1、Unit 4 Do it yourselfTask AndrewsAndrewsWhat did he do?Problems causedput in a brighterlight in his bedroomput up a picture on his bedroom wallhave a power cut hit a pipe andfill the room with waterAndrewsAndrewsput up the shelfon the wallpaint the living room blueWhat did he do?The books couldnt st
2、ay. blue ceiling, floor and catProblems causedSuzys mothers birthday is coming!A DIY story ( ) She decided to send her mother a A. with the help of othersB. by buying it from the gift shop C“By oneself” is just the right spirit of the letter _ in DIY! YC. on her own/by herselfP52 Read the first para
3、graph and guess If you are Suzy, what will you write about in the next paragraph?BrainstormMaybe you will write something about your DIY job!Read Suzys diary entry Mums birthday is coming, so I decided to make her a birthday card by myself. I went to Sandys home to make the card becauseI wanted to k
4、eep it secret. Para. 1Para.1 (L1-3) w_ to makehatRead Suzys diary entry I planned to make the card with some roseson it. Sandy helped me with the drawing. We had fun working together. It took me two hoursto finish. Lots of things went wrong during thattime. I made some mistakes when I wrote thesente
5、nce “Happy Birthday, Mum”. I kept spelling the words wrong. I was too excited! owPara. 2Para.2 (L1-4) H_ to make itowRead Suzys diary entry Para.3(L1-3)H_ to make itow Finally, I coloured the roses red, blue and pink. I also cut out a picture of colourful balloons and stuck it on the cover. When I c
6、ompleted the card,there was paint on everything: the table, Sandys books, my clothes, my hands and face!Para. 3How did Suzy make her mother a birthday card?Step 1Step 2Step 3She made a birthday card with some roses on it.She coloured the roses red, blue and pink.She cut a picture of colourful balloo
7、ns and stuck it on the cover.I made some mistakes when I wrote thesentence “Happy Birthday, Mum”. I kept spelling the words wrong. When I completed the card, there was paint on everything!What else do Paras 2 & 3 tell?P_ caused & F_ in DIY! roblemsI was too excited!Para.2We had fun working together.
8、F_eelingsunRead Suzys diary entry Para4. H_/ W_ This is the first card I made for Mum. I hope she will like it!Para. 4opeish If Suzys mother dislikes the card, Suzy will be sad about it!what to makehow to make itproblems caused& fun in DIY feelingmake by make with colour redcut and stick make mistak
9、es when writing there be have fun keep wrongbe excitedAspect 5hope/wish Aspect 1what to makeAspect 4 attitude &feelingsAspect 2steps to make itAspect 3difficultiesA DIY storyAspect 6 How to write a diary entry about DIY?Your DIY ideasYour DIY ideasPractice Which DIY job would you like? Making your m
10、um/dad a cardMaking your mum/dad a cardPainting a roomPainting a roomFixing a bicycleFixing a bicycleMaking things from old clothes Making things from old clothes Making biscuits, cakes or a pizzaMaking biscuits, cakes or a pizzaRepairing a computerRepairing a computerPutting together a piece of Put
11、ting together a piece of furniturefurniture Example: Put up a shelf Steps to put up a shelfStep 1Step 2I decided to make my father a by myself, because he Order the building materials online.Daniel helped me and brought me tools needed.Step 3Step 4 Example: Put up a shelf Read the instructions first
12、.I had trouble when using the hammer. Step 5Step 6 Example: Put up a shelf Try to paint the bookshelf.Wish my father be Its your turn to write about a DIY job you did! Have a try Useful expressions I decided to by myself.I because . helped me with .We had fun working together.I made some mistakes wh
13、en .Finally/In the end, .（ 5 minutes） The writing evaluation table (评价表评价表) 评评 分分 标标 准准评分分值评分分值210相关性相关性1Are all the paragraphs about your DIY job?得体性得体性2Do you use I or we in your letter?3Do you use the Simple Past Tense to talk about a past event?4Do you try to tell a complete story?准确性准确性5Are the
14、re any errors in tense of the verbs, the usage of the vocabulary and mistakes in spelling, capital letters or punctuations?创造性创造性6Do you try to use good phrases and different sentence structures to write about your DIY job?7Do you try to make your story interesting?连贯性连贯性8Do you try to use proper li
15、nking words to make your writing more fluent (流畅流畅)?美观性美观性 9Is your handwriting beautiful and tidy?/Final marksWhat do you think of your own first draft?Sample writing Fathers birthday is coming, so I decided to put up a bookshelf for my father because he loves reading and has many books. I ordered
16、the building materials online. My best friend Daniel came to help me and brought some tools. We read the instructions first and quickly started to work. Daniel is good at DIY and he is really helpful. It took us only an hour to finish the work. I had a little trouble using the hammer. Daniel taught
17、me how to use it properly and we had fun working together. We also tried to paint the bookshelf bluemy fathers favourite colour. When we finished, it looked really cool. I feel happy with my work and I believe my father will be proud of it as well . Summary good ideas a good structure +a discussion put several aspects together My DIY job Read your diary entry again, and try to make it better.
