1、第一篇专题复习记叙文记叙文专题三记叙文写作之日记专题三记叙文写作之日记.每日经典谚语和句型背诵与仿写1All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只会用功不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。2It is/was adj.for sb.to do sth.(It 作形式主语,其中adj.常用来描绘活动特点)比较 It is/was adj.of sb to do sth.(It 作形式主语,其中adj.常用来描绘人的特点)活学活用仿照上述句型,翻译下列句子。(1)学好英语对我们来说很有必要。_(2)取笑别人是错的。_It is necessary for us to
2、 learn English well.It is wrong of you to make fun of others.记叙文写作之日记日记常用来记述自己一天生活中所发生的有意义的事情或用来抒发自己对当天某些事情的感受以及自己将来的打算等。英文日记也是这样。SundayFine Last night I watched an exciting basketball match at homethe Houston Rockets Team VS The Los Angeles Lakers Team.As we all know,Yao Ming comes from Shanghai,Ch
3、ina,who is serving in The Houston Rockets Team and is also a super athlete in NBA now.He is famous all over the world not only for his amazing height,but also for his perfect skills in观摩领悟basketball.In spite of this,he has never forgotten his country and his teachers in China.Yao Ming is my favorite
4、 sports star and the hero in my heart.【结构分析与解读】日记主要是用来讲述某天发生在作者本人身上的事情,只要把事件讲述清楚并适当抒发感想(感受)就可以了。文章整个结构为:先交待故事发生的起因过程,进而进行适当的评论,最后抒发自己的感想。句运用了简单句表达所发生的事情,并适当运用了同位语;句运用非限制性定语从句让文章增色;句运用了高级结构“not only.but also.”;句运用了过渡语使文章更加连贯;句发表看法运用了简单句直接抒发感想(感受)。要写好英文日记,需要注意以下几点:1格式要正确。英文日记与中文日记写法大致相同,都是在正文之前,先依次有日期
5、、星期几及当天的天气情况。2表达要清楚、准确、连贯。判断的标准就是通过阅读你的日记,看你是否用简洁明了的英语把所给的汉语提示以及自己的感想等准确无误地表达了出来。3文体要口语化。因为日记是写给自己看的,其内容多是记述自己亲身经历和亲眼看到的事或抒发自己的感情等,所以用第一人称写,文体也不必过分讲究,只需把该写的东西写清楚即可。4写日记的时间一般是在下午、晚上,有时也可以在第二天补写。因此,日记中所记述的事情通常发生在过去,常用一般过去时;但当记述天气、描写景色或展望未来时,可以用一般现在时或一般将来时。假设你参加你校组织的“关爱生命,携手艾滋儿童”的活动,请根据以下信息,写一篇英文日记,叙述活
6、动情况。【写作内容】1时间:2008年12月1日(星期六)8:30起程,共进午餐后返回。2地点:校门口集中,一个半小时自行车车程。目的地:红十字会医院。3活动:亲切交谈,牵手舞蹈,赠送礼物,拍照留念。4感受:【写作要求】1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;2日记的开头已给出。【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。December 1st,2008SaturdayFine_Today is the World Aids Day,so our school organized an activity called“Take care of our lives,and join hand
7、 in hand with Aids children”At 8:30 am,【参考范文】_we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip,which took us about one hour and a half.Soon after we got to the Red Cross Hospital,where most Aids children are staying,we began to have close chats with them to see how their life is g
8、oing,and then we danced happily together.Having got to know them so well,we presented our gifts,took lots of photos and ate lunch together before we came back.I feel very relieved to see the Aids children so happy when they_are taken good care of and not ignored.【范文解析】日记主要讲述作者本人当天所做的事情,人称一般为第一人称,时态为过去时态,开头先来个总述,然后讲述过程,最后再表达本人的感受或看法就可以了,如本文中的I feel very relieved to see the Aids children so happy.。需要注意的是要适当的增加连接词和过渡词润色文章,使文章更加连贯。