1、Im more outgoing than my sister!writing Welcome to my class!Journey to the WestPsychological(心理心理)tests当你在人群拥挤的地铁中,忽然感觉到有当你在人群拥挤的地铁中,忽然感觉到有一只手伸向你,你的第一个反应是什么?一只手伸向你,你的第一个反应是什么?A A 用眼神瞪他用眼神瞪他 B B反身一掌或用高跟鞋踹对方反身一掌或用高跟鞋踹对方 C C大喊一声,震慑对方大喊一声,震慑对方 D D努力的挤开人群,躲开这里努力的挤开人群,躲开这里【心理测试心理测试】你会是西游记师徒中的哪一个?你会是西游记师徒中
2、的哪一个?kind,outgoing,warm-heartedbrave,smart,noisy,quiet,friendly,hard-workingkind,serious,quiet writing Task 1:Remember the adjectives on paper,the more the better!Task 2:Tell me the comparative forms of adjectives and adverbs.Task 3:Make up sentences!Task 4:Give me a wonderful composition.Task 1:Rem
3、ember the adjectives on paper,the more the better!Task 2:Tell me the comparative forms of adjectives and adverbs.hightalllatefinebigthineasyfriendlyerererrrergernerer easierfriendlierTask 2:Tell me the comparative forms of adjectives and adverbs.outgoinghard-workingloudlymoremoremoreTask 2:Tell me t
4、he comparative forms of adjectives and adverbs.good/wellbad/badlymany/muchlittlefarbetterworsemorelessfarther/furtherTask 3:Make up sentences!Li Chen is _ _ Chen He.Chen He is_ _ Li Chen.smarter thanstronger thanstrongsmartBao Beier is _ _ _ than Wang Zulan.Deng Chao is _ _ than Wang Zulan.a little
5、taller much taller a lot taller Wang Zulan is a little shorterthan Bao Beier.Wang Zulan is much shorterthan Deng Chao.Baby is _ _ _(漂亮漂亮)Jiang Xing.as beautiful asBoth baby and Jiang Xing are beautiful.Both of them are beautiful.Lets compare them!Lets compare them!friendlytall-shortold-youngtalented
6、hard-workingseriousquietswimAsasBoth of themheavy-thinoutgoingfunnysmartpopularLike reading/My best friend and I bodyPart1:Part2:differencesI tallfunnyLike sportsMiss Chen shortHard-workingLike readingBoth of usHave short curly hairoutgoingShare everythingsimilaritiesbodyPart1:Part2:similartiesdiffe
7、rencesI am tall She is hard-working,I like sports,she likes reading.We have short curly hair,We are outgoing.beginningendingA good friend is like a mirror,Miss Chen is my best friend.I am much taller than her,But she is hard-working than anyone I know.Im good at sports,and she enjoys reading,Both of
8、 us have short curly hair.And she is as outgoing as me.Thats why were both popular.In our free time,we can talk about and share everything.Task 4:Compare yourself and your best friend,Give me a wonderful composition.Sayings 1.A good friend is like a mirror.2.Friends are like books-you dont need a lo
9、t of them as long as they are good!3.A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart.中考作文评分中考作文评分标准标准:(standard for evaluation)1.1.内容内容7 7分:内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚,完整。分:内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚,完整。5-75-7分:分:基本完整基本完整 3-43-4分:分:不够完整不够完整 0-20-2分:文不对题,表达不清分:文不对题,表达不清2.2.语言语言5分分:每少每少5 5个词扣个词扣0.50.5分,拼写错误,语法错误分,拼
10、写错误,语法错误 每处扣每处扣0.50.5分,错句扣分,错句扣1 1分,标点,大小写错误每分,标点,大小写错误每2 2 处扣处扣0.50.5分分3.3.组织结构组织结构3分:分:如确有好句型或表达用语,可酌情给如确有好句型或表达用语,可酌情给 1-21-2分。通篇句型,句式单一,词汇贫乏者,即使无分。通篇句型,句式单一,词汇贫乏者,即使无 语法错误,也不给分语法错误,也不给分内容内容7 7分,分,语言语言5 5分分,组织结构,组织结构3 3分分My best friend and I bodyPart1:Part2:similaritiesdifferencesbeginningendingHomework:Write a composition about your parents!提纲:提纲:beginning body differences similaritiesendingThanks for listening!Thanks for listening!Complete the first two paragraphs about resolutions with the words in the box.