1、书面表达之细节拓展书面表达之细节拓展（detail development）习作一习作一withofwhen添加添加条件条件添加添加实例实例习作二习作二添加添加实例实例添加形添加形容词容词添加添加实例实例定语定语从句从句过渡过渡句句合理增加细节，提升书面表达水平合理增加细节，提升书面表达水平1.(2018全国)校宣传栏发布一则通知请同学们观看英文短片Growing Together.In order to have a _ understanding of our school, a/an _ English short movie will be shown. Here are some_
2、details about it.2.(2017全国) 教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。In the class, you will learn Tang Poetry, which is _ loved by Chinese. Youd better make_ preparations before class方法一：方法一：添形加副，或添加同位语，渲染添形加副，或添加同位语，渲染 相关信息的神态、动作、背景等。相关信息的神态、动作、背景等。better/furtheroutstanding/vivid/meaningfulrelevantdeeplyfull/enough3. (20
3、16全国) 李华想做兼职，请外教帮忙修改申请资料的文字和格式。I think its a_ challenge to me and I can get some _ experience so that I can_ adapt to the change of the society. new/bigvaluable/professionalbetter4.(2017全国) Since you have studied here for some time, you are likely to know that the table tennis ,_(中国最流行的运动), plays a
4、vital part in our life.5.(2015全国) The Double Ninth Festival, _(一个专属老人的特殊节日)，is approaching.the most popular sports in China a special day for the eldly1.中秋赏月。If weather permitted/ Weather permitting（增加条件状语）, they will go out of the house to enjoy the bright moonlight，talking about something pleasant
5、.(增加伴随状语增加伴随状语)方法二：方法二：添加与所给信息的有关原因，结添加与所给信息的有关原因，结 果，条件，方式，目的等状语。果，条件，方式，目的等状语。2.(2018全国) 向英国朋友Peter介绍学校学生体育运动情况。Thanks to the stadium, my school finds it possible to hold a variety of sports activities. As for me, however, I particularly like basketball because it presents an effective way to stre
6、ngthen my body and mind. （增加原因状（增加原因状语）语） 3.(2016全国)李华想做兼职，请外教帮忙修改申请资料的文字和格式。(1)In order to (为了获得一些实践经验)，I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company.（增加目的状语）（增加目的状语）(2)I have finished my job application but (这是我第一次写申请)，so Im not sure about the words and formats. Therefore, Im
7、writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help.(增加原因增加原因状语状语)get some practical experienceits the first time that I have written an application 4. (2015全国)校“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的美文，向美国朋友Peter写信约稿。You can write anything relevant (只要是积极向上的的).（增加条件增加条件状语）状语）positive.as long as its 5. (2013全
8、国) 李华的叔叔李明去美国，请求笔友Peter接机。Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to the hotel because (这是他第一次去美国)? (增加原因状语增加原因状语)its his first visit to U.S.1.我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use paper bags
9、instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use products and save energy.方法三：方法三：增加实例说明，使抽象表达具体增加实例说明，使抽象表达具体 化，常用化，常用for example, such as等。等。2.(2017 浙江)邀请外教Mr. Hall来家里过春节。Spring Festival plays a significant role in China, so different kinds of activities will add a unique flavor to the festival.
10、For example, well （放烟花）， （发红包）to each other and （聚餐）.set off fireworksgive lucky moneyhave dinnier together3. (2015全国) 邀请外教Lucy一同前往敬老院看望老人。Besides, well spend some fun time together putting on performances such as (唱歌跳舞及其他).4.(2014江西)母校组织新生演讲，内容包含“学会做人”。In addition, we should learn how to get along
11、well with others. For example，I my teachers and my classmates. (我尊重老师，并喜欢帮助同学。)singing, dancingrespectlikes to helpand so on1.(2018全国) 校宣传栏发布通知请同学们观看英文短片Growing Together.As we all expect, the movie is about our beloved school, which will be .(不仅有意义而且有趣)2.(2017全国) 邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸艺术展。Anyone who is i
12、nterested in it is welcome to visit it. I know you (感兴趣)Chinese culture and you (擅长)paper cutting.方法四：方法四：抒发感受，作出评价，引起兴趣抒发感受，作出评价，引起兴趣 或共鸣。或共鸣。meaningful and interestinghave much interest inare good at3.(2016全国) 请英国朋友Peter提供作品，协助校摄影俱乐部将举办的摄影展。Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.
13、I know you take good pictures and (总是为保护环境做些事情).4.(2015全国) 邀请外教Lucy一同前往敬老院看望老人。Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope_.(能使他们开心)you always do something for environmental protectioncan make them happy(求职信) I would appreciate it if(邀请信) Looking forward
14、to your coming.(感谢信) I sincerely thank you again for your generous help.(建议信) I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions helpful/useful.(投诉信) Ill be glad if you could have this matter settled by the end of(致歉信) I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apolog
15、ies.方法五：方法五：补充功能性语言。补充功能性语言。 课堂练习课堂练习假定你叫李华，是高一(15)班的班长，计划和同学们在儿童节那天去儿童福利院(Children Welfare Institute)献爱心。请你给外教Kate写一封邮件，邀请她一同前往。要点如下：1. 出发与返回时间。2. 活动：赠送礼物、表演节目、玩游戏等。3. 邀请对方参加的原因以及询问对方的意向。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 思考：思考：你能运用多少种方法去增加细节？你能运用多少种方法去增加细节？*功能性语言功能性语言1. 出发与返回时间。2. 活动：赠送礼物、表演节目、玩游戏等。3. 邀请对方参加的原因 假设你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Bob打算练中文毛笔字，他来信向你请教如何练好毛笔字。请你给他写封信，提供一些建议。要点如下：1.支持他练毛笔字；2.列举注意事项（选择字帖，注意姿势，模仿视频，贵在坚持）；3.相信他会练好。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。课后作业课后作业
