1、新课标（WY）话题写作（八）观点态度第一篇教材考点梳理【话题点睛】观点态度类文章通常是给出热点且有争议的话题,让学生阐述自己的观点。常考话题有上网、课程设置、课堂活动方式等。现在,社会上补习机构火爆。在各种媒体上,我们经常可以看到“名师名校”、“个性化教学”、“终极押题”、“秒杀中考”等广告词。你相信这样的宣传吗?你所在的学习小组针对这一社会现象,围绕“课余时间我们应该更多地去做什么才能够得到全面的发展”展开了讨论,最终大家形成了以下观点:典例分析请你根据同学们的上述观点,并结合自己的亲身体验,就此问题陈述自己的看法。内容必须包含以下要点:(1)Would you like to take a
2、fter-school classes?Why or why not?(Please give 3 reasons.)(2)What would you like to do in your spare time?(3)Please tell us one of your stories of this kind of experience.注意(1)词数:100左右;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。【思路点拨】1.要点提炼要点提炼:主题是陈述对课外补习的看法。共有三个要点:(1)Your opinions about after-school classes.(2)What do you
3、 like to do in your spare time?(3)Your experience.2.确定时态确定时态:一般现在时/一般过去时/现在完成时。3.确定人称确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.我过去也常常上这些不同种类的课程。(used to do)I to these different kinds of classes,too.2.我开始花费更多的时间读书、做运动和参加一些社会活动。(spend time doing sth.)I began to and taking part in some social activit
4、ies.used to gospend more time reading,doing sports3.在学习中我没有落后于其他人。(fall behind)I others in study.4.我更喜欢有时间享受自然。(prefer to do sth.)I time to enjoy nature.5.它是了解世界的一种明智的方式。(a wise way to)Its the world.didnt fall behindprefer to havea wise way to know about6.我经常通过看城市周围的动植物、岩石来好好利用我的空闲时间。(putto good use
5、)I often by watching animals,plants,rocks around my city.7.它给予我一个加深我对课本的理解的机会。(offer sb.sth.;deepen ones understanding)It to of my textbooks.put my spare time to good useoffered me an opportunity deepen my understanding.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)1.It seems that many students go to after-school classes.It is
6、 just a waste of time and money.(用连词连接两个句子)_2.I still remember that day.I went to the Forest Park this spring on that day!(改为含有定语从句的句子)_It seems that many students go to after-school classes,but it is just a waste of time and money.I still remember that day when I went to the Forest Park this spring
7、!3.Now I am becoming more creative and confident than those.Those are always involved in taking after-school classes.(改为含有定语从句的句子)_Now I am becoming more creative and confident than those who are always involved in taking after-school classes.【连句成文】It seems that many students go to after-school clas
8、ses,but it is just a waste of time and money.I used to go to these different kinds of classes,too.But later I realized I couldnt do that any more.I began to spend more time reading,doing sports and taking part in some social activities.Meanwhile,I didnt fall behind others in study.I prefer to have t
9、ime to enjoy nature.Its a wise way to know about the world.So I often put my spare time to good use by watching animals,plants and rocks around my city.I still remember that day when I went to the Forest Park this spring!And I found a few plants appearing in my biology books.It offered me an opportu
10、nity to deepen my understanding of my textbooks.Learning by using is a real practice.I have benefited a lot from it.Now I am becoming more creative and confident than those who are always involved in taking after-school classes.【参考谚语】1.Great hopes make great man.伟大的希望造就伟大的人物。2.A good beginning is ha
11、lf done.良好的开端是成功的一半。拓展积累【相关短语】get good grades 取得好成绩;fall behind 落后;provide sb.with sth.为某人提供某物;be mad at 对疯狂;spend time with sb.与某人度过时光;in ones spare time 在某人空闲时间;get along well with与和睦相处;fight against sb.与某人对抗;keep the promise 信守诺言【亮点句型】导入主题句导入主题句1.Recently we had a survey about2.Our school did a s
12、urvey to ask if3.Here are the results of the survey on how my class spend our lucky money.4.Heres a report about my group members ideas.5.Different people have different opinions about文章发展、过渡句文章发展、过渡句1.Some people think that2.But others dont agree with them.3.The survey said that about 30%of the peo
13、ple4.The survey suggests that5.About 90%of the students agree with the idea.Here are three reasons.6.First of allSecondlyWhats more文章结尾句文章结尾句1.All in all,they think that2.In my opinion,we should3.I think everyone has his own way of,but the most important thing is that we shouldA2019鄂州现在越来越多的学生使用“作业帮
14、”这个APP 来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此,不同的人有不同的看法。请根据以下文字的提示,并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。实战演练优点1.及时帮助学生解决在学习中遇到的困难;2.在家就能学习,简单,方便;3.可以选择自己喜欢的老师,学习兴趣更浓缺点1.有的学生假装学习,事实上在玩游戏;2.有的学生不想独立思考,直接照抄答案,他们根本不关心自己的学习,只是虚度光阴你的建议联系实际,给出自己合理的建议要求(1)词数:80-100(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数);(2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息。参考词汇 convenient 方便的,便利的pretend to do假
15、装做think independently 独立思考Today,more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang.However,different people have different ideas about it.Some people think _One possible version:Today,more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang.However,different people have different ideas about it.Some peopl
16、e think its useful.The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their study in time.Its easy and convenient for them.They can study at home.They can choose their own teachers they like,and they will be more interested in study.However,others dont think so.They think some students jus
17、t pretend to study.In fact they play games.They dont want to think independently,but only copy the answers.They dont care about their study at all.Its a waste of time.I think its good for students who are hard-working.They can study better.But for students who dont want to study,its very bad.B2019赤峰
18、改编你校正在开展主题为“What should a good student be like?”的讨论,校园小记者采访了一些老师和家长。请根据采访内容,结合自己的观点,用英语写一篇短文与大家分享。老师的主要观点家长的主要观点你的观点热爱学校,遵守校规团结同学,礼貌待人健康快乐善良自信要求(1)用上表格中所有要点,可适当发挥,100词左右(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数);(2)文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名和地名。What should a good student be like?Teachers and parents have different opinions about what a
19、 good student should be like.As for teachers,they think _One possible version:What should a good student be like?Teachers and parents have different opinions about what a good student should be like.As for teachers,they think good students should love their school and obey the rules.Good students ar
20、e supposed to get on well with each other,and they are polite to others.As for parents,they think good students should not be only healthy but also happy.At the same time,they should be kind and confident.In my opinion,good students should be hard-working and study well.They also should always be ready to help others.Whats more,they should be good at doing different kinds of sports and keep healthy.Last but not least,good students should be the ones who are thankful to society and their parents.
