1、 Period 4 Reading for WritingWriting a speech1. To obtain and sort out the changes and feelings of Sarah from her speech;2. To identify the rhetorical devices and the outline presented in Sarahs speech;3. To create a speech about how music can change a persons life.What do you find about Sarah in th
2、e picture? Where? What? How? Look and ThinkSarah Williams Look and ThinkShe may be in hospital; listening to music ; optimistic and ; Match the main idea with the paragraphs.Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2 Paragraph 3 Paragraph 4 Paragraph 5 Introduce herself and the topic of the speech Saras personal exper
3、ienceHow music helps her during her difficult timeSaras advice to othersThe endingFast reading Detailed readingRead the speech and answer the questions. 1. What was Sarahs problem? 3. What is her advice to others?2. How did music help her during her difficult time?1. What was Sarahs problem? Sarah h
4、ad a serious disease which was difficult to cure.It made her feel much better because it is the “medicine of the mind”.2. How did music help her during her difficult time?3. What is her advice to others? Her advice to others is to use music to help when you have problems.Read and ThinkThink and Shar
5、eWhat are the characteristics of the language that the author uses to introduce her story and her feelings? Straightforward Easy to understand Rhetorical devices used修辞手法修辞手法 设问设问 Rhetorical question 引用引用 Quote 明喻明喻 Simile 暗喻暗喻 Metaphor 重复重复 Repetition 拟人拟人 PersonificationThink and ShareWhat rhetori
6、cal devices does the author use?rhetorical questionA A. Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all?Match the names of rhetorical devices to the lettered sentences in the speech. Study the Language FeaturesmetaphorCC.It was the rock I leant on to become strong and t
7、o get through those hard times.quoteBB.John A. Logan said, “Music is the medicine of the mind.” personificationCC.It became my best friend. It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.repetitionAA.Music gave me happiness. Music gave me strength and brought me relief. Moreover, mu
8、sic gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.simileBB.When I listen to music, it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind. vivid beautiful expressiveThink and ShareWhy does the author use these rhetorical devices?Think of ways that people experience music, and how music can help people. Ways peop
9、le experience music listening to a piece of music or a songHow music can help people share similar feelings bring about happiness make listeners strong in mind Use what you have learnt to write a speech about how music can change a persons life. Think and WriteFill in the blanks below with some of t
10、he rhetorical devices you hope to use in your speech. Think and Write Metaphor: Music is my guide. Personification: Music is like an old friend comforting me a lot.“Where words fail, music speaks.”Hans Christian Anderson Quote: said,1.Music helps me remember how much I miss my grandmother. 2.It help
11、s me remember all the great times we had. 3.It helps me be grateful for that time together. Repetition: Music makes/gives/helps me/him/her Simile (verb+like): Music is like a special language. heard a piece of music and remembered an important Rhetorical question:time in your life?Have you ever Comp
12、lete outline and draft your speech. Introduce yourself. Give the topic of your speech. Write about your experience with music all the experience of someone you know. Write about how music made you him or her feel. Relate your/his/her experience to the audience. Close The speech. 1. Know the structur
13、e of a speech.Greeting；the theme of the speechRaise the issue;give examples;clarify the reasons make a summary;draw a conclusion;express thanks三段三段 首段：a.开始时对听众的称呼语最常用的是Ladies and gentlemen,Good morning .。还有 Fellow students, Honored guests,等等。b. 说明演讲的话题。 主体：提出论题，抛出问题；吸引观众，结合自身经历引出演讲话题 尾段：总结演讲内容，提出期望，
14、表示感谢。2. Learn how to write a speech. 演讲稿常用句式：演讲稿常用句式：Its so nice to see all of you here. I feel honored to have the opportunity to give/ make/deliver you a speech on/ about. Its a great pleasure for me to speak here. The topic of my speech is _.Thank you for giving me this opportunity to speak about
15、 On behalf of , I want to thank you for inviting us to What I am going to talk about today is Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you todayWe sincerely hope that you will have a wonderful time tonight.Thank you for your attention! 3. Write a speech about how m
16、usic can change a persons life1. 审题定调演讲稿是一种实用性比较强的文体，它的特点主要有内容上的客观性，情感上的说服性，特定情境性和口语化。演讲稿一般式是第一人称，多用实词和短句，少用结构复杂的长难句。2. 谋篇布局内容可以分为四部分:首段:表明写作意图,提出话题：音乐的力量胜过文字;主体:举例阐述理由; 进行论证观点；结尾:得出结论，表示感谢。3. Speech template 演讲稿模板 Good morning, everyone, Its so nice to see all of you here. I feel honored to have th
17、e opportunity to give/ make/deliver you a speech on/ about. (打招呼；引出话题) Here are some reasons. First of all_. Besides, _last but not least_./ To begin with,_. Secondly,_. Whats more,_. As far as I am concerned/ In my opinion,_ .(提出论题，论证观点) From what have been discussed above, we can safely draw the c
18、onclusion that _(总结演讲内容，得出结论) Thank for your attention.(表示感谢)4. 遣词造句（1）遣词遣词_音乐的力量音乐的力量 _ 感到沮丧感到沮丧 _ 一首古典音乐一首古典音乐 _ 缓解疲劳缓解疲劳 _ 让某人想起让某人想起 _ 对对充满感激充满感激 _ 而且而且 the power of musicfeel depresseda piece of classical relieve tireness remind sb of whats more be grateful for _ 对对有好处有好处_ 接触音乐接触音乐（2）造句）造句我很荣幸能
19、有机会为大家做一个关于音乐胜于文字的力量的演讲。我很荣幸能有机会为大家做一个关于音乐胜于文字的力量的演讲。I feel honored to have the opportunity to deliver you a speech _.我的祖母去世了，从那时起音乐帮助我度过难关。我的祖母去世了，从那时起音乐帮助我度过难关。My grandmother passed away and music has _ since then. be of benefit tohave access to musicon the power of music over wordshelped me cope
20、有时语言无法表达我们的感受，但音乐可以。有时语言无法表达我们的感受，但音乐可以。Sometimes _ what were feeling, but music can.音乐就像一种每个人都能理解的特殊语言。音乐就像一种每个人都能理解的特殊语言。Music is like a special language _.The piece is like an old friend _when I hear it. 这首音乐就像一个老朋友在安慰我。这首音乐就像一个老朋友在安慰我。words fails to conveythat everyone can understandcomforting m
21、e （2）造句）造句知道你现在过得很糟糕，我很抱歉。知道你现在过得很糟糕，我很抱歉。Im sorry to know that . 事实上，每个人都会有这样一个事情看起来不对劲的时期，所以你不用过度担事实上，每个人都会有这样一个事情看起来不对劲的时期，所以你不用过度担心。（心。（when 引导时间状语从句、引导时间状语从句、so 引导原因状语从句）引导原因状语从句）The truth is everyone will have one of those periods , so .重要的是学会控制你的脾气，为的是你就不会做任何你会后悔的事或说任何你重要的是学会控制你的脾气，为的是你就不会做任何
22、你会后悔的事或说任何你会后悔的话。（不定式作表语和会后悔的话。（不定式作表语和so that引导目的状语从句）引导目的状语从句）The important thing is youll regret.youre having such a bad time at the momentwhen things seem to be wrong you dont have to worry so much to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything5.完美完美成篇成篇Good moring, my de
23、ar classmates, I feel honored to have the opportunity to deliver you a speech on the power of music over words. Two years ago, my grandmother passed away and music has helped me cope since then. Sometimes words fails to convey what were feeling, but music can. As Hans Christian Anderson once said, “
24、Where words fail, music speaks.” Music is like a special language that everyone can understand. Have you ever heard a piece of music and remembered an important time in your life? Perhaps when something important happened, or when you felt really happy or sad. I feel this way about a piece of classi
25、cal music by Eric Satie called ”Gymnopdie No.1”. It reminds me of my grandmother. It is like an old friend comforting me when I hear it. This music helps me remember how much I miss her. It helps me remember all the great times we had. And music helps me be grateful for that time together. If you st
26、ruggle to find the words to help you, music can be your guide. Thats all. Thank you for you attention! Tips for delivering better speeches Dont rush. Pause between sentences and after important points ! Speak with enthusiasm and energy, using your hand or other gestures if appropriate. Smile, when a
27、ppropriate! Make sure the speech is easy to read and highlight important words and points. Stand straight and look up at the audience often. When practicing, think about tone and rhythm. Practice aloud with a friend or record yourself.【知识归纳】【知识归纳】Under medical treatment正在接受治疗Treat vt& vi治疗；对待；款待Trea
28、t sb. for sth 治疗Treat sb. as 把当对待Treat sb./oneself to用款待某人/自己Treat n. 请客；款待Treat n.请客，款待Its my treat.=Its on me.1. treatment n.治疗，对待，处理治疗，对待，处理(1)Men and women must _ (treat) equally in education and employment(2)We are treating Mom _ dinner for her birthday(3)After years of regular _ (treat), she f
29、inally became healthy【即学即练】【即学即练】be treatedtotreatment2. get through 设法处理；完成设法处理；完成【知识归纳】【知识归纳】get through 多重意义：多重意义：度过，熬过度过，熬过; 打通电话打通电话;通过；用完通过；用完1)Its hard to imagine how people get through the trying time.2)In spite of the difficulties, he managed to get through the work on time.3)I rang him sev
30、eral times but I couldnt get through.打通电话打通电话【即学即练【即学即练】写出写出get through在句中的精准意思在句中的精准意思度过；熬过度过；熬过完成完成4)The window is too small for the naughty boy to get through.5)He has got through all the money I lent him.6)Much to the teachers satisfaction, all his students succeeded in getting through the entra
31、nce examination. 通过通过用完用完通过通过3. satisfaction n.满足；满意；欣慰满足；满意；欣慰 【知识归纳】【知识归纳】satisfy v. 使满意使满意satisfying adj.令人满意（或满足）的令人满意（或满足）的satisfied adj.满意的；满足的；欣慰的满意的；满足的；欣慰的 be satisfied with 对对感到满意感到满意satisfactory adj.令人满意的；够好的；可以的令人满意的；够好的；可以的satisfy/meet ones needs满足满足/满足满足某人某人的需求的需求with satisfaction满意地满意
32、地To ones satisfaction令人满意地是令人满意地是1. As far as he is concerned, having disability doesnt mean his life is not _.(satisfy)2.Hearing the good news, he has a_(satisfy)look on his face. Moreover, music gave me hope and a sense of _(satisfy).3._my satisfaction, my students have made huge progress in Engli
33、sh.【即学即练】【即学即练】satisfying/satifactorysatisfiedsatisfactionTo认知词汇：认知词汇：romantic, album, impact, disease, ache, lean, moreover, being, somehow, rhetorical, metaphor, simile, outline拓展词汇拓展词汇: gradual gradually; capable capability incapable; relief relieve relieved; previous previously; unemployed unemp
34、loyment employ employment; aim aimless aimlessly; equipment equip; talent talented; piano pianist; assume assuming assumption; addition additional add; treatment treat ; satisfaction satisfy satisfied satisfying/ satisfactory; various vary variety; personificationpersonifyperson personalpersonallype
35、rsonality; repetitionrepeat; reactionreact应用词汇：应用词汇：1.relief : a sigh of relief; what a relief; to ones relief; relieve sb. of sth.; feel relieved2.cure: cure sb. of sth.; a cure for sth.3.aim: aim at; ;aim to do; with the aim of 4.treatment: treatas/like; treat sb. for sth.; treat sb./oneself to st
36、h.5.satisfaction: with satisfaction; to ones satisfaction; be satisfied with词汇清单词汇清单Summary核心短语核心短语重点句式重点句式l The doctor wanted me to relax, so he had me listen to some music, and one of the songs was “Happy”. (have sb. do sth.)absorbed in sth./sb. set sth. up try out in addition( to sb./sth.) from (
37、then) on get through1.用用satisfy的正确形式填空的正确形式填空To the teachers _, the result of the experiment was very _. Not only did we feel satisfied with it, but our teacher looked at us with _. 2.Guests at the health spa receive a range of beauty _(treat).3.She left in 1984 and from then on he_(live) alone.4.It
38、 is hard to see how people will _. 很难想像人们将怎样熬过这个冬天很难想像人们将怎样熬过这个冬天。Exercisessatisfactionsatisfying/satisfactorysatisfactiontreatmentslivedget through the winter5.A talented artist, he was, _, a writer of some note. 他是一位有才华的艺术家，同时也是颇有名气的作家。他是一位有才华的艺术家，同时也是颇有名气的作家。6.She took the job _. 她由于种种原因接受她由于种种原因接受了这份工作。了这份工作。7._, I dont feel I can trust him. 不知为什么，我觉不知为什么，我觉得不能信任他。得不能信任他。moreover/besidesfor various reasonsSomehow
