1、英语作文专题(一)词汇升级为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i空白太多要求接近满最多空一行为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i阅卷时间1015秒所以一定要在段首写出亮点没有低级错误否则即使有亮点也是18-19分写错了必须划掉写错划一道横线就可以了take为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i结构:分三段(看的出你分段了才行)内容:要点一个都不能少语言不犯低级错误，多用高级
2、词句评分细则说了算高分作文你得这么写为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i不分大小写(句号后面小写)只写从句，不写主句(写了一长串从句，忘了写主句)严重会让判卷老师认为不分主句从句，20分绝对没戏。乱用非谓语动词(Knowing that.，只是半句，然后后半句不写了)写作常见错误下面表达正确的是，给主人带个合适的礼物是必要的/明智的A.Bring a proper gift to the host is necessaryB.It necessary for you to bring a proper gift to
3、the host.C.Its necessary to bringing in a prepare gift to the host.D.Its advisable to bring a people proper gift to the host.下面表达正确的是，给主人带个合适的礼物是必要的/明智的A.Bring【Bringing】a proper gift to the host is necessary.B.It is necessary for you to bring a proper gift to the host.C.Its necessary to bringing【bri
4、ng】in a prepare gift to the host.D.Its advisable to bring a people proper gift to the host.advisable明智的,essential重要的significant有意义的.vital极其重要的。为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c ibe+adj=be of great+抽象名词important-importancebeneficial-benefit。有益处的valuable-value有价值的significant-signi
5、ficancee.g.It is of great benefit for you to do.I often do morning exercise,which is of great benefit for me.下列句子表达正确的是。A.Learn English is very important.B.I believe do exercise is necessaryC.It is of great value for teenager to read many books.D.It is of great valuable for teenages to read many boo
6、ks.下列句子表达正确的是。A.Learn【Learning】English is very important.B.I believe do【doing】exercises is necessary.C.It is of great value for teenager to read many books.D.It is of great valuable【value】for teenages to read many books.是不是所有的形容词只要有名词形式就可以套用呢？为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c ia
7、 great manya large number ofa variety of多种多样的a growing number of越来越多的an increasing number of大量的an increasing amount ofmucha large amount of 加不可数名词a large(great)deal of 加不可数名词many&much的写作升级为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i【2017年全国I卷】假定你是李华正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语请写封邮件告知下次的上课计划内容包括:3
8、课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。It is important for you to learn Chinese history of Tang Dynasty.划线部分可升级为?It is of great importance for you.【2018年全国卷I】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家里做客，发邮件向你询问相关习俗请回复邮件，内容包括1.到达时间2.合适的礼物3.餐桌礼仪You should learn more about Chinese table manners.It is for you to be a guest in Chinese friends
9、 home.of great significanceTo begin with，you should learn more about Chinese table manners，which is of great significance for you to be a guest in Chinese friends home.段首句我们要写亮点句，如何将这两句话写成一句呢？一种句式只能用一次，不要反复用为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i所有状语从句中有几个表示因果?原因状从Because结果状从As(it i
10、s a fact that)+原因,+主句so.that.,for(the reason that).同位语从句用如此以至于造句As it is of great significance,.so that句型【2017全国II】假定你是李华想邀请Herry一起参观剪纸艺术展请你给他写封邮件，内容包括艺术展，请你给他写邮件内容包括1.展览时间地点2.展览内容因为这个艺术展很有意义，所以我想邀请你参加。这个艺术展是如此的有意义，以至于我们每个月都要举办一次。因果关系是在写作中很好的句式升级为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c
11、 i这个活动是如此有趣以至于我们参加了。【2015全国II】假定你是李华计划和同学们去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人过重阳节(the double ninth Festival)请给外教露西写封邮件邀他一同前往，内容包括1.出发及返回时间;2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。This activity was so popular that we all take part in it.试着用一下so that的倒装So popular was this activity that.(照抄)你的思维决定了你写的句子n是如此那样以至于高级思维如此那样是n以至于.为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基
12、N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c iwant to的替换be willing to do(will意愿)be curious to do(curious好奇)be eager to do(热切)desire to do(渴望)have a great desire to do(名词形式比上面的高级)long to do/long for sth(这里的long是v)intend to do写作神句为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i参加写作升级attended sthjoi
13、n in sthparticipate in sthbe/get(actively)involved in sthI want to take part in more activities.升级：I have a great desire to participate in more activities.为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i污染很严重。写成被动写成被动污染被越来越多的专家和教授认为很严重。Environment contamination is thought very serious by mor
14、e and more experts and professors.你觉得这句话中需要替换哪些单词？Environment pollution is serious.think写作升级believe consider【常用】hold argue(争论)assume(假设)为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c ivery写作升级fairly相当的extremely极其的extraordinarily非凡的English study is very important.English study is extremely im
15、portant.英语作文专题(一)句型升级为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i ，很多外国人都在学习汉语。丰富开头篇：众所周知As we all know that.As is known to all,.(as引导的定语从翻译为正如引导的定语从翻译为正如)It is widely acknowledged(承认承认)that.It is widely believed that.What we all know is that很多外国人都在学习汉语。句式也不要反复用，用过一次定从下一次就不要用了It is widel
16、y acknowledged(承认承认)that a great many forinners are learnning Chinese thesedays.为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i丰富开头篇：副词参加剪纸艺术展有利于你了解中国传统文化。Obviously,明显的,Apparently,(ap+父母)显然的。副词修饰一句话形修名副修动形句二段结尾：Consequently=therefore=As a result=so=thus=As a consequence,介词短语开头Obviously part
17、icipating in the paper-cutting art exhibition is of great benefit for you to have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture.对中国传统文化有更好的理解为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i我喜欢摄影，来记录很多美好的瞬间.I like photograph,can record many wonderful moments.A.forB.whichC.since丰富开头篇：介
18、词短语引导原因状语从句引导原因状语从句+完整的句子完整的句子这句话哪个词可以升级？like can many常见词汇升级词汇升级搭配合适的升级句式be keen on.热衷be fond of.喜欢have a passion for.(激情)have a particular like for sthshow great interest insth never fails to fascinate meNothing in the world can delight me so much as doing.这里只需要补充doing的部分I like music.Nothing in the
19、 world can delight me so much as listening to music.为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i我喜欢摄影，来记录很多美好的瞬间.I like photograph,which can record many wonderful moments.升级：I have a passion for photograph,which is capable of recording a great many wonderful moments.can=be able to do=be
20、capable of doingI have a passion for photograph,which is capable of recording a great many wonderful moments.怎么扣帽子呢？As to hobby,In terms of.,就.而言When it comes to.,当提到.的时候英语作文专题句子升级2为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i下列句子错误的是(多选)A.I am fond of the ancient poetry.B.I am crazy abou
21、t collecting fancy things.C.Ive always been keen on listen to country music.D.Traveling around the world never fail to fascinate me.下列句子错误的是(多选)A.I am fond of the ancient poetry.B.I am crazy about collecting fancy things.C.Ive always been keen on listening to country music.D.Traveling around the wor
22、ld never fails to fascinate me.为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c iShe is not only beautiful,but also considerate.(体贴的，考虑周到的)He is not only ugly,but also stubborn.(固执的，死打不动的)为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i主语 情态动词 not only do A,but also do B.I can not only
23、 do A,but also do B.听老师的课不仅使我学到很多技巧，还让我爱上了英语。Listening to teachers class can not only make me learn many skills but also let me fall in love with English.把把also扔到后边换成扔到后边换成as wellnot only.,but also升级Listening to teachers class can not only make me learn many skills but let me fall in love with Engli
24、sh as well.为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i这个活动不仅快速提升了我的英语水平，还增进了人们之间的理解。【答案】This activity can not only boost my English level,but enhance(加强)the mutual(相互的)understanding as well.boost是improved替换快速提升我的英语水平：boost my English level；增进人们之间的理解：enhance the mutual understanding练习1:为
25、 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i【2014年全国II卷】这个工作不仅能满足我家庭的需要，而且还能给我带来自豪感。(课下练习)满足我家庭的需要：satisfy the needs of my family；给我带来自豪感：fill me with a sense of pride练习2:为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c iNot only will the activity boost my English level faster,but i
26、t can also enhance the mutual understanding among different backgrounds.not only.,but also.的升级主语 情态动词+not only do A,but also do B.主语 情态动词+not only do A,but do B as well.Not only+情态动词+主语+do A,but also do B.Not only+情态动词+主语+do A,but do B as well.This activity can not only boost my English level,but en
27、hance the mutual understanding as well.还可以试试倒装。小结:为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i检测 satisfy the needs of my family,but it will fill me with a sense of pride .A.Not only the job will;as wellB.Not only will the job;as wellC.The job will not only;alsoD.The job not only will;als
28、o【答案】【答案】B为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i写作时间20分钟,必须打草稿，必须分段。(段前空一些)千万不要考试，一开始就写作文，应该是放在最后写。高级句式强烈推荐用：定从、主从、状从、分词不定式、倒装。开头(2句)中间(4-6句)结尾（2句）段首各句写长句无法一次性写亮点句；写完之后想高级词汇替换为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i假定你是李华，你的外国好友Eric将作为交换生到你市的一所高中学习，因担心自己不能快速适应这里的学校生
29、活，特写信向你求助，请就此给他写封回信，要点如下：1.乐意提供帮助；2.提出具体建议；(建议三条)3.希望能帮助对方。背景介绍+写信目的假定你是李华，你的外国好友Eric将作为交换生到你市的一所高中学习，因担心自己不能快速适应这里的学校生活，特写信向你求助，请就此给他写封回信，要点如下：1.乐意提供帮助；2.提出具体建议；(建议三条)3.希望能帮助对方。写信目的背景介绍为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i背景介绍+写信目的学渣版：嗨！来了老弟。Hey you buddy you are coming.问题来了，你会怎么
30、表达你很高兴呢学霸版：很高兴你来我们这里做交换生。What makes me happy is that.I am happy that.What delights me is that.I am greatly pleased that.I am more than delighted that.I am more than pleased/delighted to learn that you are coming to study in our city as an exchange student.learn=get informed=know（被告知）inform sb of sth
31、告知某人某事为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i学渣版：这封信是要给你一些建议。OK,I will give you some suggestions.背景介绍+写信目的学霸版：Im writing to provide a series of suggestions on adapting to the new school.some=a series of系列(单词就自带s)I cant wait to doon As toconcerning(句中)In terms of.,(就.而言)When it come
32、to.,with regard to(句中)As far as I am concerned都是介词后加doing我大写必须大写常用于句首offer,supply为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i背景介绍+写信目的学霸版：I am more than pleased to get informed that you are coming to study in our city as an exchange student.Now Im writing to provide a series of suggestio
33、ns with regard to adapting the new school学渣版：Hey,you,buddy!You are coming!Whats up?You need my help.Ok.I will give you some suggestions.为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i具体建议+建议理由为了帮Eric快速适应新的学校生活，你要给他什么建议？多了解校规多跟同学交流参加课外活动学渣版 多了解校规。You should learn the school rules.多跟同学交流。You
34、should communicate with the students.参加课外活动。You should take part in some activities.You should拿十分It is a good idea for you togood换为remarkable 在换词的时候要注意是不是元音开头要不要改成an比如essential为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c iCommunicating with the students is an important thing.具体建议+建议理由is换为i
35、s regarded as.(被视作)/is considered asis换为is regarded as.(被视作)/is considered as 后面是物的时候做替换学霸版：It seems a remarkable idea for you to get informed the school rules.Communicating with students is considered as a very practical suggestion for you.Getting involved in a series of activities never disappoint
36、s you.（双重否定=should）should的替换be supposed to do sthbe expected to do为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i具体建议+建议理由学神版：每条建议后面匹配理由It seems a remarkable idea for you to get informed the school rules,so that you can be blend into the school soon.Communicating with the students is consid
37、ered as a very practical suggestion for you,which is enables you to get yourself acquainted with the school quickly.Getting involved in a series of activities never disappoints you for the reason that you are capable of making many friends.高级句式总结。因为for the reason that这样能够so that you are capable of,w
38、hich enables you to高级词汇总结know：get informed、get yourself acquainted with.双重否定never fails to do sth为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c i背景介绍+写信目的具体建议+建议理由总结语句+期待祝福开头:结尾:中间:建议信六件套为 成 功 的 人 生 奠 基N o.2 M i d d l e S c h o o l o f Y u c iDear Terry,How are you doing?In your last letter,
39、you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friends home.Now Im writing to tell you some relevant details.To begin with,arrive early is important for you.And you can help the family prepare the dinner.It is meaningful and interesting.Besides,youd better bring some gifts,such as a book or a Chinese knot.The experience is so meaningful that you should take many pictures.作文升级since/as,nowinform sb of sth
