1、重庆市20192022学年第一学期期末高一质量检测英语应用文写作汇编（共三年）文末附作文评分标准2021-2022学年高一期末考试第一节 应用文写作（满分15分）1.假定你是李华，请以英语协会主席的身份给会员写封邮件，告知他们于11月15日在学校大礼堂参加来自英国的交换教师Mr. Johnson的讲座。邮件内容要点如下：1. 简单介绍Mr. Johnson；2. 告知讲座的时间、地点和内容；3. 指明讲座的目的。注意：1. 词数不少于100；2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Friends,_Sincerely,Li HuaOne possible version：De
2、ar Friends,On behalf of the English Club, Im writing this letter to inform you that a lecture concerning English learning will be tailored for you.Scheduled at 17:00 pm. on Nov. 15th in the school auditorium, the lecture is delivered by Mr. Johnson, an exchange teacher from England, who has been dev
3、oted to English teaching for twenty yearsTo foster a deeper insight into language learning, not only will Mr. Johnson offer vivid examples to get you interested in English as a language but also he will introduce cultural backgroundBesides, you can also exchange ideas with the expert in the Q&A sess
4、ion, which will definitely help you a lot.Looking forward to seeing you then! Best wishes.Sincerely,Li Hua2020-2021学年高一期末考试 应用文写作（满分20分）2.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John想了解中国疫情限制（coronavirus lockdown）解除之后你在学校的学习、生活等情况。请你给John写封回信，有关内容如下：1.表示对John的问候：2.介绍你校的学习、生活等情况；3.希望全球疫情早日结束。注意：1.可以适当增减细节：2.词数120左右：3.请在答题卡上的相应
5、位置作答。参考词汇：解除 lift_Yours, Li Hua参考范文：Dear John,How are you doing? Im more than relieved to hear from you, which means you are okay now. Because the global situation of coronavirus is becoming more and more serious, I am really worried about you. As you want to know something happening in China, let m
6、e share something with you.We have come back to sort of normal life now since coronavirus lockdown was lifted in China. However teachers and parents are still cautious though the situation has been improved.And they ask us to wear masks every day when we go to school.Of course, we need to wash our h
7、ands often.Its better not to hang out with friends after class or eat out. Actually, lift is definitely different considering that people pay more attention to health.Many people in the world are still suffering from coronavirus. Hopefully the situation of the coronavirus will end soon so that peopl
8、es life can return to normal.Looking forward to your reply.2019-2020学年高一期末考试第二节 应用文写作（满分25分）假定你是星光中学的学生李华，你的外国朋友Peter在你校学习汉语，请你用英语给他写一封信，主题为“健康成长”，主要内容包括：1. 遵纪守法，努力学习； 2. 参加体育锻炼；注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已为你写好。Dear Peter, I am Li Hua in Xing Guang middle school. _Yours truly, Li Hua范文：Dea
9、r Peter, I am Li Hua in Xing Guang middle school. I am glad to know that you are interested in what I usually do at school. Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I
10、 help my parents with the housework at the weekends too. When I get tired, I would like to sit by the balcony and read books such as a novel, a science fiction, or even a poem. The most important for me is to obey the law and work hard.Yours truly, Li Hua评分原则：1. 本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步
11、确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3. 词数少于60从总分中减去2分，多写原则上不扣分。4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。如书写较差以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。各档次的给分范围和要求第五档(1720)分完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连
12、接成分，使全文结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全完成了试题规定的任务。第四档(1316分)完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档(912分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档(58分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(14分)未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
