1、1 1命题探索命题探索2 2教材链接教材链接3 3佳句储备佳句储备4 4三阶攻关三阶攻关5 5写作练兵写作练兵命题探索命题探索 分析河北近分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“人物介绍人物介绍”这一话题，仅考查了这一话题，仅考查了1次：次：2017年考查了从年考查了从“自身的优点、如何提自身的优点、如何提升自我和将来的梦想升自我和将来的梦想”三方面介绍自己。三方面介绍自己。分析全国近年真题可知，全国关于这个话题相关的命题角度分析全国近年真题可知，全国关于这个话题相关的命题角度有：有：从从“个人基本信息、外貌特征、性格特点、兴趣爱好个人基本信息、外貌特征、性
2、格特点、兴趣爱好”等方等方面介绍自己或他人，介绍想感谢的人及如何表达感恩之情。面介绍自己或他人，介绍想感谢的人及如何表达感恩之情。教材链接教材链接人教教材中涉及人教教材中涉及“人物介绍人物介绍”这个话题的单元具体如下这个话题的单元具体如下（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）：（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）：写作角度写作角度年级、单元（年级、单元（Unit）话题（话题（Topic）外貌特征外貌特征七七(下下)Unit 9 What does he look like？Physical appearance性格特点性格特点八八(上上)Unit 3 Im more outgoing than my
3、 sister.Personal traits九九(全全)Unit 4 I used to be afraid of dark.How we have changed写作角度写作角度年级、单元（年级、单元（Unit）话题（话题（Topic）兴趣爱好兴趣爱好七七(下下)Unit 1 Can you play the guitar？Making new friends八八(上上)Unit 4 Whats the best movie theater？Your town八八(上上)Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game show？Entertainment九九(全全)U
4、nit 9 I like music that I can dance to.Music and movies优秀品质优秀品质九九(全全)Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7.School days佳句储备佳句储备1 1角度角度介绍自身优点或特殊之处介绍自身优点或特殊之处【好句范例】【好句范例】1.He has the ability to run the company,and everything is in great order.2.Not only does he work hard but also he is good
5、at playing basketball.3.My sister has more experience on how to play the violin well.【句子仿写】【句子仿写】1.她有能力照顾好自己，从不让父母担心。她有能力照顾好自己，从不让父母担心。_2.我的哥哥不仅写作很好，而且擅长弹钢琴。我的哥哥不仅写作很好，而且擅长弹钢琴。_3.丽萨在如何与人相处方面有更多的经验。丽萨在如何与人相处方面有更多的经验。_She has the ability to take care of herself and never lets her parents worry about h
6、er.Not only does my brother do well in writing but also he is good at playing the piano.Lisa has more experience on how to get on/along well with others.2 2角度角度介绍外貌特征介绍外貌特征【句子升格范例】【句子升格范例】4.He used to be thin.He is big and strong now.(用感叹句升格用感叹句升格)He used to be thin,but look how big and strong he is
7、 now!人教九人教九(全全)Unit 4 P265.He has beautiful blue eyes.(用最高级升格用最高级升格)He has the most beautiful blue eyes I have ever seen.6.Im not very tall and I have curly hair.My hair looks like black waves.(用定语从句升格用定语从句升格)Im not very tall and I have curly hair that looks like black waves.【句子升格】【句子升格】4.My brother
8、 used to be short.He is tall and handsome now.(用感叹句用感叹句 升格升格)_ _5.Lucy has sweet smiles.(用最高级升格用最高级升格)_6.I like her bright eyes.Her eyes make her look really pretty.(用定语从句用定语从句 升格升格)_My brother used to be short,but look how tall and handsome he is now!Lucy has the sweetest smiles I have ever seen.I
9、like her bright eyes which make her look really pretty.3 3角度角度介绍性格特点介绍性格特点【好句范例】【好句范例】7.I know she cares about me because shes always there to listen.人教八人教八(上上)Unit 3 P218.Mr.Li is strict in our studies,but he always encourages us and gives us support.上海牛津七上海牛津七(下下)Unit 1 P39.He is so kind that he i
10、s always ready to help others.10.Mr.Wang is my English teacher who is very humorous.11.What a kindhearted student Li Ming is!12.No matter who asks him for help,he is always warmhearted and generous.【句子仿写】【句子仿写】7.汤姆不害怕在公共场合发表演讲，因为他很自信。汤姆不害怕在公共场合发表演讲，因为他很自信。_8.她总能取得好成绩，但她从不骄傲。她总能取得好成绩，但她从不骄傲。_Tom is n
11、ot afraid of making a speech in public because he is very confident.She can always get good grades,but she never takes pride in herself.9.海伦如此友善以至于她所有的同学都非常喜欢她。海伦如此友善以至于她所有的同学都非常喜欢她。_10.他是多么勇敢的一个男孩啊！他是多么勇敢的一个男孩啊！_11.不管发生了什么事，我爸爸总是很镇静。不管发生了什么事，我爸爸总是很镇静。_Helen is so friendly that all her classmates li
12、ke her very much.What a brave boy he is!No matter what happens,my father is always calm.4 4角度角度介绍想感谢的人及如何表达感激之情介绍想感谢的人及如何表达感激之情【好句范例】【好句范例】13.Thanks to your kindness and consideration,Ive made rapid progress in English study.14.We are truly grateful to you for what you have done for us.15.Thank you
13、very much for giving me life and bringing me up!16.I want to give my sincere thanks to you for cheering me up and helping me out whenever I have difficulties.【句子仿写】【句子仿写】12.多亏了她，我改变了对待挑战的态度，并获得了第一名。多亏了她，我改变了对待挑战的态度，并获得了第一名。_13.我非常感谢父母给我的爱与支持。我非常感谢父母给我的爱与支持。_14.我要把我特别的感谢给那些为挽救患者生命而努力工作的医生们。我要把我特别的感谢给
14、那些为挽救患者生命而努力工作的医生们。_Thanks to her,I changed my attitude towards challenges and won the first prize.I am truly grateful to my parents for the love and support they have given to me.I will give my special thanks to the doctors who are working hard to save patients lives.三阶攻关三阶攻关一阶一阶 审好题审好题 定方向定方向(2017
15、河北河北)英语课上，同学们正在准备举行以英语课上，同学们正在准备举行以“真实的自我真实的自我”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲词演讲词，向同学们介向同学们介绍一下自己绍一下自己。定主题：真实的自我定主题：真实的自我定文体：应用文定文体：应用文定人称：第一人称定人称：第一人称提示：提示：(1)What are your strong points?(2)How do you improve yourself?(3)What is your dream for the future?定要点定要点1：优点：优点定时态：一般现在时定时态：一般现在时定
16、要点定要点2：如何提升自己：如何提升自己定时态：一般现在时定时态：一般现在时定要点定要点3：梦想：梦想(积极正向积极正向)定时态：一般将来时定时态：一般将来时要求：要求：(1)演讲词须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。演讲词须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。(2)演讲词中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。演讲词中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。(3)词数词数80个左右个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。Hello,everyone!Im Li Hua and Im very happy to stand here to talk about myself._Than
17、ks for your attention!开篇：自开篇：自我介绍并我介绍并引出主题引出主题(已给出已给出)正文：详正文：详细介绍自细介绍自己的优点、己的优点、自我提升自我提升的方法以的方法以及自己的及自己的梦想梦想很高兴站在很高兴站在这里谈论我这里谈论我自己自己列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升Im very happy to stand here to talk about myself.1.谈论自谈论自己的优点己的优点(kind and helpful）Im a kind and helpful person.Im not only kind b
18、ut also helpful.Im a kind and helpful person.Im always ready to help others when they are in trouble我来写：我来写：_ 二阶二阶 谋布局谋布局 写好句写好句正文：详正文：详细介绍自细介绍自己的优点、己的优点、自我提升自我提升的方法以的方法以及自己的及自己的梦想梦想2.如何自如何自我提升我提升(do more housework)I can sing and dance well.I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances
19、 at our school parties.我来写：我来写：_ I should share more housework in my free time.I should share more housework in my free time.It is good for my future life to do housework.我来写：我来写：_ 1.谈论自谈论自己的优点己的优点(kind and helpful）列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升3.谈论梦谈论梦想想(to be a teacher)I want to be a teach
20、er.I want to be a teacher.Ill make friends with my students and want to teach them everything I know!我来写：我来写：_ 正文：详正文：详细介绍自细介绍自己的优点、己的优点、自我提升自我提升的方法以的方法以及自己的及自己的梦想梦想感谢倾听感谢倾听（thanks for）Thanks for your attention!结尾：表结尾：表达感谢达感谢（已给出）（已给出）列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升三阶三阶 巧衔接巧衔接 成篇章成篇章【高分范文】【高分
21、范文】写作练兵写作练兵万唯原创万唯原创 班长是所在集体或团队的主要负责人，陪伴我们在班长是所在集体或团队的主要负责人，陪伴我们在校期间的每个阶段。假如你的班长是李明，请根据以下提示和要求，校期间的每个阶段。假如你的班长是李明，请根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文介绍他。用英语写一篇短文介绍他。提示：提示：(1)What does he look like?(2)What happened to him?(3)How did he deal with it?要求：要求：(1)短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。短文
22、中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数。开头已给出，不计入总词数。)参考词汇：参考词汇：monitor班长班长Li Ming is our monitor._He is tall and lively.He is interested in sports and good at singing and dancing.Li Ming works hard at English.When he came to the school,he had quite a lot of difficulties with the language.Bu
23、t he was not afraid of them and always tried hard to overcome them.He was active in class and did a lot of practice after class.No pain,no gain.With great efforts,he made great progress in English study.In addition,Li Ming is always ready to help others.And he is very strict with himself.He sets a good example for all of us.
