1、RockeyUNIT1 TEENAGE LIFEReading for WritingWrite a letter of adviceRevisionNew words and expressionsgraduaterecommendliteratureobviouslyquitfluentresponsible platecheerleaderbracketadventure campexpertinternationalbehaviourteenagersgenerationattractedadulthandwritingfeatures of the letter of advice0
2、102o write a letter of advice1.Susan Luo,an adviser for teenagers,has received a letter asking for some advice.Read her reply and discuss the questions.Passage on the book1.What is Worried Friends problem?Worried Friend is worried about that his or her friend,Chen Lei,plays computer games too often
3、and spends too much time online.2.What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend?Talk to her/his friend about his behaviour.Encourage his/her friend to try new hobbies.3.Besides suggestions,what else does Susan Luo say in her letter?She also talks about the negative effects of computer addic
4、tion.2.Study the organisation and language features.necessary parts of a letter:Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.A.I know what the problem is.B.I understand how you feel.C.This is my advice and reason(s).D.I think my advice will help.BDCAUseful phrases in this le
5、tter:be worried about 为而担心，忧虑be attracted to 喜爱focus on 集中；特别关注be addicted to(doing)sth.对(做)某事很入迷concentrate on 集中精力于；全神贯注于encourage sb.to do sth.鼓励某人做某事all the best 一切顺利，万事如意一，审题在写作文前，看清题目要求，切勿急于下笔，以免写错相关内容；二，翻译重点词圈出题目涉及的重点单词，把重点单词先在草稿纸上写下来；三，中文构思在下笔之前，先在草稿纸上大概用中文先构思一下，清晰写作的思路；四，写作尽量不涂改在写每句话前先想好再下笔
6、，尽量不要写错单词，不要出现涂改；五，正确使用套用句式有的同学会使用套用句式，但是要注意格式是否适合，切记勿生搬硬套；六，使用高级词汇想要拿高分，要偶用一些高级一些的词汇，让打分者觉得眼前一亮；七，偶用从句在作文中当使用两到三个从句，如定语从句，有利用增加分值；八，书面干净整洁，字体书写工整这点很重要，给打分者的第一印象极其重要，如果书写潦草，打分者大多不会细看作文。建议信框架：开头(beginning)-开门见山，引出话题，说明写信目的。（安慰对方并提出自己的看法。）主体(body)-对所提出的问题进行陈述，提出合理的建议并说明理由。（根据写作要点提示，提出建议并说明理由。）结尾(ending)-呼应开头，重申观点，表达祝愿。Choose one of these situations and write a letter of advice.
