Mongolian，and it is represented by three events：horse racing，wrestling，and archery，which are all so exciting to watch！On the first day，I set off to the games early with my friend Burin.I saw a l
3、ot of people wearing fancy Mongolian robes.Some were feeding their horses，some were practising archery，and others were chatting or taking photographs.Burin told me that Mongolians travel every year from near and far to attend the festival，just as their ancestors had done for centuries.After the open
4、ing ceremony and some amazing performances，the wrestling competition began.Mongolian wrestling is different from the wrestling in the Olympic Games.There are no rounds，and wrestlers are not separated by weight.The wrestler loses if any part of his body above his knee touches the ground.After singing
5、 some songs，the competitors danced onto the green field，waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles.I was quite moved by their show of strength and grace.I absolutely enjoyed the archery，too，but the horse races were my favourite part.However，I was surprised to see that the riders were boys a
6、nd girls! I heard it is because children are lighter and the horse can run faster and farther.At first，I was a little worried about the childrens safety，but Burin said，“Dont worry.Theyve been riding horses all their lives.Theyll be just fine.” That was the moment I started to understand why people s
7、ay “Horses are at the heart of Mongolian culture.”Im finally back home now，feeling really tired，but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it.He invited me back for the winter to stay in a traditional Mongolian tent and eat hot pot.I cant wait！篇章结构Opening paragraph：State the topic.What：
8、the Naadam FestivalWhere：in Chinas Inner Mongolia Autonomous RegionWhen：this yearFirst Body Paragraph：Describe the start of the festival and the surroundings.Second Body Paragraph：Describe in detail the festival activities.Activities：the wrestling competition，some songs，danceThird Body Paragraph：Des
9、cribe in detail the festival activities.Activities：the archery，the horse racesClosing Paragraph：Give a brief summary of the experience.()Preparation for writingwords and phrasesamusement n娱乐celebration n庆祝；庆祝会ceremony n典礼；仪式，礼节 champion n冠军cheer v& n欢呼，喝彩 compete vi.比赛，竞赛competition n竞争；竞赛 concert n
10、音乐会；演奏会event n事件；大事 feast n盛宴，宴会festival n节日；庆祝活动 firework n烟火 (pl.) 烟火表演match vt.使相配 n比赛，竞赛 participate vi.参加，参与be_on_holiday/leave/vacation在度假 dress_up穿上盛装；乔装打扮fall_on_(some_day)(节日等)是在(某天) look_forward_to期望，期待，盼望on_special_occasions在特殊场合 set_off_fireworks燃放鞭炮.Whilewriting假如你是May，在刚刚过去的春节里，你应邀前往中国
11、与笔友一起欢度中国年。请你用英语写一篇100词左右的短文来记录这一段难得的异国经历和感受。内容包括：1春节期间你们参加了什么活动；2谈谈你的感受。Step 1List the outline of the passage.Paragraph 1：I_was_invited_to_enjoy_the_Spring_Festival.Paragraph 2：Describe_the_experience_in_detail.Paragraph 3：Brief_summary_and_the_feelings.Step 2List the words，phrases and sentences.1W
12、ords and phrasespleased adj.高兴的；满意的invite vt. 邀请enjoyable adj. 愉快的；快乐的explore_a_foreign_culture 探索外国文化a_special_occasion 一个特殊的场合get_together 聚会； 联欢traditional_foods 传统食品participate_in 参加unique_culture_and_attractive_scenery 独特的文化和迷人的风景unforgettable adj. (经历)难以忘怀的；不会被遗忘的2Sentences很高兴，我的一个中国笔友邀请我和她一起度
13、过了上一个春节。I_was_pleased_that_one_of_my_pen_pals_in_China_invited_me_to_stay_with_her_during_the_past_Spring_Festival.中国的春节是中国家庭团聚的特殊日子，所以我们一起拜访了她的一些家人和亲戚。(so)The_Spring_Festival_in_China_is_a_special_occasion_for_Chinese_families_to_get_together_so_we_visited_some_of_her_families_and_relatives_togethe
14、r.此外，我们试吃了一些传统食物，看了舞龙舞狮，并参加了一些其他的庆祝活动，如庙会。(besides，such as)Besides，we_tried_some_traditional_foods，watched_Dragon_and_Lion_dance_and_participated_in_some_other_celebration_activities_such_as_a_temple_fair.在我看来，探索外国文化确实值得。(worthwhile)In_my_point_of_view，its_indeed_worthwhile_to_explore_a_foreign_cult
15、ure.Step 3Draft the passage by using the following words.I was so pleased that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival.That was really an enjoyable and unforgettable experience for me.The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese famil
16、ies to get together so we visited some of her families and relatives together.Besides，we tried some traditional foods，watched Dragon and Lion dance and participated in some other celebration activities such as a temple fair.Greatly impressed by Chinese unique culture and attractive scenery，I have kn
17、own further about China.In my point of view，its indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.Postwritingpolishing the passageExchange your passage with your partner and pay attention to the following points.1.Does the writer describe his experience in detail?2.Does the writer show his feelings in
18、the passage?3.Is the text wellorganised?4.Are there any grammar or spelling mistakes?5.Does the writer use correct punctuations？亮点表达1As Teachers Day was approaching，our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year.随着教师节的临近，今年为了换一种方式来庆祝这个重要的日子，我们班决定举办一场晚会。2The M
19、idAutumn Festival is a traditional festival of China，which is actually a day for family reunion.中秋节是中国的传统节日，实际上是家人团聚的日子。3On the Eve of the Spring Festival，firstly，family members get together and have big meals.Secondly，they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.在除夕，家庭成员首先聚在一起吃大餐，然后他们观看电视上的春节联欢晚会。4It
20、is said that TombSweeping Day，which falls on April 5th，has a history of several thousand years.4月5日是清明节，据说它有几千年的历史。5After the meal they watch TV until the clock strikes twelve.饭后他们看电视一直到12点。6This will be an unforgettable experience.这将是一段难忘的经历。7Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the near
21、by nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.我想邀请你下周六和我们一起去附近的敬老院过重阳节。8Well also spend some time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy.我们也会花一些时间在一起唱歌，跳舞和玩游戏，我们希望能让他们开心。写作技巧在写作时要注意以下几点：1仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息。该写作要明确以下要点：春节期间你们参加了什么活动；谈谈你的感受。2提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定的逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。本文主要使用过去时。4注意使用高级词汇和句式，增加文章的亮点。名师团队助你一臂之力
