1、命题探索命题探索三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵话题思维导图话题思维导图话题思维导图话题思维导图命题探索分析福建近分析福建近7年中考书面表达可知，未考查与年中考书面表达可知，未考查与“天气；旅游天气；旅游与交通与交通”相关的书面表达。再结合全国近年真题可知，该话题通相关的书面表达。再结合全国近年真题可知，该话题通常有以下命题角度：常有以下命题角度：介绍某次旅行介绍某次旅行；谈论旅行的感受谈论旅行的感受；对某次旅行的看法及建议。对某次旅行的看法及建议。典例剖析典例剖析 (2019娄底改编娄底改编)“读万卷书，行万里路读万卷书，行万里路”，研学旅行现在受到，研学旅行现在受到教育主管部门和学校的
2、高度重视，也深受学生和家长的欢迎。教育主管部门和学校的高度重视，也深受学生和家长的欢迎。假如你们学校的英文网站就假如你们学校的英文网站就研学旅行研学旅行中需要注意的事项中需要注意的事项发帖，发帖，征集建议。请征集建议。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文，进行跟帖回复。，进行跟帖回复。词数词数80左右。左右。一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章审主题：研学旅行的注意事项审主题：研学旅行的注意事项审时态：一般现在时审时态：一般现在时审审文体：说明文文体：说明文审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称内容要点：内容要点：1.健康饮食；健康饮食；2.安全出行；安全出行；3.遇险报警
3、。遇险报警。参考词汇：参考词汇：报警报警 call the police注意事项：注意事项：1.跟帖回复时可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；跟帖回复时可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章 Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students.What should we pay atten
4、tion to when were having a study trip?Heres my advice._一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章1角度角度介绍某次旅行介绍某次旅行句式扩写范例句式扩写范例 1.The weather here is cool and cloudy.The weather here is cool and cloudy,just right for walking.2.Today I went on a school trip.Today I went on a school trip.We visited the Science Museum and it
5、 was really interesting.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章句句 子子 扩扩 写写 1.I camped in the mountains with some friends.(扩写具体活动扩写具体活动)_2.We took the train to the museum.(扩写感受扩写感受)_I camped in the mountains with some friends.We put up a tent and cooked outside.We took the train to the museum.It was so hot on the slow
6、train.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章3.There were too many people in the park.(扩写结果扩写结果)_There were too many people in the park.I couldnt really see or hear the guide.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章2角度角度旅行的感受旅行的感受好句范例好句范例3.I think todays school trip was exciting.I really like it very much.4.My school trip was great!We ha
7、d so much fun!5.Its really interesting,isnt it?Its a great way to spend a Saturday afternoon.6.All in all,it was an exciting day.I will never forget that day.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章句句 子子 仿仿 写写 4.我觉得这个地方值得再次来参观，因为我们从中学到了很多。我觉得这个地方值得再次来参观，因为我们从中学到了很多。_5.我们在这次旅行中获得了太多的乐趣。我们在这次旅行中获得了太多的乐趣。_I think the plac
8、e is worth visiting again because we have learnt a lot from it.We got so much fun in this trip.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章6.总之，这次旅行对我来说很难忘。让我懂得了如何与他人友好总之，这次旅行对我来说很难忘。让我懂得了如何与他人友好相处。相处。_All in all,this trip is unforgettable for me.It taught me how to get along well with others.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章3角度角度对某种旅行
9、的看法及建议对某种旅行的看法及建议好句范例好句范例7.In my opinion/In my view/As far as I am concerned/As for me,it is good for students.8.To begin with/Firstly/First,travelling can make us relax.9.Last but not least,we can know more custom and culture.10.We should pay attention to the safety.11.To be honest,school trips giv
10、e us a good chance that we can get along well with our classmates.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章句句 子子 仿仿 写写 7.在我看来，参加研学旅行是一种很好的教育活动。在我看来，参加研学旅行是一种很好的教育活动。_8.首先，多锻炼、充足的睡眠可以使我们旅行愉快。首先，多锻炼、充足的睡眠可以使我们旅行愉快。_In my opinion,taking part in study trips is a kind of very good education activity.To begin with,taking more
11、 exercise and getting enough sleep can make the trip pleasant.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章9.最后，但同样重要的是我们可以找老师或者朋友们寻求帮助。最后，但同样重要的是我们可以找老师或者朋友们寻求帮助。_10.说实话，你可以乘高铁去北京而不是坐大巴车。说实话，你可以乘高铁去北京而不是坐大巴车。_Last but not least,we can ask teachers or friends for help.To be honest,you can take a highspeed train to Beijing i
12、nstead of taking a bus.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段语语 段段 练练 习习 1介绍某次旅行介绍某次旅行 We will organize a trip to _(目的地目的地).Im really very happy because _(理理由由).In the morning,we will _(活动活动1).In the afternoon,we will _(活动活动2).Im sure we will _(感受感受)the nearby villagethis is my first time to
13、 go therefeed animalslearn to cook mealshave a good time一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句语语 段段 练练 习习 2 2旅行的感受旅行的感受 Last week,our class organized a trip to the Science Museum.We saw _(经历经历1)there.The guide also told us _(经历经历2).We all _(感受感受1).All in all,we thought the trip was _(感受感受2)great inventionsthe develop
14、ment of some inventionsfelt excited when we saw those great inventionsan unforgettable experience一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句语语 段段 练练 习习 3对某种旅行的看法及建议对某种旅行的看法及建议 First,we should _(建建议议).Drink clean hot water._(原因原因).Second,we should pay attention to the safety.We should _(具体做法具体做法1).At last,when we have some
15、 trouble in life or our study,we can _(具体做法具体做法2)take more exercise and get enough sleepIt is good for our healthtake the safe taxi or car when we go outask our teachers or friends for help一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章（针对（针对“典例剖析典例剖析”的优秀范文）的优秀范文）Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with p
16、arents and students.What should we pay attention to when were having a study trip?Heres my advice.First,we should take more exercise and get enough sleep.Drink clean hot water.It is good for our health.Second,we should pay attention to the safety.We should take the safe taxi or car when we 一阶 审好题三阶练
17、语段&成篇章二阶写好句go out.When we meet something strange or find someone in danger,please call the police at once.At last,when we have some trouble in life or our study,we can ask our teachers or friends for help.I hope we will have a wonderful trip.写作练兵写作练兵 假如你是李华，是一名九年级的学生。你的一个美国笔友假如你是李华，是一名九年级的学生。你的一个美国笔
18、友Tom七七月底要来你所在的城市游学，需要你提供一些相关信息。请你月底要来你所在的城市游学，需要你提供一些相关信息。请你根据图表提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件。词数根据图表提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件。词数80左右。左右。写作练兵写作练兵注意事项：注意事项：1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名；请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名；写作练兵写作
19、练兵 Im glad that I can help you with some information.The temperature will be around 30.It will be totally sunny at the end of July,and sometimes hot.So,youd better wear a Tshirt and take sun cream with you.The best place to go at that time is Sanhe Town.You can learn more about the Chinese history as well as enjoy the delicious food there.If you need further information,be free to email me.
