1、Unit4 I used to be afraid of the dark(writing)以以“我们的变化我们的变化”为话题,谈论自己发生了那些变化,为话题,谈论自己发生了那些变化,现现请你以请你以“How Ive Changed!”为题,根据以下写作为题,根据以下写作要求,用英文写一篇要求,用英文写一篇80词左右的短文。词左右的短文。写作要点:写作要点:1.内内容完整,语句通顺;容完整,语句通顺;2.介绍你过去和现在发生的变化介绍你过去和现在发生的变化 I used to be short,but now I am tall“审”1.审人称 2.审时态 A Aanalyze the top
2、icanalyze the topic审审2345审List main pointsList main points“列”罗列所有要点,既不遗漏,也不随意添加。列列tall,short,fat,thinshort hair,long hair,straight hair,curly hair outgoing,serious,funny,smart,friendly,shy,unfriendly.enjoy reading,like playing football/basketball.hobbieshobbiespersonalitypersonalityappearanceappeara
3、ncechangeschangesUseful wordsII used to be short,but now I am tallI used to be shy,but now Iam outgoingI used to play computer,but now,I study all day 1.罗列你在外貌方面的变化;2.罗列你在性格方面的变化;3.罗列你在爱好方面的变化;usefulsentencesDescribe your changesI used to be.,but now I am.I used to be.,but now I am.I used to have./w
4、ear./play.,but now I.I used to be short,but now I am tall I used to be quiet,but now I am outgoingI used to play computer,but now I study all day345审列“连”用连词连接句子。Connect the sentencesConnect the sentences连Connect the sentencesConnect the sentences连连表并列表并列表转折表转折表因果表因果表结论表结论I?ve changed.I used to playc
5、omputerI have to study all dayI want to entera good high schoolbecausefor examplebut I?ve changed,I used to play computer,but now I have to study all day,because I want to enter a good high school I must work hard every day from now.I used to be short,now,I am tall.I used to be quiet,but now,I am ve
6、ry outgoing.I used to play computer,now,I study all day,I want to enter a good high school,_ I must work hard every day from now.butAnd butso 45审列连“顺”优化首尾段,使文章更加完整、通顺。BeginningBodyEnding 顺顺 Better the beginning Better the beginning and the endingand the endingBeginningEndingBodyTime flies.We shoud v
7、alue our time I?ve changed a lot in the last few yearsJudge and match.5审列连顺“查”查缺补漏。(检查、修改、定稿、抄写)Check the composition查查I a lot in the last few years,I used to play computer,but now,I have to study all day,because I to enter a good high school,I must work hard every day from now.以以“我们的变化我们的变化”为话题,谈论自
8、己发生了那些变化,为话题,谈论自己发生了那些变化,现现请你以请你以“How Ive Changed!”为题,根据以下写作为题,根据以下写作要求,用英文写一篇要求,用英文写一篇80词左右的短文。词左右的短文。写作要点:写作要点:1.内内容完整,语句通顺;容完整,语句通顺;2.介绍你过去和现在发生的变化介绍你过去和现在发生的变化 whantchangedhave changed wantso Ive changed in the past few years.I used to be short,now,I am tall.I used to be quiet,but now,I am outgo
9、ing.I used to play computer,now,I study all day,I want to enter a good high school,so I must work hard every day from now.Time flies.We should value our time.but Andbut审 列 连 顺 查Five Steps审列连顺查从下列四篇作文中任选一篇写一写 1.How Bill Has Changed?2.My Favorite Teacher 3.How to Keep Healthy?4.My Dream Summary审列连顺查审题
10、分析很重要审题分析很重要,列举要点收集好,列举要点收集好,连句成连句成文文效果好,效果好,优化首尾别忘了优化首尾别忘了,最后最后检查要检查要记牢!记牢!exactThank you!Thank you!健康对于我们来说很重要,我们有很多方法来保持身体健康,请根据提示,以“How to keep healthy”为题,写一篇短文,倡议“健康生活”,从四个方面说明如何拥有健康的生活。注意:1.内容须包括所提示信息,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;3.词数80左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数。写作要点:1.多吃蔬菜、水果 2.多做运动,比如:散步、打球 3.保持充足的睡眠;4.交
11、朋友,多沟通交流。在你的求学生涯中,总会遇到让你难忘的老师。请以“My favorite teacher”为题,写一篇短文。注意:1.内容须包括所提示信息,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;3.词数80左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数。写作要点:1.你最喜欢的老师是.2.为什么让你很难忘?3.这位老师对你有什么的影响?你的好朋友你的好朋友Bill.在过去的几年里他变化在过去的几年里他变化很大。很大。请你以请你以“How Bill has Changed!”为题目,为题目,根据以根据以 下写作要求下写作要求,用英文写一篇用英文写一篇80词左词左右的短文。右的短文。注意:1.内容
12、须包括所提示信息,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;3.词数80左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数。要点:要点:1.介绍介绍Bill过去和现在发生的变化过去和现在发生的变化2.可以从外貌,个性和爱好等可以从外貌,个性和爱好等 三个方面入手。三个方面入手。每个人都有梦想,我也有梦想。请你每个人都有梦想,我也有梦想。请你以以 “MyDream”为题目,为题目,用英文写用英文写一篇一篇80词左右的短文。词左右的短文。注意:1.内容须包括所提示信息,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;3.词数80左右,标题已给出,不计入总词数。要点:要点:1.My dream is to be a/an.2.Because I think being a/an.is