1、A lesson on a letter of invitation The key points to POLISH a compositionWelcome to class 1512022-10-26书面表达（满分书面表达（满分25分）分）假设你是交换生李华，和你的中国朋友王悦假设你是交换生李华，和你的中国朋友王悦就读于纽约某国际学校。就读于纽约某国际学校。她喜爱美国音乐，她喜爱美国音乐，特别是乡村音乐文化。特别是乡村音乐文化。8月月5日傍晚日傍晚7：00在在Madison Square Garden将上演将上演Taylor Swift歌手歌手以以The 1989 World Tour为
2、为主题的演唱会。主题的演唱会。请你根据以下提示，用英语给王悦写一封电请你根据以下提示，用英语给王悦写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起观看演出。子邮件，邀请她一起观看演出。*提出邀请并简述原因；提出邀请并简述原因；*提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的音提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的音乐馆或博物馆等）乐馆或博物馆等）*请求对方回复请求对方回复22022-10-26destinationAnalysisOutlineLink-up polishMore than 20 scores32022-10-2642022-10-2652022-10-26高考第五档(很好)；(21-25分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务
3、，覆盖所有内容要点，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的62022-10-2672022-10-26Use emotional adjectives&adverbs82022-10-26Taylor swift will hold a_ concert at 7:00 in Madison Square Garden on August 5th.I know that you like American music very much,es
4、pecially country music.Therefore,I think its a_chance to invite you to go with me.If you accept my invitation,it will leave you a good memory.live/excitingextremelyunforgettablegolden92022-10-26Use varied sentence patterns102022-10-26Taylor Swift will hold an exciting concert at 7:00 in Madison Squa
5、re Garden on August 5th.The theme is The 1989 World Tour.Taylor Swift will hold a live/exciting concert at 7:00 in Madison Square Garden on August 5th,the theme of which/whose theme is The 1989 World Tour.Clue:机会来了机会来了+when 时间状语从句时间状语从句An opportunity comes when Taylor Swift will hold a live/exciting
6、 concert at 7:00 in Madison Square Garden on August 5th,the theme of which/whose theme is The 1989 World Tour.112022-10-26Taylor swift will hold a live/exciting concert at 7:00 in Madison Square Garden on August 5th,the theme of which/whose theme is The 1989 World Tour._Taylor swift will hold a live
7、 concert at 7:00 in Madison Square Garden on August 5th,I cant wait to invite you to come immediately.Hearing thatTaylor Swift will hold an exciting concert at 7:00 in Madison Square Garden on August 5th.The theme is The 1989 World Tour.122022-10-26Have logical thinking 132022-10-26Is it proper to w
8、rite in this way?Why?1.It is said that most of the songs will move you a lot.2.So I make up my mind to pay a visit to the museum with you.3.Time permitting,we can get around to visit some music halls.4.It is at 7:00 oclock on August 5th that Taylor Swift will hold a concert named The 1989 World Tour
9、.If you can come,/If you have more time,/If you are available later,/If time permits,/If possible142022-10-26Add arousing details 152022-10-261._some museums or music halls after the concert.3.There is no doubt that _.2._,it will totally leave you an unforgettable memory.c.Dont let the chance slip a
10、way.b.It is no more exciting than paying a visit to d.it will be a memorable day.a.If you accept my invitation4._.Looking forward to it.abcd162022-10-26Choose good alternatives172022-10-26I know you like country music very much.I think its a great chance to enjoy it together.182022-10-26becrazy19202
11、2-10-26 I know you are keen on /be into /are crazy/passionate about /are enthusiastic about /have a(great)passion for /have an affection for American musicInstead of“I like”202022-10-26212022-10-26It seems to me thatAs for me,Personally speaking;I find it amusing/strange/interesting thatInstead of“I think”222022-10-26232022-10-26Use varied sentence patternsHave logical thinking Choose good alternativesAdd arousing details Use emotional adjectives&adverbs242022-10-26252022-10-26
