1、八年级英语下册八年级英语下册各单元作文点拨各单元作文点拨 本单元以本单元以“健康和急救健康和急救”为话题为话题,围绕这一话题主要谈论健围绕这一话题主要谈论健康问题和意外事故康问题和意外事故,以及如何合理地提出建议。健康话题是新以及如何合理地提出建议。健康话题是新课程标准中要求的一个重要学习话题课程标准中要求的一个重要学习话题,也是单元测试及中考常也是单元测试及中考常考的话题作文之一。考的话题作文之一。Unit 1 Whats the matter？【习作在线习作在线】假如你是假如你是Peter的好朋友的好朋友Li Lei,你听说你听说Peter近来因为考试近来因为考试而忙碌而忙碌,并且得了重感
2、冒并且得了重感冒,头疼得厉害。请你给他写封信头疼得厉害。请你给他写封信,建议建议他去看医生他去看医生,并告诉他要注意身体。要求并告诉他要注意身体。要求70个词左右。个词左右。_【思路点拨思路点拨】(1)体裁体裁:_。(2)人称人称:_。(3)时态时态:_及含情态动词及含情态动词_的句式。的句式。应用文应用文第二人称第二人称一般现在时一般现在时should【佳作鉴赏佳作鉴赏】Dear Peter,Im sorry to hear that you have a bad cold and a headache.I think you should go to a doctor and take s
3、ome medicine.I know these days you are very busy studying for the exams,but you should look after your health.It is important for everyone to be healthy.If you want to study better,you must keep in good health.I hope youll feel better soon.Yours,Li Lei 本单元以本单元以“志愿活动志愿活动”为话题为话题,围绕这一话题谈论如何围绕这一话题谈论如何“提
4、提供帮助供帮助”。而最能全面体现本单元话题及语言运用能力的话题。而最能全面体现本单元话题及语言运用能力的话题作文就是关于作文就是关于“提供帮助或谈论参加志愿活动提供帮助或谈论参加志愿活动”等内容的写作。等内容的写作。这也是单元测试和中考常考的话题作文之一。这也是单元测试和中考常考的话题作文之一。Unit 2 I ll help to clean up the city parks.【习作在线习作在线】爱是心中的太阳爱是心中的太阳,融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明,你们学校的你们学校的“English Garden”正在举办主题为正在举办主题为“付出即收获付出即收
5、获”的征文活动的征文活动,请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。投稿。要求要求:1.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。2.80100个词个词,标题和文章开头已给出标题和文章开头已给出,不计入总不计入总词数。词数。参考词汇参考词汇:help,clean up,an old peoples home,make.happyGiving Is ReceivingI am a student from Green Middle School._【思路点拨思路点拨】(1)体裁体裁:_。(2)人称人称:_。(3)时
6、态时态:_。说明文说明文第一人称第一人称一般现在时一般现在时【佳作鉴赏佳作鉴赏】Giving Is ReceivingI am a student from Green Middle School.My name is Li Ming.I like helping others because I think it makes me happy.I often help my classmates with their schoolwork.Sometimes I help to clean up city parks.I go to the old peoples home and do s
7、ome cleaning for them once a month.So Im pretty popular there.I often visit the Childrens Hospital to cheer the sick kids up.I read stories and singsongs for them.Im good with children.I also give money to charities to help people in trouble.I think giving is receiving.Helping others is helping ours
8、elves.Do you agree with me?本单元以本单元以“家务、杂务家务、杂务”为话题为话题,围绕这一话题围绕这一话题,引导学生引导学生学习掌握情态动词学习掌握情态动词could表示委婉地请求以及请求许可的用法。表示委婉地请求以及请求许可的用法。以谈论家务以及对家务喜欢与不喜欢的原因和理由为话题的以谈论家务以及对家务喜欢与不喜欢的原因和理由为话题的作文或是请求他人帮忙的电子邮件之类的书面表达是单元测作文或是请求他人帮忙的电子邮件之类的书面表达是单元测试或中考所常考查的。试或中考所常考查的。Unit 3 Could you please clean your room?【习作在线习
9、作在线】假如你是假如你是Tom,这个周末你与父母去海滨度假这个周末你与父母去海滨度假,你的宠物你的宠物猫需要好友猫需要好友Jim帮忙照顾帮忙照顾,请给请给Jim留言。留言。Dear Jim,_Thanks,Tom【思路点拨思路点拨】(1)体裁体裁:_。(2)人称人称:_。(3)时态时态:_。记叙文记叙文第二人称第二人称一般现在时一般现在时【佳作鉴赏佳作鉴赏】Dear Jim,My parents and I are going to the beach for vacation this weekend.But we cant take our cat;I need your help.Cou
10、ld you please take care of her?Could you please do these things every day?Give her water and feed her three times a day.Then wash her bowl.If you have more time,please play with her or take her for a walk.Dont forget to clean her bed every night.Have fun!See you next Monday.Thanks,Tom 本单元以本单元以“谈论问题谈
11、论问题,提出建议提出建议”为话题。在写作时为话题。在写作时,应针应针对问题提出建议对问题提出建议,此话题是新课程标准中要求学习的一个重要此话题是新课程标准中要求学习的一个重要话题话题,也是单元测试和中考等试题中常考的话题作文之一。也是单元测试和中考等试题中常考的话题作文之一。Unit 4 Why dont you talk to your parents?【习作在线习作在线】假如你是假如你是Julia,Jane是你的好朋友是你的好朋友,但她弄丢了你的书但她弄丢了你的书,为为此你们发生了争执此你们发生了争执,并多日未交谈并多日未交谈,想起往日的友情想起往日的友情,你觉得有你觉得有必要写一封信向她
12、道歉必要写一封信向她道歉,并向她提出爱护好自己物品的建议。并向她提出爱护好自己物品的建议。请就此给她发一封电子邮件表示你的诚意。请就此给她发一封电子邮件表示你的诚意。_【思路点拨思路点拨】(1)体裁体裁:_。(2)人称人称:_。(3)时态时态:_。应用文应用文第一人称第一人称一般过去时一般过去时【佳作鉴赏佳作鉴赏】Dear Jane,Im sorry to have a fight with you a few days ago.We havent talked with each other these days.You are still my best friend,arent you?
13、Some days ago,when I heard that you lost my book,I was really mad.So I argued with you,and said that I could not be your best friend from then on.Later,I didnt sleep well at night.I always remembered a lot of fun we had.So I decided to write a letter to say sorry to you.I also think you should be ca
14、reful and take good care of your things.Lets be best friends again,OK?Yours,Julia 本单元以本单元以“讲述过去某一时刻或一段时间内正在发生的事讲述过去某一时刻或一段时间内正在发生的事”为话题为话题,围绕这一话题谈论人们在过去某个时间正在做某事。围绕这一话题谈论人们在过去某个时间正在做某事。这是单元测试和中考等试题中常考的话题作文之一。这是单元测试和中考等试题中常考的话题作文之一。Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?【习作在线习作在线】假如你是大明假如
15、你是大明,上星期六晚上上星期六晚上7点钟点钟,你们一家人都在做什你们一家人都在做什么呢么呢?请根据下表提示写一篇短文进行描述。请根据下表提示写一篇短文进行描述。Family membersWhat they were doingGrandparentsWatch TVFatherDraw a pictureMotherWash clothesSisterPlay the pianoBrotherChat with friends on the InternetDamingListen to music 要求要求:1.词数词数:80个左右个左右;2.可适当增加细节可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。以
16、使行文连贯。_【思路点拨思路点拨】(1)体裁体裁:_。(2)人称人称:_。(3)时态时态:_。记叙文记叙文第三人称和第一人称第三人称和第一人称过去进行时过去进行时【佳作鉴赏佳作鉴赏】Hello,Im Daming.Last Saturday evening,my family were all at home.At7:00,my grandparents were watching TV in the room.My father was drawing a picture at the desk.My mother was washing clothes.My sister wanted t
17、o take part in a piano competition and she was playing the piano.What was my brother doing?Oh,he was chatting with his friends on the Internet.What about me?I was listening to music in my bedroom.What a happy family!本单元主要以本单元主要以“讲故事讲故事”为主线为主线,故事属于记叙文故事属于记叙文,一般要一般要有故事的内容有故事的内容(what)、人物、人物(who)、时间、时间(
18、when)、地点、地点(where)、起因起因(why)和情节发展和情节发展(how),以介绍故事的发展为主要内容以介绍故事的发展为主要内容,我们可确定在写作过程中要运用的主要时态是一般过去时。我们可确定在写作过程中要运用的主要时态是一般过去时。Unit 6 An old man tried to move the mountains【习作在线习作在线】“龟兔赛跑龟兔赛跑”是我们从小就耳熟能详的故事是我们从小就耳熟能详的故事,根据图片内容根据图片内容,写一篇写一篇80个词左右的小故事。个词左右的小故事。要求要求:字迹工整字迹工整,语言流畅语言流畅,表达正确表达正确,逻辑清晰。逻辑清晰。提示词提
19、示词:rabbit兔子兔子;tortoise乌龟乌龟;have a race赛跑赛跑;go on running继续跑继续跑;wake up醒来醒来;the finishing line终点线终点线_【思路点拨思路点拨】(1)体裁体裁:_。(2)人称人称:_。(3)时态时态:_。记叙文记叙文第三人称第三人称一般过去时一般过去时【佳作鉴赏佳作鉴赏】Once upon a time,there lived a rabbit and a tortoise in the forest.One day,they had a race.At first,the rabbit hurried in fron
20、t of the tortoise.Then he was tired,and wanted to have a break.So he lied on the road and soon fell asleep.But the tortoise didnt stop,he went on running.Finally,the rabbit woke up,but it was too late.The tortoise got to the finishing line.本单元谈论地理和自然方面的有关知识。运用数字来陈本单元谈论地理和自然方面的有关知识。运用数字来陈述比较真实。其中较能体现
21、本单元语言运用能力的话题是述比较真实。其中较能体现本单元语言运用能力的话题是“对对濒临灭绝动物的保护濒临灭绝动物的保护”,也是中考常考的话题。也是中考常考的话题。Unit 7 W hats the highest mountain in the world?【习作在线习作在线】以以“Saving Tigers”为题为题,为某中学生英文报为某中学生英文报“习作园地习作园地”专专栏写一篇栏写一篇80个词左右的征文稿个词左右的征文稿,内容要点如下内容要点如下:1.老虎是人们在动物园里最喜欢观看的动物之一老虎是人们在动物园里最喜欢观看的动物之一;2.现在世界上仅存大约现在世界上仅存大约3 200只老虎
22、只老虎,数目日趋减少数目日趋减少;3.老虎处境危险的原因老虎处境危险的原因;4.保护老虎的建议。保护老虎的建议。_【思路点拨思路点拨】(1)体裁体裁:_。(2)人称人称:_。(3)时态时态:_。记叙文记叙文第三人称第三人称一般现在时一般现在时【佳作鉴赏佳作鉴赏】Saving TigersHave you visited zoos?Have you seen tigers in the zoos?I think a tiger is one of the most favorite animals that people like to see in the zoos.But now there
23、 are only about3,200tigers in the world,and the amount of them is reducing.Why?Because many trees are cut down and the tigers have no place to live in.In order to protect them we must build many natural reserves.And we must stop people from hunting.本单元以本单元以“literature and music”为话题为话题,围绕这一话题主围绕这一话题主
24、要谈论最近发生的事情及经历要谈论最近发生的事情及经历,引导学生学习现在完成时的用引导学生学习现在完成时的用法。因此谈论过去的经历和感受、介绍曾经读过的文学作品、法。因此谈论过去的经历和感受、介绍曾经读过的文学作品、听过的音乐及其影响等将是单元测试中常考的话题。听过的音乐及其影响等将是单元测试中常考的话题。Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet?【习作在线习作在线】根据下面所提供的信息根据下面所提供的信息,写一篇英语短文。写一篇英语短文。1.来自伦敦的来自伦敦的Lucy小时候事事和母亲争吵小时候事事和母亲争吵;2.但是但是10年前正当她在中国学习时年前正
25、当她在中国学习时,她听了一首充满怀她听了一首充满怀念母爱之情的民歌念母爱之情的民歌妈妈的吻妈妈的吻(Mothers Kiss);3.自此自此,Lucy成了一个中国民歌迷。成了一个中国民歌迷。4.现在她还未回到伦敦现在她还未回到伦敦,但她真的希望有一天能把这首但她真的希望有一天能把这首歌唱给她妈妈听。歌唱给她妈妈听。要求要求:1.词数词数:80个左右个左右;2.字迹工整字迹工整,语言流畅语言流畅,表达正确表达正确,逻辑清晰。逻辑清晰。_【思路点拨思路点拨】(1)体裁体裁:_。(2)人称人称:_。(3)时态时态:_。记叙文记叙文第三人称第三人称一般过去时和现在完成时一般过去时和现在完成时【佳作鉴赏
26、佳作鉴赏】Lucy came from London.When she was young,she used to fight over almost everything with her mother.But ten years ago,while she was studying in China,she heard a Chinese folk song full of feelings about missing mothers love.It made Lucy think about her mother in London.She came to realize how muc
27、h her mother loved her.Ever since then,she has been a fan of Chinese folk songs.Lucy hasnt been back to London yet,but she really hopes to sing Mothers Kiss to her mother some day.本单元以本单元以“fun places(有趣的地方有趣的地方)”为话题为话题,围绕这一话题围绕这一话题,引导学生学习现在完成时的用法。因此谈论过去的经历和感引导学生学习现在完成时的用法。因此谈论过去的经历和感受、介绍某个有趣的去处将是单元测
28、试中常考的话题。受、介绍某个有趣的去处将是单元测试中常考的话题。Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum?【习作在线习作在线】根据下面所提供的信息根据下面所提供的信息,写一篇介绍济南野生写一篇介绍济南野生(wild)动物动物园的英语短文。园的英语短文。1.济南野生动物园坐落在济南的东南部济南野生动物园坐落在济南的东南部;2.动物园里有很多动物动物园里有很多动物,如老虎、狮子、熊如老虎、狮子、熊(bear)、狼、狼(wolf)以及各种鸟类以及各种鸟类;3.动物可以在园内自由活动动物可以在园内自由活动,游客可以在天桥上游客可以在天桥上(the bridge abo
29、ve the park)观赏。观赏。_【思路点拨思路点拨】(1)体裁体裁:_。(2)人称人称:_。(3)时态时态:_。记叙文记叙文第一人称第一人称一般过去时和现在完成时一般过去时和现在完成时【佳作鉴赏佳作鉴赏】Last Sunday,I with my parents went to the Wild Animal Park in Jinan.Have you ever been to the Wild Animal Park in Jinan?If you have never been there,let me tell you something about it.The park is
30、 in the southeast of Jinan.Its a good place to watch animals.The park is very big.There are all kinds of animalstigers,lions,bears,wolves,and lots of birds in it.Many people go there,especially on weekends.The wild animals can go anywhere freely.Tourists can watch them on the bridge above the park.I
31、ts just so much fun in the park.If you go there,Im sure you will have a wonderful time.本单元以本单元以“生活环境生活环境”为话题为话题,以以“谈论周围的所有物和物谈论周围的所有物和物品品”为语言目标。最能全面体现本单元话题及语言运用能力的为语言目标。最能全面体现本单元话题及语言运用能力的作文就是作文就是“谈论自己拥有的物品谈论自己拥有的物品”,这也是单元测试和中考试题这也是单元测试和中考试题中经常考到的作文话题之一。中经常考到的作文话题之一。Unit 10 I ve had this bike for th
32、ree years.【习作在线习作在线】在你成长的过程中一定会有一些你喜欢的在你成长的过程中一定会有一些你喜欢的,难以舍弃的物难以舍弃的物品品,请以请以“My favorite thing”为题目写一篇短文为题目写一篇短文,词数不少于词数不少于80个。个。_【思路点拨思路点拨】(1)体裁体裁:_。(2)人称人称:_。(3)时态时态:_。说明文说明文第一人称或第二人称第一人称或第二人称一般过去时和现在完成时一般过去时和现在完成时【佳作鉴赏佳作鉴赏】My favorite thing I have kept many things that I like.But my favorite thing
33、 is a sweater.I have had it for six years.When I was ten years old,I liked beautiful clothes.In a clothes store,I saw a beautiful sweater,I wanted to buy it.But my parents said it was too expensive.I was very sad.On my birthday,my parents bought me two books.To be honest,I didnt like them.My aunt also bought a gift.I cant wait to open it.Wow,it was a beautiful sweater.I liked it very much.Although it is very old now,I still like it.
