1、新课标（WY）话题写作（十）健康生活第一篇教材考点梳理【话题点睛】针对的话题主要是体育锻炼和健康饮食。体育锻炼主要涉及:开展体育锻炼的方式;鼓励多进行体育运动,强身健体等。健康饮食主要涉及:远离垃圾食品,健康饮食的好处及具体做法等。“民以食为天”,饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“Say No to Junk Food”为题,根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。写作要点(1)垃圾食品尽管美味,但对健康无益,而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾;(2)远离垃圾食品,还应选择正确的生活方式,如:三餐要有规律,少吃零食、快餐;多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物,以提供身体必需营养;多参加户外活动写作要求(
2、1)词数:80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(2)内容必须包括上述所有要点,可适当发挥。典例分析参考词汇过多包装over packaging;有规律地regularly;营养nutritionSay No to Junk FoodNowadays,more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health.As far as I am concerned,we should say no to junk food.In a word,a healthy diet with less junk food can help
3、 make us stronger and stronger.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼要点提炼:主题是号召大家健康饮食,少吃垃圾食品。写作内容可以从以下几方面展开:(1)垃圾食品虽美味,但既不健康,又不环保;(2)倡导健康的生活方式,如按时吃三餐,多吃水果、蔬菜,多做户外运动等;(3)总结概括健康的生活方式给我们带来的好处。2.确定时态确定时态:一般现在时3.确定人称确定人称:第一人称/第二人称【写作架构】【基础写作】.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.为了保持健康的生活方式,我们应该远离垃圾食品。(stay away from)To keep a healthy lifestyle,
4、we should.2.垃圾食品的确对我们的身体有害。(do harm to)Junk food surely our body.3.健康的饮食能有助于使我们越来越强壮。(比较级+and+比较级)A healthy diet can help make us .4.从此次经历中我意识到我必须停止吃垃圾食品。(stop doing sth.)From the experience I know I junk food.stay away from junk fooddoes harm tostronger and strongermust stop eating.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子
5、。)1.Have more fruit and vegetables.They can provide the nutrition we need.(改为定语从句)_2.There is no doubt.Junk food surely does harm to our body.(合并为一句)_Have more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need.There is no doubt that junk food surely does harm to our body.【连句成文】Say No to J
6、unk FoodNowadays,more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health.As far as I am concerned,we should say no to junk food.There is no doubt that junk food is made delicious and attractive,but it surely does harm to our body.Meanwhile,the over packaging leads to much more rubbish.To get
7、 away from junk food,we should focus on how to keep a healthy lifestyle.There are many tips to follow.First,eat regularlythree meals a day on time.Try as few snacks and little fast food as possible.Second,have more fruit and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need.Whats more,do more outdo
8、or activities.As long as you are busy with something interesting,you will more probably get away from junk food.In a word,a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger.【参考谚语】1.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。2.The first wealth is health.健康是人生第一财富
9、。3.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果,医生远离我。拓展积累【相关短语】say no to junk food 拒绝垃圾食品;get away from junk food 远离垃圾食品;keep a healthy lifestyle 保持健康的生活方式;make us stronger and stronger 使我们越来越强壮;take an active part in P.E.积极上体育课;develop good habits 养成良好的习惯;stay up too late 熬夜到很晚【亮点句型】导入主题句导入主题句1.Nowa
10、days,more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health.2.Today I am glad to tell you something about how to keep a healthy lifestyle.3.Health is important but not all the students have realized its importance.4.Its known to us that a healthy lifestyle leads to a healthy life,so its imp
11、ortant for us to keep a healthy lifestyle.文章发展、过渡句文章发展、过渡句1.First of all,its a good idea to have a balanced diet.2.Doing sports can make us healthy and strong.3.Whats more,we need enough sleep to keep healthy.4.Last but not least,being happy is another way to keep healthy.文章结尾句文章结尾句1.I think all the
12、se suggestions above will be helpful to us.2.If you follow the useful advice,I think you will keep healthy.3.I hope everyone can eat healthily,do sports and have a better life.4.All in all,a healthy lifestyle can help you relax more in both study and daily life.A会工作、会学习、会运动、会娱乐就是会生活。良好的运动习惯是生活的重要组成部
13、分。请你根据以下要点提示,以“Sports Make Me Strong and Confident”为题,写一篇短文。写作要点(1)每天早晨6:30起床,做半个小时的早操;晚饭后散步1小时;(2)步行上学;(3)主动上体育课,积极参加课外活动;(4)身体健壮,精力充沛;运动会常得第一。实战演练写作要求(1)80100词。开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;(2)内容合理,要点齐全,语句正确、连贯,书写规范,可适当发挥;(3)不得出现真实姓名及校名。Sports Make Me Strong and ConfidentEverybody,men or women,young or old,shoul
14、d have a good habit of doing sports.So should I,and so I do._One possible version:Sports Make Me Strong and ConfidentEverybody,men or women,young or old,should have a good habit of doing sports.So should I,and so I do.In the morning,I usually get up at 6:30,and do morning exercises for half an hour.
15、After breakfast,I walk to school,which is also a kind of exercise.In school,I take an active part in P.E.Sometimes we play football and volleyball.Sometimes we play basketball,table tennis or badminton.Football is my favorite sport.I also take part in after-class activities.In the evening after supp
16、er,I often take a walk along the street near my house for an hour with my parents.I like doing sports,because it makes me healthy,strong and energetic.I often get the first prize in the school sports meeting.I will keep the good habits all my life.B2019乐山为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品,政府出台了陪餐制,要求从4 月 1 日起,学校领导陪同
17、学生用餐。请你根据以下要点,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自己的看法。提示(1)学生吃得健康、安全;(2)及时发现就餐问题;(3)食堂提供食品多样;(4)父母更加放心。注意(1)词数:80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(3)参考词汇:规定regulation(n.);食堂 cafeteria(n.);营养的 nutritious(adj.)A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools.It as
18、ks the school leaders to eat with students in their cafeterias._One possible version:A new food safety regulation was put into use on April 1 to improve nutrition and food safety in schools.It asks the school leaders to eat with students in their cafeterias.Thanks to the regulation,something great h
19、as taken place in our school.First,we eat more healthily and safely than before.Second,if there is any problem about food safety or others,our school leaders are able to know and solve it quickly.Also,the cafeteria workers are trying to provide different kinds of food for us.In other words,our parents neednt worry about our diet any more.We teenagers are still young and need to grow healthily,so I think the new regulation is really good and necessary.I hope it will be carried on forever.
