1、学习目标学习目标通过本节课的学习通过本节课的学习,使学生了解使学生了解英语写作高分技巧即：文章增英语写作高分技巧即：文章增“亮亮”三重奏和掌握英语写作的三重奏和掌握英语写作的方法即：书面表达六步曲方法即：书面表达六步曲学习重点学习重点学习难点学习难点怎样创作出一篇高分作文怎样创作出一篇高分作文文章增亮文章增亮三重奏三重奏书面表达书面表达六步曲六步曲Spelling(拼写拼写)Part of speech(词性词性)Subject-predicate agreement（主谓主谓一致一致）Tense(时态时态)Collocation(搭配搭配)Logic(逻辑逻辑)Punctuation(标点标
2、点)Missing the points(要点遗漏要点遗漏)Underlength or overlength(篇幅过长或过短篇幅过长或过短)书面表达遇到问题书面表达遇到问题高考英语作文评分标准高考英语作文评分标准:1.总分为总分为25分，按分，按5个档次个档次(grade)给分给分;2.评分时评分时关注关注内容要点内容要点、应用词汇应用词汇和和语法结构语法结构的数的数量和量和准确性准确性、上下文的、上下文的连贯性连贯性及语言的得体性及语言的得体性;3.词数少于词数少于100或多于或多于150的，从总分中减去的，从总分中减去2分分;4.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面拼写与标点符号是语言准
3、确性的一个方面;5.如书写差如书写差,以致以致影响交际影响交际，将分数降低一个档次，将分数降低一个档次;6.审题错误，至多审题错误，至多15分。分。第五档第五档（best）（21-25分）分）第四档（第四档（better)（16-20分）分）第三档（第三档（good）（11-15分）分）第二档第二档 (bad)（6-10分）分）第一档第一档 (worse)（15分分）0分分 空白或内容与写作任务无关或空白或内容与写作任务无关或无法辨认。无法辨认。注意：书写规范的重要性注意：书写规范的重要性干净入法眼，干净入法眼，工整是敲门砖！工整是敲门砖！文章增亮文章增亮三重奏三重奏1.高级词汇高级词汇2.句
4、型多样句型多样3.衔接顺畅衔接顺畅The six steps to writing a good composition书面表达书面表达六步曲六步曲(2015(2015年厦门市质量检查年厦门市质量检查)假设你是李华，你的美国笔友假设你是李华，你的美国笔友FranklinFranklin在孔子学院学习，他写信在孔子学院学习，他写信咨询你是否赞成咨询你是否赞成“不以规矩不成方圆不以规矩不成方圆”这一说法。请用英语写一这一说法。请用英语写一封回信，阐述你观点和看法。封回信，阐述你观点和看法。内容要点：内容要点：1 1、个人观点；、个人观点；2 2、分析说明；、分析说明；3 3、恰当的结尾。、恰当的结
5、尾。注意：注意：1 1、信件开头已写出，不计入总词数；、信件开头已写出，不计入总词数；2 2、文中不能出现考生个人信息；、文中不能出现考生个人信息；3 3、词数：、词数：120120左右。左右。参考词汇：规矩参考词汇：规矩 rules and regulationsDear Franklin,Im deeply impressed by your love for learning Chinese culture.审审题找主题题找主题 (定定:人称、时态、体裁人称、时态、体裁)主题主题：回信阐述你是否赞成回信阐述你是否赞成“不以不以 规矩不成方圆规矩不成方圆”这一说法。这一说法。抓抓细节列要点
6、细节列要点内容要点：内容要点：1 1、个人观点；、个人观点；2 2、分析说明；、分析说明；3 3、恰当的结尾。、恰当的结尾。1.rules,play a role in（观点）2.rules,regulate,behavior,in our society 3.find ourselves stuck,on the way to,at their owners will 4.plant vegetables,in public areas,litter 5.lay foundation for,protect from（总结）6.observe,live a better life 拓展句子（
7、运用文章增“亮”三重奏即：高级词汇；句型多样）个人观点个人观点：1.The rules play and important role in our society.分析分析说明说明1.Rules regulate the form of behavior in our society.2.We would find ourselves stuck in traffic all the way to school or work,as cars would go at their owners will.3.people would grow cabbages in public parks
8、or litter wherever they go.恰当的结尾恰当的结尾1.Rules and regulations lay the foundation for a civilized society and protect us from potential risks.2.Rules and regulations are well observed by all thecitizens 3.We will live an orderly life and thus enjoy the benefits of a fully civilized society.借助借助连连接词成段接
9、词成段 (运用文章增亮三重奏即：衔接顺畅）运用文章增亮三重奏即：衔接顺畅）Dear Franklin,.As the old saying.From my personal perspective,I firmly believe that There is no doubt that.Without rules,.Without rules,.Without rules,.To sum up,.Only when will we .Yours Li Hua 关注书写与卷面关注书写与卷面(抄抄)Dear Franklin,.As the old saying goes,nothing can
10、be accomplished without rules and regulations.From my personal perspective,I firmly believe that rules play an important role in our life.There is no doubt that rules regulate the norm of behavior in our society.Without rules,we would find ourselves stuck in traffic all the way to school or work,as
11、cars would go at their owners will.Without rules,there are chances that one would grow cabbages in public parks or litter wherever they go.Without rules,one would feel free to open the safety door even high above in the sky,leaving others lives at high risk.To sum up,it is rules and regulations that lay the foundation for a civilized society and protect us from potential risks.Only when rules and regulations are well observed by all thecitizens will we live an orderly life and thus enjoy the benefits of a fully civilized society.Yours Li Hua通读全文，排查错误（通读全文，排查错误（改改）
