1、话题写作(五)情感表达第一篇教材考点梳理【话题点睛】话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受,常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。每个人生活中都要面对各种各样的困难。该怎样缓解自己的压力呢?请你以“Less Pressure,Better Life”为题,根据下表内容写一篇演讲稿。典例分析Stress人们会因困难觉得失望、疲惫或者忧伤,承受着巨大的压力Ways to relax改变你的想法想一想你最喜欢的人或事而不是想那些麻烦你还可以这样做听音乐、唱歌、锻炼等,这些都能让你高兴起来寻求帮助,和父母、老师或朋友多沟通My points耐心一点儿。其实困难也许并不可怕,相信
2、我们的生活会更美好要求(1)不要逐字逐句翻译,可适当发挥;(2)语句通顺、语意连贯;(3)词数:100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇 under much pressure,deal with,change ones mind,think about,instead of,cheer up,for help,just need toLess Pressure,Better LifeHello,boys and girls!Thank you for your coming today.Im very glad that all of you are full of hope f
3、or the future.Thats all.Thank you.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼要点提炼:主题是讲面对压力,如何来处理。文章主要有三个要点:(1)压力概述;(2)减压措施;(3)自己的观点。2.确定时态确定时态:一般现在时。3.确定人称确定人称:第三人称,第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.我们应该尽力采取一些措施去处理它。(try to do sth.)We should to deal with it.2.我们可以改变我们的想法。(change ones mind)We can.3.想一想你最喜欢的人或事而不是那些麻烦。(instead
4、 of)your favourite people or things _ .try to take some measureschange our mindsThink about instead of those troubles4.我们可以参加更多的活动,例如音乐俱乐部和足球队。(such as)We can take part in more activities,and the football team.5.我们可以尽可能多地发现机会去和别人交流。(asas)We can find as many communicate with others.such as the music
5、clubopportunities as possible to.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)1.Some students study very hard.They are still poor in their studies.(用though改写句子)_2.Others think they have much homework to do.And they have no time to play.(用sothat改写句子)_Though some students study very hard,they are still poor in their studies.Oth
6、ers think they have so much homework to do that they have no time to play.3.We can take part in more activities.All these activities can relieve our anxiety and make us relaxed.(用定语从句改写句子)_4.We can reduce our stress by taking the above suggestions.(用only by 位于句首改写句子)_We can take part in more activit
7、ies which can relieve our anxiety and make us relaxed.Only by taking the above suggestions can we reduce our stress.【连句成文】Less Pressure,Better LifeHello,boys and girls!Thank you for your coming today.Im very glad that all of you are full of hope for the future.When it comes to pressure,it is a serio
8、us problem in todays world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Though some students study very hard,they are still poor in their studies.They often worry about their exams.Others think they have so much homework to do that they have no time to play.We should try to take some measures t
9、o deal with it.First,we can change our minds.Think about our favourite people or things instead of those troubles.Second,we can take part in more activities,such as the music club and the football team,which can relieve our anxiety and make us relaxed.Finally,we can find as many opportunities as pos
10、sible to communicate with others,such as our parents,teachers and friends.As for me,Im always under pressure,too.However,it doesnt matter.I think only by taking the above suggestions can we reduce our stress.Thats all.Thank you!【参考谚语】1.A smile makes you ten years younger.笑一笑,十年少。2.Joy and sorrow are
11、 next-door neighbours.悲喜常相伴。3.Laughter is the best medicine.笑是最好的药。4.Worry kills more men than work.忧虑比劳累更伤人。拓展积累【相关短语】thanks for因感谢;make new friends 结交新朋友;look after/take care of 照顾;keep in touch 保持联系;be friendly to 对友好;bring back 带回【亮点句型】导入主题句导入主题句1.Among all my friends,Li Hua impressed me most.Sh
12、e is always kind and helpful.2.My grandmother is the person who I want to thank most.She has helped me a lot.3.The family is the greatest.No matter you are happy,painful or lost,it will gently on your way,quietly with your life.4.There is sadness as well as happiness in our life so cherish what you
13、have.文章发展、过渡句文章发展、过渡句1.He encouraged me to be brave.He told me,“Youd better speak slowly and clearly,and in this way,you can make yourself understood more easily.”2.As soon as she found out my problems,she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice.3.With her encouragement,I have made great prog
14、ress.4.He held my hand tightly.In this way,I was not afraid any more.5.He never scolds me.But I always listen to him and follow him.文章结尾句文章结尾句1.I really want to say“Thank you for helping me.I love you!”to my grandmother.2.I will always remember her kindness and be grateful.3.What he said and what he
15、 did will influence me all my life.A“你养我长大,我陪你变老。”父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出,成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天是父亲节,是我们向爸爸表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点,写一篇英语短文。要点(1)给我生命,一直照顾我成长;(2)努力工作,为我提供良好的生活和教育条件;(3)拥有爱心,教我学会(4)今天,我要为您(自主发挥,至少两点)。实战演练注意(1)词数:90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。You bring me up.I will be with you in your life.You
16、 are an important person in the process of my growth._ _One possible version:You bring me up.I will be with you in your life.You are an important person in the process of my growth.You give me life and take care of me all the time.When I have problems with my study and life,you are always patient en
17、ough to help me and encourage me.In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive a good education,you always work hard from morning to evening every day.You are also a man who has a heart full of love.You are ready to help people in need.It is you who teach me to be a kind person.In the past,I n
18、ever said“I love you”to you.Today is Fathers Day.I want to say it to you loudly.I will study harder to get better results.I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.B2019东营Sunday Mail青少年专栏开展“对身边的人说一句话”主题征文活动,这句话或许是对父母的一句“我爱你”,或许是对老师、同学的一句“谢谢你”,或许是对身边人的一句“对不起”等。请将“I want to say”补充完整,并以此为题写一篇英语短文,如:
19、I want to say thank you 等。谈谈你想说那句话的原因以及发生在那句话背后的故事,并说说你的感受。要求(1)认真审题,把握要点;(2)行文连贯,条理清晰,不得出现真实学校、姓名等信息;(3)词数:100左右。One possible version:I want to say thank youI want to say thank you to my dear mother.She not only cares about my life,but always helps me out.Once I argued with my best friend Lucy.Beca
20、use she always pointed out my shortcomings face to face.My mother talked with me and advised me to think about her words carefully.I did so and found what Lucy said was helpful to me.I apologized to her and promised to correct my mistakes immediately.With my mothers help,I didnt lose my best friend and learned how to deal with problems with friends.She does all that she can do for me.No matter what will happen in the future,I will love her forever.
