1、读后续写备考写作与范文朗读10练：原文内容+续写范文+范文译文（一）【原文内容】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在上初中前两周搬到亚利桑那州，作者和学校里一个因为身材被孤立的女孩成为了朋友。在快毕业之际，女孩告诉作者在遇到作者的那一天自己本打算回家自杀。【续写范文】Her tears rolled down from her eyes. She said a girl who was stronger than her always asked her for money but she didnt dare to tell the teachers. It had just broken h
2、er down. She was so depressed that day that she had made detailed plans on how she was going to kill herself after she got home. Just then I walked to her and treated her in a kind way, which let her feel the world was warmer than expected.Hearing what she said, I was lost in thought. If I hadnt eat
3、en in the courtyard, walked to her and chatted with her, she would have probably killed herself when she got home from school. It might be hard to believe that I saved her life. Then I said, “I have been wanting to say thanks to you because I made a friend in a new state that day,” Saying that, I hu
4、gged her, saying “Becoming your friend makes me happy.”【范文译文】她的眼泪从眼眶里滚落下来。她说，一个比她坚强的女孩总是向她要钱，但她不敢告诉老师。这简直让她崩溃了。那天她非常沮丧，以至于她已经制定了详细的计划，她将在回家后如何自杀。就在这时，我走到她身边，善待她，让她觉得这个世界比想象中还要温暖。听到她的话，我陷入了沉思。如果不是我在院子里吃饭，走到她身边和她聊天，她估计放学回家就自杀了。可能很难相信我救了她的命。然后我说：“我一直想对你说声谢谢，因为那天我结交了一个新的朋友。”说完，我拥抱了她，说：“成为你的朋友让我很开心。”（二）【
5、原文内容】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了欺凌问题，尤其是校园欺凌和网络欺凌。随着网络的发展，网络欺凌变得越来越流行，造成了巨大的不良影响，但如果我们都立即以正确的方式采取行动，欺凌是可以被制止的。【范文】Bullying, which does great harm to everyone related to it, has been spreading fast over the years, especially in schools and on the net. With the developing of the net, Cyber bullying becomes more an
6、d more popular, resulting great bad effects, including shocking number of suicides. School is another disaster area of bullying, with great number of kids affected. Serious as it may be, bullying can be stopped if we all take action against it immediately in a correct way.【范文译文】欺凌对所有与之相关的人都造成了巨大伤害，多
7、年来一直在迅速蔓延，尤其是在学校和网络上。随着网络的发展，网络欺凌越来越流行，造成了巨大的不良影响，包括令人震惊的自杀人数。学校是另一个欺凌的重灾区，有大量儿童受到影响。尽管欺凌行为可能很严重，但如果我们都以正确的方式立即采取行动，欺凌行为就可以被制止。（三）【原文内容】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了“我”救助了一头驴Bo，但是真正让这头驴从紧张中恢复过来的是我4岁的孙子Dylan。学龄前的孙子在如此短的时间内学会控制自己，一步步接近这头驴并取得它的信任真是一件不可思议的事情。【续写范文】As we watched, true love developed between this once d
8、istrustful pony and a gentle boy. Over the next few days, Bo let Dylan throw his arms around his neck, pet his legs, hold his head in his hands, and pat his cheeks. And Dylan felt free to sit at Bos feet while Bo carefully sniffed his shirt collar and hair and rubbed Dylans back with his hairy chin.
9、 Just as Dylan had earned Bos trust, Bo showed attachment to Dylan. Thus, Bo seemed unable to tear himself away from Dylan when he and his parents had to depart.They met again one week later as the family passed through on their return trip. It was almost dark, but Dylan and his dad paced to the far
10、 reaches of the ranch. Bo came to meet them enthusiastically. He hugged Dylan as if saying “long time no see” -yes, a donkey can hug-without knocking him off balance. He is now a changed and trusting donkey. And Dylan is a miracle worker.【范文译文】正如我们所看到的，这个曾经不信任的小马和一个温柔的男孩之间发展了真爱。在接下来的几天里，Bo 让 Dylan 搂
11、着他的脖子，抚摸着他的腿，双手抱住他的头，拍了拍他的脸颊。Dylan 可以自由地坐在 Bo 的脚边，而 Bo 仔细地嗅着他的衬衫领子和头发，并用毛茸茸的下巴揉着 Dylan 的后背。正如迪伦赢得了薄的信任，薄也表现出对迪伦的依恋。因此，当他和他的父母不得不离开时，Bo 似乎无法将自己与 Dylan 分开。一周后，当家人在回程途中经过时，他们再次见面。天快黑了，但迪伦和他的父亲踱步到牧场的远处。博热情地来迎接他们。他拥抱迪伦，好像在说“好久不见”是的，驴可以拥抱没有让他失去平衡。他现在是一头改变和信任的驴。迪伦是个奇迹创造者。（四）【原文内容】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Willie Wilso
12、n在15岁时，几乎完全失明，他在18岁时，将自己的生命献给了上帝，阅读盲文书籍，从上帝对弱者的特殊关爱中寻求安慰。他上了大学，改头换面了。结果21岁的时候，他又瞎又聋。他辍学了，停止了学业，搬回家和父母住在一起。医生确诊他得了脑瘤，Wilson对生活感到沮丧。然而，一个专门为残疾人士设计的组织帮助他重拾信心，并积极地生活。他终于找到了他渴望已久的东西他的独立。【续写范文】 His grandfather Willie Wilson, Sr., encouraged him not to lose hope. “You cant see or hear as well as others,” h
13、e told Willie, “but you can do anything you set your mind to do.” But Willie didnt listen to his grandfathers words. He couldnt even fold his own clothes or make himself a sandwich. “I just stayed in my bed,” he recalls. His faith in his dreams was fading, like the way his sight and hearing had.Howe
14、ver, an organization specially designed for the disabilities helped him regain his confidence and live a positive life. He moved into one of the 15 apartments at the organization. He finally found what hed been so desperate to regainhis independence. These days, Willie is Mr. Popular once again. His
15、 signing is improving and he often talks with his friends with his sharp sense of humor. He cooks meals and does his own laundry. Willie says, “Im able to take care of my own business. Im living life in my own way nowWillie style!”【范文译文】他的祖父 Willie Wilson, Sr. 鼓励他不要失去希望。“你不能像其他人那样看到或听到，”他告诉威利，“但你可以做
16、任何你想做的事情。” 但是威利没有听他祖父的话。他甚至不能叠自己的衣服或给自己做三明治。“我只是呆在床上，”他回忆道。他对梦想的信心正在消退，就像他的视力和听力一样。然而，一个专门为残障人士设计的组织帮助他重拾信心，过上积极向上的生活。他搬进了该组织的 15 间公寓中的一间。他终于找到了他一直渴望重新获得的东西他的独立性。这些天来，威利再次成为流行先生。他的签约正在改善，他经常以敏锐的幽默感与朋友交谈。他做饭，自己洗衣服。威利说：“我能够照顾好自己的事业。我现在以自己的方式生活威利风格！”（五）【原文内容】本文是一篇记叙文，主要讲述的是一个周六的早上，Jeremy发现妈妈生病了，决定帮妈妈分担
17、家务，却在洗衣服时不小心把衣服混色了的故事。【续写范文】But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket. “Where did it come from?” Jeremy wondered, reaching into the washer to take out more clothes. Then much to his astonishment, he pulled out two T-shirts, both in light pink. Realizing there was something wron
18、g, Jeremy stood frozen, his heart sinking. While racking his brain for reasons, he caught sight of the red socks, and it suddenly occurred to him that they must be to blame for the accident. With no means of handling the situation, Jeremy was in such a panic that he even thought of hiding the dress
19、from his mom. “That isnt a positive approach to the problem,” he reminded himself. Finally, he decided to dry and fold the laundry before telling his mom everything.Holding the neatly folded pink dress, Jeremy nervously knocked at his moms bedroom door again. After what seemed like ages, he came to
20、the bedside, his head drooping. Sensing his sons unease, his mother inquired with concern what was wrong. “Sorry mom, I shouldnt have ruined your favorite dress.” Jeremy apologized. Stuttering out the mistake he had made, he was ready to get a good scolding for his wrongdoing. Realizing whats going
21、on, mom smiled understandingly at Jeremy, “Never mind, dear. I know you meant to help.” Then mom held the dress up before her and said in an approving tone, “You know what? I think it looks nice.” At this Jeremy beamed with relief, making a silent vow to be more careful in helping his mom out next t
22、ime.【范文译文】但他记得洗衣篮里没有粉红色的裙子。“它从哪里来的？”杰里米想知道，把手伸进洗衣机里拿出更多的衣服。然后令他惊讶的是，他拿出两件T恤，都是浅粉色的。意识到有什么不对劲，杰里米僵住了，他的心沉了下去。他一边绞尽脑汁，一边看到了那双红色的袜子，突然想到，这起事故一定是他们惹的祸。无计可施的杰里米惊慌失措，甚至想把裙子藏起来不让妈妈看到。“这不是解决问题的积极方法，”他提醒自己。最后，他决定把衣服晾干叠好，然后再告诉妈妈一切。杰里米拿着折叠整齐的粉色连衣裙，再次紧张地敲了敲妈妈的卧室门。过了好久，他来到床边，低着头。母亲察觉到儿子的不安，关切地询问到底是怎么回事。“对不起妈妈，我不
23、应该毁了你最喜欢的裙子。”杰里米道歉。他结结巴巴地说出他犯的错误，准备为自己的错误行为受到严厉的责骂。意识到发生了什么事，妈妈理解地对杰里米笑了笑，“没关系，亲爱的。我知道你是来帮忙的。”然后妈妈把裙子举到面前，用赞许的语气说：“你知道吗？我觉得挺好看的。”杰里米松了口气，默默地发誓下次要更加小心地帮助他的妈妈。（六）【原文内容】这是一篇读后续写。文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在家带孩子期间，因为时间充裕学会了编织。当意识到自己所在小区有很多无家可归之人后，把自己编织的帽子送给他们。并和自己的大儿子一起织了帽子并通过当地的一些组织送给在农场工作的人。后来作者的新邻居搬来，她准备了自己编织的羊
24、毛帽子作为见面礼送给他们，同时得知邻居在医院工作。【续写范文】The new neighbor had limited knitting skills so she asked me to create sweaters for kids in hospital together. I agreed to the act of kindness because I had always been doing such similar things. In my spare time from babysitting, I was making childrens sweaters. A mon
25、th later, I had done 20. My new neighbor, my son and I sent our gifts to the hospital. We explained our purpose, handed out sweaters to the parents and wished their kids a quick recovery. They all thanked me for our gifts.Later, my new neighbor wanted to learn my knitting skills to serve the elderly
26、 in the nursing home. She really admired my skills, and I was glad to teach her, so she bought a set of loom just like mine. She quickly mastered the skills. Together we made winter hats for the old people in the nursing home. We soon made enough hats and gave them away to the old people, who needed
27、 these things badly. I hope that our gifts will make their life a little more comfortable. Im happy to continue spreading this love to more people.【范文译文】新邻居的编织技能有限，所以她让我一起为医院的孩子们制作毛衣。我同意了善举，因为我一直在做类似的事情。在保姆的业余时间，我正在制作儿童毛衣。一个月后，我做了20个。我的新邻居，我儿子和我把我们的礼物送到了医院。我们解释了我们的目的，向父母分发了毛衣，并祝他们的孩子早日康复。他们都感谢我的礼物。后
28、来，我的新邻居想学习我的编织技巧，为疗养院的老人服务。她很佩服我的手艺，我很乐意教她，所以她买了一套和我一样的织布机。她很快就掌握了技巧。我们一起为疗养院的老人制作了冬帽。我们很快就做了足够多的帽子，把它们送给了急需这些东西的老人。我希望我们的礼物能让他们的生活更舒适一点。我很高兴继续将这份爱传播给更多的人。（七）【原文内容】这是一篇读后续写。文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了新冠期间老师Julia和Phillips交流时，发现她和往常不一样，说话不太清楚。Julia怀疑她可能是中风，考虑到身边只有两个孙女在，Julia立即驱车前往Phillips家。【续写范文】Then, Julia droppe
29、d everything and drove to the familys home. When she pulled up less than ten minutes later, the doctors were treating Philips while the two girls, looking visibly shaken, were outside with a neighbor. The quick response from Julia saved Phillips life. She was rushed to the hospital in time to get tr
30、eatment before chronic damage occurred.While the grandmother was in hospital, Julia became much busier. Because the childs parents were out of town, they couldnt come back due to blockade. Julia had to give the children online lessons and went to the hospital to take care of Philips. Thanks to an ex
31、tended stay in hospital, Phillips regained most of the movement. On the day of leaving hospital, she said to Julia “If it werent for you, I wouldnt be here. I cant thank you enough.” With tears in eyes, Julia responded “Lady, this is what we should do. In my two years as a teacher, it was the most m
32、eaningful thing I had ever done. I am so glad to see you recover.” After that, Phillips gave her a warm hug.【范文译文】然后，朱莉娅放下所有东西，开车去了他们家。不到十分钟后，当她停下来时，医生正在为飞利浦治疗，而这两个女孩看起来明显动摇了，正和一个邻居在外面。朱莉娅的快速反应挽救了菲利普斯的生命。在慢性损伤发生之前，她被及时送往医院接受治疗。祖母住院期间，朱莉娅变得更加忙碌。因为孩子的父母不在城里，因为封锁，他们无法回来。朱莉娅只好给孩子们上网课，去医院照顾飞利浦。由于长期住院，菲利普
33、斯恢复了大部分运动。出院那天，她对朱莉娅说：“如果不是你，我就不会在这里。我怎么感谢你都不够。”朱莉娅眼里含着泪水，回答说：“女士，这是我们应该做的。在我当老师的两年里，这是我做过的最有意义的事情。很高兴看到你康复。”之后，菲利普斯给了她一个温暖的拥抱。（八）【原文内容】这是一篇读后续写。文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了儿时遭受霸凌用篮球来让自己得到安慰的司机Aubrey，发现了一个喜欢篮球的男孩Elijah，想到自己童年的遭遇，Aubrey决定给这个贫民窟的男孩一个礼物篮筐。趁Elijah的家人不在时，Aubrey安装了篮筐，并留下鼓励孩子的字条。知道安装篮筐的人是谁后，Elijah的妈妈非常感
34、动。【续写范文】 When Elijah came home and his mother showed it to him, he got really emotional. He stood there for several minutes staring at the hoop. The little boy was really shocked when he learned Aubrey got him a new hoop, which really touched him. He got teary-eyed but hes an 11-year-old boy so he r
35、eally didnt want to admit he was crying. Elijah couldnt wait to test out his new hoop. He couldnt describe how much he loved the new hoop.Weeks later, Aubrey came again, and Elijah was there waiting. Elijah ran to her and hugged her. “I am grateful you would do this for us. This has been a huge, hug
36、e thing for our family.” After giving her a card he made for her, Elijah invited Aubrey to play basketball. The two played basketball for nearly an hour until Aubrey had to go back to work. It was an act of kindness that led to a friendship and memories that will last a lifetime.【范文译文】当以利亚回到家，他的母亲给他
37、看时，他非常激动。他站在那里盯着篮筐看了几分钟。当小男孩得知奥布里给他买了一个新的箍时，他真的很震惊，这让他很感动。他泪流满面，但他是一个 11 岁的男孩，所以他真的不想承认他在哭。Elijah 迫不及待地想要测试他的新篮筐。他无法描述他对新篮筐的喜爱程度。几周后，奥布里又来了，以利亚在那儿等着。以利亚跑过去抱住她。“我很感激你能为我们做这件事。这对我们的家庭来说是一件巨大的、巨大的事情。” 在给了她一张他为她制作的卡片后，以利亚邀请奥布里去打篮球。两人打了将近一个小时的篮球，直到奥布里不得不回去工作。这是一种善意的行为，它带来了终生难忘的友谊和回忆。（九）【原文内容】本文以人物为线索展开，讲
38、述了一个商人的儿子去向世界上最聪明的人寻求幸福的奥秘的故事。【续写范文】Now more at ease, the young man took the spoon and walked around the castle again. He enjoyed the wonders with his mouth open. Never had him seen such breath-taking world. The colorful curtains had embroidery of animals on them. The flowers in the garden were smil
39、ing under the care of the gardener. The young man was so lost in the paradise that he didnt notice the walk come to the end. When he returned to the presence of the wise man,he said, How charming this castle is! I would be happy if I lived here.“But where are the two drops of oil I gave you ?” asked
40、 the wise man. Embarrassed again, the young man apologized, T had forgotten the spoon totally. My only concern was the attractive sights” But you have got the happiness. Smiled the wise man. And the young man nodded. That was the secret of happiness! Happiness doesnt mean perfection, but a heart to
41、appreciate the beauty of surroundings, which may give you mental satisfaction.【范文译文】这下放心多了，年轻人拿着勺子，又在城堡里走来走去。他张开嘴享受着奇迹。他从未见过如此令人叹为观止的世界。五颜六色的窗帘上绣着动物。花园里的花儿在园丁的照料下微笑着。年轻人迷失在天堂中，以至于他没有注意到步行走到了尽头。当他回到智者面前时，他说：“这座城堡多么迷人！如果我住在这里，我会很高兴的。”“可是我给你的那两滴油呢？” 智者问道。年轻人又不好意思了，连忙道歉：“T完全忘记了勺子。我只关心那些迷人的景色” ！幸福并不意味着完美
42、，而是一颗欣赏周围美景的心，这可能会给你带来精神上的满足。 （十）【原文内容】本文以雪人为线索展开，讲述了作者与妹妹堆了很漂亮的雪人，并且收到了朋友和同学的赞美。他们对此非常骄傲，但是放学回家后发现雪人被破坏了，他们想办法设置陷阱来找到破坏者。【续写范文】Monday morning, hiding behind the window, we soon saw what we were waiting for. It turned out that there were three kids from our school.They sneaked up on our snowman and
43、sneered.Taking their places on either side, they pulled back their legs to deliver powerful kicks. But the moment they hit the hard ice block of the base, sneers turned into shock, then agony and tears.They howled and cursed, gritting their teeth and stomping their feet.Seeing their pained look, we
44、couldnt help laughing.They were too funny as they hopped away holding their damaged feet.We just couldnt contain our happiness and excitement.With a hearty laugh, we came out of hiding and sprang into the yard from inside the house. “An eye for an eye! Justice done！” We yelled behind them. And that
45、was the end of our problems with the snowman bullies. Ever since then, our snowman was kept guarded and intact until it happily melted into spring water and finally wove into our sweetest childhood memories.【范文译文】星期一早上，我们躲在窗后，很快就看到了我们正在等待的东西。原来是我们学校的三个孩子，他们偷偷地扑到我们的雪人身上，冷笑着，在两边各就位，把腿往后拉，踢出有力的一脚。但在撞到基地坚硬的冰块的那一刻，冷笑变成震惊，然后是痛苦和泪水。他们嚎叫着诅咒着，咬着牙跺着脚。看着他们痛苦的样子，我们不禁笑了起来。他们太搞笑了，他们抱着受伤的脚跳了起来。我们无法抑制自己的快乐和兴奋。笑着从藏身处出来，跳进了 从房子里面的院子里。“以眼还眼！正义完成了！”我们在他们身后大喊。这就是我们与雪人恶霸问题的终结。从那时起，我们的雪人一直被守护着，完好无损，直到它快乐地融化成泉水，最终编织成我们最甜蜜的童年回忆。
