1、Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.Section B 3a-3bFrom Shy Girl to Pop StarCareful reading-Reading for details1.She used to be shy,but now shes not shy _.2.She didnt used to be _ in school,but now she gets lots of attention.3.She used to _ with friends,but now it is almost impossible.4.She didnt
2、 use to _ how she appears to others,but now she does.How has Candy changed?anymorepopularhang outworry aboutMore details about how Candys life has changedGood thingsBad things-be able to travel and meet new people all the time-very popular-get tons of attention-worry about how to appear-be very care
3、ful about-dont have much private time-always guards around her Is Candy living a successful life now?My life has changed a lot,too.I used to.and now I still I used to but now I Can you talk about your changes?过去(过去(in the past)现在(现在(Now)used to be fatthinused to be quietoutgoingMy life has changed a
4、 lot.I used to be.and now I am stillI used to be but now I am Read the passage and fill in the blanks.caused any problems miss classes makingfriends his parents more outgoing and activeRead and fill in the blanks.PastNowHe felt _ and _.He is _ now,because he knows his parents _.He _ classes and _ hi
5、s examinations.He works _ than he used to.He was _ and was not able to _ quickly in school.He has become _ and _ in school.lonelyunhappymuch happierare always proud of himwas absent fromfailedeven hardershymake friendsmore outgoingmade some goodfriendsHas your life changed in the last few years?If y
6、es,what is the biggest change?I used to like.And now I still like I didnt use to.But now I Talk about how you have changed in your appearance,personality and hobbies.Then talk with a partner about your changes.In the pastNow appearance personalityhobbiesMy life has changed a lot.I used to.and now I
7、stillI didnt use to but nowI used to but now I Try to write two paragraphs.Paragraph 1:General introduction about the changes in your lifeParagraph 2:The most important change and how it happened 3bWrite about how you have changed.What did you use to be like?Which change is the most important one,an
8、d why?My life has changed a lot in the last few years.I used to _.Now Im _.The biggest change in my life was_.This is the most important change because _.How Ive changed!审题细心审题细心体裁、格式、内容、人称和时态列提纲列提纲构思内容、理清思路、定好段落完整句子完整句子根据题目要求和提示组织句子、句式丰富、多用短语衔接流畅衔接流畅恰当使用逻辑词语,使各要点间连贯,行文通顺检查检查单词拼写、单复数、时态、动词形式、主谓一致、人称
9、、大小写、标点卷面美观卷面美观打草稿再誊抄字体卷面修改写作指导132456【思路点拨思路点拨】1.定基调定基调体裁:说明文体裁:说明文 时态:说明过去的情况用时态:说明过去的情况用used to结构,说明结构,说明现在的情况用一般现在时现在的情况用一般现在时人称:第一人称人称:第一人称2.Write an outline 3.写句子写句子今今昔昔变变化化对对比比外外貌貌(1)_(我过去个子低我过去个子低).(2)Im _(班里个子最高班里个子最高的学生之一的学生之一).性性格格(3)_(我过去羞涩并我过去羞涩并且安静且安静).Im outgoing and I like to make fri
10、ends.爱爱好好(4)_(我过去讨厌读书我过去讨厌读书).I have fallen in love with reading.I used to be short one of the tallest students in my classI used to be shy and quiet I used to hate reading连句成篇:加上开头结尾和连接词连句成篇:加上开头结尾和连接词 My life has changed a lot in the last few years.First,I used to be fat,but now I am thin.Second,I
11、 used to be quiet,but now I am outgoing I have made great progress(取得了巨取得了巨大的进步),大的进步),and Ill try my best to be a better boy/girl.美化:尽量使用多种不同的句型和词语。注意扩写相关要点。My life has changed a lot in the last few years.First,I used to be fat,but now I am thin.Because I play sports everyday.Second,I used to be qu
12、iet,but now I am outgoing.I have made many friends.I have made great progress(取得了巨大取得了巨大的进步),的进步),and Ill try my best to be a better boy/girl.My life has changed a lot in the last few years.I used to _.Now Im _.The biggest change in my life was_.This is the most important change because _.How Ive ch
13、anged!13-15分分主题突出、叙述清楚、内容完整。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇,语句通顺,语意连贯,符合逻辑,基本无语法错误。10-12分分主题突出、主题突出、叙述清楚、叙述清楚、内容完整。内容完整。语法结构和语法结构和词汇基本满词汇基本满 足文章需要,足文章需要,语句通顺,语句通顺,语意基本连语意基本连贯,有少量贯,有少量语法错误。语法错误。7-9分分主题比较突出,但内容松散,写出了部分要点,语句比较通顺,有少量语病,但不影响意思表达。4-6分分部分内容基本符合题目要求,叙述不清楚,内容不完整,语法和词汇错误较多,语句不通顺,影响整体理解。0-3分分没有主题,不能表达自己的思想,拼凑单
14、词,句子不连贯,内容难以理解。评分标准字数少于80或多余120词,赋分减1分书写较差,影响对内容的理解,赋分减1分Alice appearence hairheightbuildpersonalityused to be,but nowhobbyused to like,but nowlikethe most important changereasonHow Ive changed!Is your life getting better or worse?Our hometown Write a passage Write a passage _ has changed a lot._ has changed a lot._ has changed a lot in the last few years.It used to_.Now it _.The biggest change in _ was This is the most important change because _.Write a passage about the changes in our hometown.