1、命题探索命题探索教材链接教材链接三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵写作技巧写作技巧11巧用并列连词巧用并列连词 分析杭州近分析杭州近10年中考真题可知，关于年中考真题可知，关于“人物介绍人物介绍”这一话这一话题在题在2019年考查介绍外貌特征、性格特点、兴趣爱好，设题背年考查介绍外貌特征、性格特点、兴趣爱好，设题背景为介绍自己弟弟的长相、性格和兴趣。结合全国近年中考真景为介绍自己弟弟的长相、性格和兴趣。结合全国近年中考真题可知，此话题通常还有以下命题角度：介绍个人优势或特殊题可知，此话题通常还有以下命题角度：介绍个人优势或特殊之处、个人梦想及如何实现、介绍想感谢的人及如何表达感恩之处、个人梦
2、想及如何实现、介绍想感谢的人及如何表达感恩之情。之情。命题探索教材链接杭州作文题目近几年一直考查邮件形式。要求考生阅读邮杭州作文题目近几年一直考查邮件形式。要求考生阅读邮件后写一封回信或者写一封邮件。整体分题干、提示两部分；件后写一封回信或者写一封邮件。整体分题干、提示两部分；审题技巧如下：审题技巧如下：从题干可以审出文体和主题；从提示可以审出写作要点、从题干可以审出文体和主题；从提示可以审出写作要点、时态和人称。时态和人称。审题技巧审题技巧一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句典例剖析典例剖析(2019杭州杭州)假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友友Linda的电
3、子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复，词数阅读后回复，词数80左右。左右。一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句1.My sister has a round face.She has bright eyes and a small mouth.(用用with升格升格)My sister has a round face with bright eyes and a small mouth.2.He used to be thin.He is big and strong
4、 now.(用感叹句升格用感叹句升格)He used to be thin,but look how big and strong he is now!1 1角度角度介绍外貌特征介绍外貌特征一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 升升 格格 范范 例例句句 子子 升升 格格 1.She is tall and beautiful.She has long curly hair.(用用with升格升格)_2.He is very handsome.He has beautiful blue eyes.(用用and升格升格)_3.He isnt tall or short.(用用be
5、of medium height升格升格)_She is tall and beautiful with long curly hair.He is very handsome and has beautiful blue eyes.Hes of medium height.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句3.Im shy.Im shy so its not easy for me to make friends.八八(上上)Unit 3 P214.Paula used to be really quiet.Paula used to be really quiet.She was a
6、lways silent in class.九九(全全)Unit 4 P262 2角度角度介绍性格特点介绍性格特点句句 子子 扩扩 写写 范范 例例 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句5.Now Li Wen has really changed.Now Li Wen has really changed.He has become more outgoing and made some good friends in school.九九(全全)Unit 4 P30一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句4.My friend Lily is kind.(扩写具体表现扩写具体表现)_5.
7、Jack used to be shy.(扩写原因扩写原因)_ My friend Lily is really kind and she often helps others.Jack used to be shy because his face always turned red when he talked to girls.句句 子子 扩扩 写写 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 6.He is hardworking.(扩写结果扩写结果)_7.Kate is a friendly girl.(扩写具体表现扩写具体表现)_ 8.Suzy is wellorganized.(扩
8、写具体表现扩写具体表现)_He is hardworking so he always gets good grades in exams.Kate is a friendly girl.She always has a smile on her face and looks happy.Suzy is wellorganized.She keeps all her things in good order.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句6.Mary likes music.Mary likes music.She can sing and dance.七七(下下)Unit 1 P5
9、7.I like to watch different kinds of movies.I like to watch different kinds of movies depending on how I feel that day.3 3角度角度介绍兴趣爱好介绍兴趣爱好句句 子子 扩扩 写写 范范 例例 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句8.I love fruit.I love fruit.I think its healthy.9.My favorite subject is science.My favorite subject is science,because its
10、interesting.10.I often exercise at the park.I often exercise at the park because I love the clean air and sunshine.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句9.Jack prefers music.(扩写具体表现扩写具体表现)_10.I enjoy sweet food.(扩写具体表现扩写具体表现)_11.Paul enjoys doing sports.(扩写具体表现扩写具体表现)_Jack prefers music that he can dance to.句句 子子 扩扩
11、写写 I enjoy sweet food so much that I eat lots of icecream in summer.Paul enjoys doing sports and he plays basketball with many other boys on weekends.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句12.Mandy often does some reading in her spare time.(扩写原因扩写原因)_13.Rick likes playing football in his free time.(扩写原因扩写原因)_14.I pref
12、er coffee to milk.(扩写具体表现扩写具体表现)_ Mandy often does some reading in her spare time because its a good way for her to open up her mind.Rick likes playing football in his free time because it can make him healthy.I prefer coffee to milk.And I drink a cup of coffee in the morning every day.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成
13、篇章二阶写好句11.He is able to work independently and manages his class well.12.She is so knowledgeable that she can tell us thousands of events happened in the past.4 4角度角度介绍个人优势或特殊之处介绍个人优势或特殊之处好好 句句 记记 背背一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句13.I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult the problem is.14.What
14、 a great person he is!I can learn a lot from him.15.My teacher is too energetic to feel tired.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句15.他能够在短时间里解决掉学生们反映的问题。他能够在短时间里解决掉学生们反映的问题。_16.她工作如此努力以至于常常回家很晚。她工作如此努力以至于常常回家很晚。_He can/is able to solve problems that students reflect in a short time.She is so hardworking that she of
15、ten goes home late.句句 子子 仿仿 写写 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句17.不论何时我想放弃，他都能帮助我渡过难关。不论何时我想放弃，他都能帮助我渡过难关。_18.他可以把课堂变成一个家庭！多么有趣而生动！他可以把课堂变成一个家庭！多么有趣而生动！_He can/is able to make his class a family.How interesting and lively!He can/is able to help me out of trouble no matter when I want to give up.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二
16、阶写好句练语段练语段He is very _(外貌外貌1).He has _ _ _ (外貌外貌2).He usually wears _(外貌外貌3).I like him because he is really cool and fun.介绍外貌特征介绍外貌特征tall/handsome/.straight/curly brown hair/short straight hair/.a Tshirt and sports shoes 语段练习语段练习1 1一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句My English teacher is a ver
17、y kind person(性格性格1),_(具体表现具体表现1).He is also hardworking(性格性格2).This makes him _ (具体表具体表现现2).He has helped almost every student in our class(性格性格3).So the students _(具体表现具体表现3).介绍性格特点介绍性格特点who always has like him very muchone of the best teachers in our school a big smile on his face 语段练习语段练习2 2 His
18、 favorite music is _(介绍喜欢的音乐类介绍喜欢的音乐类别别)because _(原因原因1),and this kind of music is often about our life.And_ _(原因原因2).It is also a good way to learn English.When he listens to pop music,he will _(感受感受).So thats why he loves this kind of music best.介绍兴趣爱好介绍兴趣爱好pop music feel very relaxed it is very p
19、opular among people and it is very interesting it is easy to learn 语段练习语段练习3 3一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句She is a kind and helpful person._ _(针对能力的具体表现针对能力的具体表现1).She can sing and dance so well that _ _(针对能力的具体表现针对能力的具体表现2)介绍个人优势或特殊之处介绍个人优势或特殊之处She is always ready to help she often gives performances at ou
20、r others when theyre in trouble school parties 语段练习语段练习4 4一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章Dear Linda，Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome.Now let me tell you something about my brother.He is thirteen years old,easygoing and humorouswe get along really well.He loves different cultu
21、res.He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句My brother is also cute.Hes of medium height with short straight hair.He is good at Chinese Kungfu,and usually wears Tshirts and jeans.Thanks again for your help.Yours，Li Ping一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句(2020原创原创)假定你是李平，想参加假定你是李
22、平，想参加China Daily举办的以举办的以“梦梦想职业体验想职业体验”为主题的为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请你给主办人年夏令营活动。请你给主办人Mr.Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。写作练兵写作练兵To:Li PingFrom:SmithDear Li Ping，Thank you for taking part in 2019 Summer Camp Activity about dream job experience which is held by China Daily.写作练兵写作练兵 Please tell me something
23、about you!What kind of person are you and what are your hobby and dream?Hope to hear from you soon.Yours，SmithTo:SmithFrom:Li PingDear Mr.Smith，_ Yours，Li Ping写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵To:SmithFrom:Li PingDear Mr.Smith,_ Its my pleasure to introduce myself to you.My friends say Im an outgoing and helpful girl
24、,and its easy for me to get on well with others.As for my hobby,reading is what I like best.In my spare time I spend much time reading books especially on medicine.Actually my parents are both doctors.They influence me a lot,so to be a 写作练兵写作练兵 Yours，Li Pinggood doctor is my dream.I have been studyi
25、ng hard to enter a good medical university.Besides,Im going to take more volunteer work to help sick people.Those experiences may help me become an excellent doctor.I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.写作练兵巧用并列连词 并列连词用于把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来，并列连词用于把两个或两个以上的简单句连接起来，且各个分句之间存在着一定的
26、逻辑关系。且各个分句之间存在着一定的逻辑关系。1.顺接关系：顺接关系：I cooked lunch.I made a cake.I cooked lunch and made a cake.2.转折关系：转折关系：I love the book.The book is too expensive.I love the book but it is too expensive.句式连接范例句式连接范例 写作练兵写作技巧3.因果关系：因果关系：He got up late.He missed the train.He got up late,so he missed the train.4.选择关
27、系：选择关系：Can you play the drums?Can you play the guitar?Can you play the drums or play the guitar?5.并列连词短语：并列连词短语：In her spare time,she either swims or runs.Both Jim and Jack are tall.My uncle can not only draw but also sing.I like neither sports nor music.写作练兵巧用并列连词写作练兵写作技巧1.She made a wish.She blew
28、out the candles.(用用and升格升格)_2.I received an invitation.I didnt accept it.(用用but升格升格)_3.He ate too much.He became fatter.(用用so升格升格)_ She made a wish and blew out the candles.I received an invitation but I didnt accept it.He ate too much so he became fatter.即学即练即学即练写作练兵巧用并列连词4.Lily is good at playing
29、the piano.Lucy is good at playing the piano,too.(用用both.and.升格升格)_5.She is a doctor.She is also a dancer.(用用not only.but also.升格升格)_ She is not only a doctor but also a dancer.Both Lily and Lucy are good at playing the piano.写作练兵巧用并列连词6.You or he will go there.(用用either.or升格升格)_7.I dont like juice.I dont like tea,either.(用用neither.nor升格升格)_Either you or he will go there.I like neither juice nor tea.写作练兵巧用并列连词
