1、Copy of Writing Models大学英语四级辅导大学英语四级辅导之三之三四级英语作文四级英语作文四级作文基本要求四级作文基本要求大学英语四级写作部分考试时间为大学英语四级写作部分考试时间为30分钟，分值为总分的分钟，分值为总分的15%，其四个基本要求为：其四个基本要求为：1.切题切题 文章在形式上，诸如段落、字数、文体文章在形式上，诸如段落、字数、文体 等方面满足题目要求，等方面满足题目要求，并在内容上没有偏差。并在内容上没有偏差。2.表达清楚，条理清晰表达清楚，条理清晰 考察学生对文章结构的掌握，要求文章主题换点明确，有头考察学生对文章结构的掌握，要求文章主题换点明确，有头有尾；
2、论证、说明安排有主次、有轻重。有尾；论证、说明安排有主次、有轻重。3、文字通顺，连贯性较好、文字通顺，连贯性较好 考察学生对过渡句和连接词或短语的掌握和运用，要求文章考察学生对过渡句和连接词或短语的掌握和运用，要求文章的句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯，不突兀。的句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯，不突兀。4、基本无语言错误、基本无语言错误考察学生的语言基本、段落扩展、布局谋篇的综合语言表达能考察学生的语言基本、段落扩展、布局谋篇的综合语言表达能力。功，包括语法与拼写两部分。这就要求考生不仅要掌握力。功，包括语法与拼写两部分。这就要求考生不仅要掌握一定的词汇量和语法知识，还要具有较好的遣词造句。一定的词汇量
3、和语法知识，还要具有较好的遣词造句。四级作文评分原则和标准四级作文评分原则和标准14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误。性较好，基本无语言错误。11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，但有少量语言错误。性较好，但有少量语言错误。8分：切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字上连贯性，分：切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字上连贯性，但语言错误较多，其中有少量严重错误但语言错误较多，其中有少量严重错误。5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯性差，有较严重语言错误
4、。性差，有较严重语言错误。2分：条理不清，思想紊乱，远支离破碎或大部分：条理不清，思想紊乱，远支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多位严重错误。分句子均有错误，且多位严重错误。共五个等级。在相应的等级中可视情况加减共五个等级。在相应的等级中可视情况加减1分分。论说文写作论说文写作论说文是四级作文的重点命题类型。他是之解释、议论、说理的文章，通过运用概念、判断、推理等抽象的逻辑形式来论证和阐明事物的道理。论说文的结构基本安排：论说文的结构基本安排：第一段：说明现状，第二段：列举原因第三段：归纳结论，提出建议，即“提出文体分析文体解决问题模版与解说模版与解说-对立观点型对立观点型这类作文的主线是这类作
5、文的主线是：某一事物或现象其优缺点某一事物或现象其优缺点或有管的正反面观点或有管的正反面观点-我的态度我的态度第一段：引出有争议的两个观点；第一段：引出有争议的两个观点；第二段：对两个观点分别进行详细的论述，可第二段：对两个观点分别进行详细的论述，可以分为两小段进行；以分为两小段进行；地三段：地三段：总结，陈述自己的观点总结，陈述自己的观点例例1：Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?(2005-12)1)名校校园正成为旅游热点名校校园正成为旅游热点2)校园是否应对有课开放，人们看法不同；校园是否应对有课开放，人们看法不同；3)我认为
6、我认为模版一模版一对立观点型对立观点型第一段：第一段：Nowadays,there is an increasing interest in-(点明新热点明新热点）点）Therefore,there is a hot debate over-(切入话题）切入话题）第二段：第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of-(概述一方概述一方观点）观点）They believe that-(详述理由一）详述理由一）What also argue that-(详述理由二）详述理由二）第三段：第三段：However,other people stand on a
7、different ground(概述另一方概述另一方观点观点)They consider-(详述理由一详述理由一)Whats more,they firmly point out that-（详述理由二）（详述理由二）第四段：第四段：There is some truth in both arguments(双方各有道理）双方各有道理）But I think the advantages of-overweigh the disadvantagesIn my opinion,-(总结自己的观点）总结自己的观点）Model Writing:Should the University Campu
8、s Be Open to TouristsNowadays,there is an increasing interest in visiting campuses of famous universities.Therefore,a hot debate arises over whether the university campus should be open to tourists.Some people are in favor of the idea of opening it to the public.They believe that the atmosphere of f
9、amous universities can motivate student visitors to seek more knowledge.They also argue that as more tourists come to visit,these universities can make themselves known to more people.Model Writing:Should the University Campus Be Open to TouristsHowever,other people hold an opposite viewpoint.They c
10、onsider that with tourists pouring into campuses,the beauty of the campus will be ruined.Whats more,they firmly point out that the normal teaching activities will be disturbed.There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of opening them outweigh the disadvantages.In my opinion,un
11、iversity campuses should be open to tourists.模版与解说模版与解说-道理论证型道理论证型道理论证型论说文是对某一事物或现象进行分析道理论证型论说文是对某一事物或现象进行分析和论证。和论证。通常是就某一个明确的观点进行份通常是就某一个明确的观点进行份额系和论证。额系和论证。而对立观点型论说文是对两个而对立观点型论说文是对两个观点进行对比论证，作者最后表明自己的立观点进行对比论证，作者最后表明自己的立场。场。例2：It Pays to Be Honest(2003-1)1)当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象2)诚实利人利己，做人
12、应该诚实诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实模版与解说模版与解说-道理论证型道理论证型第一段：第一段：It is true that-(指出普遍的观点指出普遍的观点)However,-(叙述不同的观点叙述不同的观点)第二段：第二段：I think-(提出自己的观点，即文章的论点提出自己的观点，即文章的论点 )The reasons can be listed as follows.(开始论证开始论证 )Firstly,-Secondly,-for example,-Thirdly,-.A case in point is that-第三段：第三段：It goes without saying that-
13、In conclusion,-Model Writing for It Pays to Be HonestIt is true that most of us value honesty highly.However,nowadays we often confront confidence crisis such as cheating,overcharging,fake commodities and so on.I think that we should be honest.The reasons can be listed as follows.Firstly,only honest
14、 people can be truly respected by others over a long period of time,Secondly,honesty,as a traditional virtue of Chinese people can make our life easier and more harmonious.For example,if fewer students cheated in exams,exams would be made much simpler.Model Writing for It Pays to Be HonestThirdly,ho
15、nesty can make our society more stable,A case in point is that Singapore a society featuring trust and integrity,has a comparatively low crime rate.It goes without saying that being honest is of great benefit to both the community and individuals.In conclusion,honesty should be encouraged in our soc
16、iety.常见写作问题一、一、审题审题1.偏题偏题(number 47)2.漏题漏题二、衔接与连贯二、衔接与连贯1.语义不连贯语义不连贯(number 10 曾俊文）曾俊文）2.衔接不当衔接不当常见写作问题三、句子三、句子1句子不完整句子不完整2 主谓不一致主谓不一致(number 26)3句子不间断句子不间断4 时态混乱时态混乱5、逻辑混乱、逻辑混乱(number 31)6.中式英语中式英语(number10,5,四、遣词造句四、遣词造句1.拼写错误拼写错误2.代词使用错误代词使用错误依据模板写作依据模板写作Models and Samples现象解释模板现象解释模板1 Recently,_
17、.2)What amazes us most is_.3)It is true that _.4)There are many reasons explaining _.5)The main reasons _.6)What is more,_.7)Thirdly,_.8)As a result,_.9)Considering all these,_.10)For one thing,_.11)For another,_.12)In conclusion,_.模板模板1-范文范文-11)Recently,PC games have become very popular on campus,2
18、)What amazes us most is that many students often spend their evenings playing such games.3)It is true that PC games can do much harm to us if we indulge in them.4)There are may reasons explaining the harms of PC games.5)The main reason is that laying PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will
19、 have little time for our study.模板模板1-范文范文-26)What is more,those who play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep.7)Thirdly,most games are about violent and unhealthy contents.8)As a result,we benefit less from PC games.9)Considering all these,we should deal with
20、PC games carefully.模板模板1-范文范文-310)For one thing,we shouldnt spend too much time,energy and money on the games because study is our priority.11)For another,we should try to learn something when playing them occasionally.12)In conclusion,we should try to avoid the harms of PC games and live a more mea
21、ningful life.现象解释模板现象解释模板21)As is known to all,_.2)_seem to get accustomed to_.3)In fact,_.4)The reasons of _lie in several aspects.5)Firstly,_.6)Secondly,_.7)Thirdly,_ 8)Finally,_.9)As a matter of fact,_.10)On the one hand,_.11)On the other hand,_.12 Therefore,_.现象解释模板现象解释模板2-model writing-11)As is
22、 known to all,nearly everyone on campus has access to computers.2)Students seem to get accustomed to playing PC games.3)In fact,Pc games can do much harm to us if we indulge ourselves in them.4)The reasons of the PC games harms lie in several aspects.现象解释模板现象解释模板2-model writing-25)Firstly,playing PC
23、 games is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time or our study.6)Secondly,those who play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep.7)Thirdly,most games are about violent and unhealthy contents.8)Finally,they cost us much money现象解释模板现象解释模板2-model writi
24、ng-39)As a matter of fact.We can find best ways to deal with PC games.10)On the one hand,we shouldnt spend too much time,energy and money on the games because study is our priority.11)On the other hand,we should try to learn something when playing them occasionally.12)Therefore,its up to avoid the h
25、arms of PC games.现象解释模板现象解释模板31)Nowadays_.2)For one thing,_3)For another,_.4)It is obvious that _.5)Many remarkable factors contribute to_.6)First of all,_.7)In addition,_.8)Thirdly,_.9)As to me,_.10)As we know,_.11)Besides,_ 12)In a word,_.现象解释模板现象解释模板3-Model writing-11)Nowadays,PC games have becom
26、e very popular on campus.2)For one thing,many students often spend their evenings playing such games.3)For another,more and more students indulge themselves in them.4)It is obvious that PC do much harm to us.现象解释模板现象解释模板3-Model writing-25)Many remarkable factors contribute to the harm of PC games.6)
27、First of all,playing PC games is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time of our study.7)In addition,those who play PC games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep.8)Thirdly,they cost us much money.现象解释模板现象解释模板3-Model writing-39)As to me,I only play PC games
28、 occasionally in summer or winter holidays.10)AS we know,study is our priority,we shouldnt spend too much time,energy and money on games.11)Besides,many games are involved in violent and unhealthy contents.12)In a word,we should try to avoid the harms of PC game.Practice Writing for Model(1)Directio
29、ns:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:The Role of Man in Modern FamilyYou should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:1)现代社会，越来越多的男人参与家务劳动中；现代社会，越来越多的男人参与家务劳动中；2）男人在工作之余承担家务义务的原因；男人在工作之余承担家务义务的原因；3）我的观点
30、我的观点对比选择型对比选择型41)There is a heated debate over_.2)It is commonly accepted that _.3)In contrast,others_.4)Those who hold the first opinion suggest_.5)In their view,_.6)However,others think_.7)They argue that _.8)Considering one after another,I stand on the sided of _.9)First of all,_.10)Furthermore,_
31、.Thirdly,_.12)Therefore,_.对比选择型对比选择型 4-Model Writing-11)There is a heated over the enrollment of athletic students.2)It is commonly accepted that athletic students can help universities win a place in sports competition.3)In contrast,others hold that there are many disadvantages to lower their score
32、s of enrollment.对比选择型对比选择型 4-Model Writing-24)Those who hold the first opinion suggest that universities should improve themselves in sports competition by lowering scores of athletic students.5)In their view,these students can continue their academic study as well.6)However,others think that its ha
33、rmful to enrollment system.对比选择型对比选择型 4-Model Writing-37)They argue that it is unfair for those students who get the same scores as athletic students do but cant get an admission notice.8)Considering one after another,I stand on the side of the latter opinion.9)First of all,there is an academic gap
34、between athletic students and others.对比选择型对比选择型 4-Model Writing-48)Considering one after another,I stand on the side of the latter opinion.9)First of all,there is an academic gap between athletic students and others.10)Furthermore,athletic students may feel difficult in study.11)Thirdly,athletic stu
35、dents may be looked down upon in job market.12)Therefore,universities should treat athletic students the same way as they do for the common students.对比选择型模板对比选择型模板51)Recently,we may hear quite different opinions_.2)Most people take it for granted that _.3)However,others hold_.4)a dominant idea is that _.5)They argue that _.8)As to me,I prefer_.9)On the one hand,_.10)On the other hand,_.11)Therefore,_.12)In conclusion,_.
