1、目录页contentsPre-writingIWhile-writingIIHomeworkPost-writingIIIIPre-writingPre-writing:Read and answerRead Bobs story after he was released from jail and answer the questions.1.How did Bob feel when he finally got out of jail?3.Do you like this ending?Give your reasons.2.A happy ending A sad ending A
2、surprising ending An open endingWhat kind of ending is this?More than one description may be suitable.Pre-writing:Check the answers 1.How did Bob feel when he finally got out of jail?What kind of ending is this?More than one description may be suitable.Bob felt lost and helpless.A happy and surprise
3、 ending.3.Do you like this ending?Give your reasons.2.Pre-writing:Read for informationRead the ending in Activity 5 again.Find the expressions that describe:SettingCharactersActionsSetting:particular time and place happening in the storyCharacters:the persons invented in this storyActions:the events
4、 in a storyPre-writing:Read for informationSettingCharactersout of jail;cold wind;dark night58,lost and helpless;a young man with familiar-looking in his thirties Pre-writing:Read for informationActionsstepped out of the jail,smiled bitterly,long for an answerheard the voice,turned around,was surpri
5、sed,replied,unfolded,shaked,finished readingshouted in surprise,smiledPre-writing:basic elements of a storyWhoWhenWhereAfter twenty yearsBob,a young man named Boba cold,dark nightout of jailPre-writing:basic elements of a storyAfter twenty yearsWhatWhyHowThe young man waiting outside the jail gave a
6、 note to Bob.After reading it,Bob shouted in surprise.The young man was Jimmys son,who was told to meet him when he was stepping out of jail.A happy endingThe beginningClimaxThe endPre-writing:Read for the structureStepped out of jailSmiled bitterlyNot knowing where to goLonged for an answer from Ji
7、mmyHeard a voicea familiar-looking mana note for BobFinished readingShouted in surpriseThe young man smiledWhat were the feelings of Bob?Pre-writing:emotion line(adj and adv)lost and helplesssurpriseddoubtfulastonishedmovedIIWhile-writingWhile-writing:Group workCome up with your own ending to Jimmy
8、and Bobs story,twenty years after Bob was arrested.Answer the questions to help you.What type of ending will it be?Do you want to introduce other characters in the ending?If so,who are they?While-writing:Group workCome up with your own ending to Jimmy and Bobs story,twenty years after Bob was arrest
9、ed.Answer the questions to help you.Where will the ending take place?What has happened to Bob and Jimmy over the past twenty years?How will the story end?While-writing:Write your own ending.Useful expressions:A cold winter night/A cold dark night in winter/After Bob stepped out of jailLinking words
10、for coherence:to begin with/at the beginning ofafter that/later/from then onbut/still/for/becausebesides/moreover/furthermore/gradually in the end/finally/eventuallyUseful expressions:He felt so.He had a sense ofHe was surprised to find that.IIIPost-writingShare your story with the class.Post-readin
11、g:Presentation It was a cold winter night when Bob came out of jail.He felt like a stranger to the city and the people in it.Lost and helpless,he didnt know where to go.A year after he had been arrested,his wife had left him and taken their daughter with her.Former good friends had cut all contact w
12、ith him.Post-reading:A sample story introduction “Is there anyone here who still thinks of me?”he wondered bitterly.Recalling the night twenty years earlier that had completely changed his life,he wandered blindly through the streets.In the dim light of a streetlamp,he noticed an old man sitting on
13、a bench.“Another lonely man,just like me,”he thought to himself.Post-reading:A sample story development “Bob”,the old man looked up.Although twenty years had passed,he could still recognise that face Jimmys face.“Im here for our meeting,though I dont know if you still want it.Anyway,welcome home,bud
14、dy!”Post-reading:A sample story climax “Long time no see,”murmured Bob,his voice trembling.The uncertainty was gone.He now had a home.Post-reading:A sample story endingHomeworkHomework:Rewriting and evaluationChecklist(检查清单检查清单)Your evaluation Does the story have clear ideas?(theme)4 2 0Does the story have proper layout?(When/Where/Who/What/Why/How)8 5 3 1How is the language?(tense;vivid action verbs;coherence)10 6 4 2How is the handwriting?3 1 -1TOTAL MARK
