1、命题探索命题探索教材链接教材链接三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵分析杭州近分析杭州近10年中考真题可知，未考查过年中考真题可知，未考查过“环境保护环境保护”类书面表达，但分析全国近年中考真题可知，该话题为高频话类书面表达，但分析全国近年中考真题可知，该话题为高频话题，通常有以下命题角度：目前的环境问题、如何保护环境及题，通常有以下命题角度：目前的环境问题、如何保护环境及保护环境的意义。保护环境的意义。命题探索教材链接(2019湘西改编湘西改编)为了把杭州建设得更加美丽，我们应从小事为了把杭州建设得更加美丽，我们应从小事做起，让我们的家乡变得更美。作为学生，请你以做起，让我们的家乡变得更美。
2、作为学生，请你以“Start out small”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书为题，用英语写一篇倡议书。审文体：应用文审文体：应用文典例剖析典例剖析一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章1.多种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木；多种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木；2.购物时重复使用袋子；购物时重复使用袋子；3.不乱扔垃圾，保持河流的干净；不乱扔垃圾，保持河流的干净；4.遵守公共秩序，做文明学生遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。审要点：多种植树木花草、重审要点：多种植树木花草、重复使用购物袋、不乱扔垃圾、复使用购物袋、不乱扔垃圾、遵守公共秩序遵守公共秩序一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章要求：要求：1.根据提
3、示内容，不要逐字翻译；根据提示内容，不要逐字翻译；2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；3.词数词数80左右。左右。Start out small Hi,everyone.We should try our best to make our hometown Hangzhou more beautiful and comfortable.What can we do for our hometown？_一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章1.The river was really dirty.The river was really dirty.Even the
4、 bottom of the river was full of rubbish.九九(全全)Unit 13 P972.Sharks may disappear one day.Sharks may disappear one day if we do not do something to stop the sale of shark fins.九九(全全)Unit 13 P991角度角度目前的环境问题目前的环境问题句句 子子 扩扩 写写 范范 例例 一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章3.The air is badly polluted.The air is badly pollut
5、ed because there are more cars on the road these days.九九(全全)Unit 13 P984.Elephants are in great danger.Elephants are in great danger.People cut down many trees so elephants are losing their homes.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章1.Water pollution is becoming worse and worse.(扩写做法扩写做法)_2.We must keep the air fres
6、h.(扩写原因扩写原因)_Water pollution is becoming worse and worse.We should call on the people around us to protect water.We must keep the air fresh because we need to have a healthy living environment.句句 子子 扩扩 写写 一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章3.The land will become less and less.(扩写条件扩写条件)_4.Many people like using pl
7、astic bags.(扩写观点看法扩写观点看法)_5.Some people throw the rubbish everywhere.(扩写结果扩写结果)_ The land will become less and less if we dont stop cutting down trees.Many people like using plastic bags.Its really a bad habit.Some people throw the rubbish everywhere,so our environment becomes worse and worse.一阶 审好题
8、二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章5.Everyone should help to clean up the river.九九(全全)Unit 13 P976.I think simple things like bringing a bag to shopping can help (reduce waste pollution)九九(全全)Unit 13 P987.To cut down air pollution,we should take the bus or subway instead of driving.九九(全全)Unit 13 P982角度角度如何保护环境如何保护环境好好 句
9、句 记记 背背 一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章8.Remember to throw rubbish in the bins and keep public places clean and beautiful for everyone.九九(全全)Unit 13 P989.We must save the trees and not buy things made of ivory.10.We can use less water and plant more trees.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章6.我们必须养成节约用水的好习惯。我们必须养成节约用水的好习惯。_7.
10、我们可以通过种植更多的树木来减少空气污染。我们可以通过种植更多的树木来减少空气污染。_We must develop the good habit of saving water.We can reduce air pollution by planting more trees.句句 子子 仿仿 写写 一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章8.每个人都应该帮助保护环境。每个人都应该帮助保护环境。_9.我认为像步行去上学这样简单的事情对环境是有帮助的。我认为像步行去上学这样简单的事情对环境是有帮助的。_10.为了节约水，我们可以在刷牙的时候关掉水龙头。为了节约水，我们可以在刷牙的时候关掉水龙
11、头。_ Everyone should help to protect the environment.I think simple things like walking to school is helpful to the environment.To save water,we can turn off the taps when we brush our teeth.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章11.So together,our actions can make a difference and lead to a better future.九九(全全)Unit 13
12、 P9812.If we are active in protecting the environment,our next generation will benefit a lot.3角度角度保护环境的意义保护环境的意义好好 句句 记记 背背 一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章11.环境保护将对我们的健康生活产生很大的影响。环境保护将对我们的健康生活产生很大的影响。_12.如果每个人都为建设绿色城市做贡献，世界将变得更美好。如果每个人都为建设绿色城市做贡献，世界将变得更美好。_Environment protection will make a big difference to o
13、ur healthy life.If everyone makes a contribution to building a green city,the world will become more beautiful.句句 子子 仿仿 写写 一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段The environment problems _(现现状状),such as _(具体表具体表现现)and so on.It is said that _(观观点点).So we should _(解决解决措施措施)目前的环境问题目前的环境问题are ver
14、y serious these daysair pollution,noise pollution,white pollutionthe air pollution is a big pollutiondo something to protect the environment 语段练习语段练习1一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句I think we should _(做法做法1).And when we brush our teeth,wed better _(做法做法2).Also,we should _(做法做法3)and _(做法做法4).如何保护环境如何保护环境turn of
15、f the lights to save electricity turn off the tapsadvise our use reusable bags when shoppingwhen we leave the room parents to take the bus to work instead of driving 语段练习语段练习2一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we _(意义意义).Then our world will _(影响影响).So lets take acti
16、ons together.保护环境的意义保护环境的意义make a difference be more beautiful 语段练习语段练习3一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章Start out smallHi,everyone.We should try our best to make our hometown Hangzhou more beautiful and comfortable.What can we do for our hometown?First of all,more trees and grass should be planted every y
17、ear in our hometown.We cant cut down trees to make wood.Its helpful to make our hometown a good place to live in.Second,when we go shopping,we can reuse bags in order to produce less rubbish.Third,一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句rubbish cant be thrown away everywhere.Instead,we should put it in the dustbins.Fin
18、ally,in public,we should wait in line and obey the rules which everyone should follow.In a word,we should protect the environment.Lets start out small to be civilized students!(2020原创原创)垃圾分类既是垃圾分类既是“老话题老话题”，也是，也是“新时尚新时尚”。2019年起，年起，全国地级及以上城市将全面启动生活垃圾分类工作。为此你就全国地级及以上城市将全面启动生活垃圾分类工作。为此你就“人们对垃圾分类的态度人们对垃
19、圾分类的态度”对你们小区内对你们小区内100名名10岁到岁到30岁的居民岁的居民进行了问卷调查，下图是统计结果。请你简要描述下图信息，并进行了问卷调查，下图是统计结果。请你简要描述下图信息，并谈谈你对垃圾分类的理解。谈谈你对垃圾分类的理解。写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵A.一直进行垃圾分类处理一直进行垃圾分类处理(Always)B.偶尔进行垃圾分类处理偶尔进行垃圾分类处理(Sometimes)C.没有进行过垃圾分类处理没有进行过垃圾分类处理(Never)提示词提示词：分类：分类 sort v.注意注意：1.词数词数80左右；左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
20、；3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。写作练兵写作练兵 Recently,I have done a survey among 100 people on their attitudes towards sorting rubbish.Here are the results._写作练兵For the first group(aged 10 to 18),there are 19.05%of people always sort rubbish.52.38%of people sometimes sor
21、t rubbish,and 28.57%of people never sort rubbish.For the second group(aged 19 to 30),only 9.74%of people always sort rubbish.50.44%of people sometimes sort rubbish and 39.82%of people never do it._写作练兵 In fact,some rubbish is recyclable and some is dangerous.To protect the environment and save energy,I think it is necessary to sort rubbish.And I have got into the habit of sorting rubbish.
