1、话题写作（五）日常生活第一篇教材考点梳理典例分析【话题点睛】日常生活涉及的话题很广,可以谈谈日常生活中某些方面的收获、困惑和感受;也可以谈谈日常生活中的一次经历或变化等。假如你是李玲,请你根据你的笔友Tony的邮件,写一封回信。To:Li LingFrom:TonyHi,Li Ling,How are you?Ive read a newspaper,saying that parents are really strict with kids in China.Is that true?What was your childhood like?Were your parents strict
2、 with you?Was there anything special?Write soon!Yours,Tony【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题为中国的父母是否对孩子严格。根据Tony的来信可知,本文应从以下几个方面展开叙述:(1)总体描述中国的父母对子女是否要求严格。(2)我(Li Ling)的童年是怎样的。(3)我的父母对我是否严格。(4)叙述一件特别的事情。2.确定时态:描写中国的父母是否对子女要求严格时,使用一般现在时;描写我的童年、父母对我的要求和一件特别的事时,使用一般过去时。3.确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示词补全下列各句。1.基础句我的父母不允许我在
3、学习日逛到很晚。(hang out).升格句(改为被动语态).2.基础句我不能忘记去雁荡山的一次徒步旅行。(hiking).升格句最难忘的记忆是去雁荡山的一次徒步旅行。(unforgettable).The most unforgettable memory is a hiking to Yandang MountainMy parents didnt allow me to hang out late on schooldaysI wasnt allowed to hang out late on schooldaysI cant forget a hiking to Yandang Mou
4、ntain3.基础句我感到很累,我想要停下来。(and).升格句我感到如此累以至于我想停下来。(sothat).4.基础句妈妈鼓励我继续。(encourage,go on).升格句是妈妈鼓励我继续。(用强调句型).It was Mother who/that encouraged me to go on.I felt tired and I wanted to stop.I felt so tired that I wanted to stop.Mother encouraged me to go on.【连句成文】Hi,Tony,Its great to hear from you.In f
5、act,in China some parents are strict while others are not.Luckily,my parents are kind to me so that I have a happy and warm childhood.When I was in the kindergarten,my parents often played with my friends and me.When I was in primary school and middle school,I wasnt allowed to hang out late on schoo
6、ldays and I had to be at home by 8 oclock.The most unforgettable memory is a hiking to Yandang Mountain.It was smooth at first,but later,I felt so tired that I wanted to stop.It was my mum who encouraged me to go on.Finally,I arrived at the top of the mountain.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ling拓展积累【参考谚语】1.Ti
7、me and tide wait for no man.岁月不待人。2.Never do things by halves.做事不要半途而废。3.All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。4.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.世上无难事,只要肯攀登。5.Time flies.时光易逝。【亮点句型】日常活动及购物1.We are having a good time here.2.I usually watch movies and play games with my friends.3.They often go b
8、ike riding on weekends.4.I often stay at home to read books and relax myself.5.I would like to buy a dress for my mum because she likes wearing a dress.体育锻炼1.I often exercise in the morning.It can make me healthy,strong and full of energy.2.We should develop good habits and correct bad ones in our l
9、ife.3.Wed better not spend too much time online.4.They can easily be short-sighted after playing computer games for a long time.饮食健康1.To keep a healthy lifestyle,we should get away from junk food.2.Take more fruit and vegetables which can provide what we need.3.In a word,a balanced diet can help mak
10、e us stronger and healthier.生活感悟1.You can learn a lot from your experience.2.As the saying goes,“Failure is the mother of success.”3.Study plays an important role in our life.4.Reading can make our life colorful.5.You should study hard,pay attention to social news and develop interest and hobbies.实战
11、演练A Lingling收到Kate的一封电子邮件,请阅读邮件,并根据邮件内容以Lingling的身份给Kate回邮件。要求(1)需按电子邮件格式来完成整个邮件;(2)邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息;(3)词数:90100。Dear Lingling,How is everything?Thank you for the fans you sent me.I really like them.You know my hobby is collecting fans and they have brought me lots of fun.What is your hobby and w
12、hen did you start it?How does your hobby influence you?Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,KateAOne possible versionDear kate How is everything?My hobby is reading books and books are my best friends.At the age of five,my mother started to tell me stories.I thought these stories were really inter
13、esting.So I began to read at seven.Reading books is good for everyone and it has influenced me a lot.Only by reading books can the door of wisdom is never shut.When I am reading,I feel that I am just like a bird flying in the sky.I am filled with happiness and always forget the passing time when I r
14、ead.In addition,I am good at writing now.I love reading and I will keep reading forever.Yours,LinglingB 2019湘潭哈佛大学的一项研究表明,爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感,更有前途。请你以“Help with Some Housework”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文,描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法。参考词汇Chorestake out the rubbishsweep the floorwash the clothesdo the disheswater the flower
15、scook breakfast/lunchOpinionsPros:develop our independence take care of ourselvesCons:a waste of timeno need to 注意文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。Help with Some HouseworkIt is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy.As for me,I _BOne possible version:Help with Som
16、e HouseworkIt is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy.As for me,I usually sweep the floor,take out the rubbish,wash my clothes and do the dishes at home.When I am free,Id like to water the flowers and cook some easy meals for breakfast.Its interesting to cook food.While different people have different opinions about this.Some people say that there is no need to do housework.They think its a
