1、Make comments列举影响列举影响分析原因分析原因发表观点发表观点列举影响列举影响具体举例概括某一方面的影响Topic sentence(产生影响)Topic sentence(产生影响)It will exert a profound influence.There are a number of effect.The positive/negative effects,which are widely accepted,can be listed as follows.The negative effects,which are generally acknowledged,are
2、 presented below.is harmful/beneficial in more than one way.It leaves some serious consequences It may give rise to a host of problems 过渡句1The immediate result it produces is Perhaps the most serious consequence is 过渡句2The influence is not confined to what is mentioned above.Whats more?To begin with
3、,To make matters worse,The worst of all,Topic sentence 环境污染对人有影响概括的影响1水污染对人的影响，举例概括的影响2大气污染对人的影响，举例概括的影响3森林退化对人的影响，举例The fake commodities would sabotage the nation.The poor quality,sometimes even poisonous food is threatening peoples life.Nobody would deny that the issue of milk powder will happen a
4、gain,if the concern is not raised over the food security.In addition,分析原因分析原因Topic sentence(原因原因)First,原因原因1+例证例证Second,原因原因2+例证例证Topic sentence Why?What has caused the?What on the earth are the reasons for the phenomenon?What in the world is responsible for the problem?There are several reasons for
5、 the phenomenon.The causes for the phenomenon,which are quite obvious,can be listed as follows.The answer to this problem involves many factors.The reasons for the fact,at least to me,are not difficult to find.A number of factors could account for the problem.The factors that contribute to the pheno
6、menon include层次过渡句原因1The most important reason cited by people is One of the most popular reasons is 原因2Another important reason is Also playing a part is In addition,is also responsible for the phenomenon 原因3The third reason,which can not be neglected,is thatThe picture reveals a fact that nowadays
7、 a growing number of students is willing to study abroad.Topic sentence(原因)Examples Why is there an increasing popularity of studying abroad?The causes of this phenomenon are various.For one thing,studying and living in other countries,people could be exposed to more aspects of the world.For example
8、,one may have classmates from different nations,which gives them a chance to learn diverse ideas and values.Another vital reason is that overseas students could have precious experiences that those who stay domestic will never have.A good case in point,students in Chinese university usually have mea
9、ls at school canteen,while studying in a foreign country,most students have to cook by themselves.teenageradolescentyoungster 非限制性定语从句one may have classmates from different nations,which gives them a chance to learn diverse ideas and values.人们会有来自不同国家的同学，因此他们有机会了解不同的思想和价值。这使他们有机会了解不同。最近报纸上经常报道楼房倒塌的新
10、闻，因此人们开始关注住房安全问题。Recently,news about collapse buildings often hits the headline,which makes people come to pay attention to the security of their house.他在美国待了10年，这使他看起来更像一个外国人，而不像中国人。He has been in America for almost ten years,which makes him look more like a foreigner than a native.发表观点发表观点Topic se
11、ntence(我的观点)分析原因1，2别人的观点也有道理，但是TS:有人认为，我认为Different from the common argument that.,I hold the view thatInstead of supporting the idea that,I choose to stand behind the argument that The idea that may win the majority of people,but I still insist that A large number of people may agree that,but I tak
12、e the opposite view that Happiness=money?Health or moneyStudy abroad or domestic A large number of people may agree that money equals to happiness,but I take the opposite view that money cannot always bring about delight.Instead of supporting the idea that money is more crucial than health,I choose
13、to stand behind the argument that health outweighs money.The idea that studying abroad will provide students with a better future may win the majority of people,but I still insist that pursuing education in China is a more favorable choice.Meaning of the picture.The common sight brings about the arg
14、ument that instead of making people more intimate,the computer and the Internet separate them from each other.However,from my point of view,the computer and internet provide people with an efficient communication channel.别人的观点也有道理，但是It might have something in point that,but It cannot not be denied t
15、hat,but It is not irrational that,but Meaning of the picture.The common sight brings about the argument that instead of making people more intimate,the computer and the Internet separate them from each other.However,from my point of view,the computer and internet provide people with an efficient com
16、munication channel.First,Second,.It might be true that people communicate face to face less than before,but it does not mean that they are less intimate.Internet is just a new channel for people to get contact with each other.The more properly we use it,the more benefit we will get.Your Topic Goes HereYour subtopic goes hereE
