1、 基础写作的评分标准 内容 5分 语言 7分 连贯性 2 分书写 1分句子内容的完整性完整性(Completeness)句子结构的正确性正确性(correctness)句子结构的复杂性复杂性(Variety)句子内容的连贯性连贯性(Coherence)处理词语处理词语 写出句子写出句子 连接句子，变身复句。连接句子，变身复句。1.某事值得做某事值得做 sth is worth doing 值得值得(花费金钱，时间花费金钱，时间)worthwhile 2.日常生活日常生活 daily life 3.饥饿饥饿 starvation 4.卫星卫星 satellite 通讯传播通讯传播 communi
2、cation 5.天气预报天气预报 weather forecast 6.能源短缺能源短缺 energy shortages 写作内容：写作内容：最近，你班同学就最近，你班同学就“太空探索是否值得太空探索是否值得”这一话题展开了一场讨论这一话题展开了一场讨论.请你根据下表请你根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况。的情况。30%的同学反对：的同学反对：1.离我们及我们的日常离我们及我们的日常生活太远生活太远 2.浪费金钱，这些金钱本可以浪费金钱，这些金钱本可以用来解决饥饿，污染等问题。用来解决饥饿，污染等问题。70%的同学赞成：的同学赞成：1.已
3、使用卫星进行通讯已使用卫星进行通讯传播，天气预报等；传播，天气预报等；2.有望解决地球能源有望解决地球能源短缺问题短缺问题.1.There are 30%of the students think that space is worth exploring.30%of the students think that space is worth exploring.错误诊断错误诊断：there be 句型使用错误句型使用错误.中国式英语中国式英语 2.70%students think that is worthwhile to explore space.70%of the students
4、 think it is worthwhile to explore space.错误诊断错误诊断：百分比和名词之间要用：百分比和名词之间要用of,of之后的之后的 名词要有名词要有the that是从句标记，要有主语是从句标记，要有主语 3.And had 30%the students are agree the idea of explore space.30%of the students agree with the idea of exploring space.错误诊断：错误诊断：have的用法错误的用法错误 百分数后用of连接名词 sb agree with sb/sbs id
5、ea of是介词，后用名词或者动名词写说明文或介绍性的文章时写说明文或介绍性的文章时,时态要用时态要用现在时现在时,注意句子结构注意句子结构,尤其是主句尤其是主句,从句结构要清晰从句结构要清晰,复杂复杂,主句主句,状语部分要用恰当状语部分要用恰当,不要逐句翻译不要逐句翻译.找出错误，修改找出错误，修改标注出你认为他标注出你认为他/她写得好的句子她写得好的句子 The discussion of seeking the space Today,our class had a discussion,which talk about if the seeking of the space have
6、a worthwhile.Those who are in favor of seeking the space claim that it has a lot of advantages.For example,the satellite was used to communication and the whether forecast,also the seeking could make the earth full of energy.But some students who disagreed with it said:“Maybe the seeking is right,bu
7、t its too far to know it in our daily life,the money used to seeking the space should be useds the deal with the starvation and the pollutions.on my views,I think the seeking of the space is worthwhile to do it.The discussion of seeking the space Is space exploration worthwhile?Is space worth explor
8、ing?Today,our class had a discussion,which talk about if the seeking of the space have a worthwhile.discuss sth discussion on/about sth it is worthwhile to do sth Recently,we have had a discussion on whether it is worthwhile to explore space.Whether the space exploration worthwhile Those who are in
9、favor of seeking the space claim that it has a lot of advantages.be in favor of 赞成赞成 claim 声称，宣称声称，宣称 Those who are in favor of(赞成赞成)exploring space claim that it has a lot of advantages.70%of the students who are in favor of exploring space claim that it has a lot of advantages.For example,the sate
10、llite was used to communication and the whether forecast,also the seeking could make the earth full of energy.1.拼写错误拼写错误 whether 2.时态错误时态错误 For example,satellites have been used for communication and weather forecast,and the exploration can enable us to solve the problem of energy shortages on the e
11、arth if we find new resources on other planets.But some students who disagreed with it said:“Maybe the seeking is right,but its too far to know it in our daily life,the money used to seeking the space should be useds the deal with the starvation and the pollutions.But 30%of the students who disagree
12、 with it feel that space is too far from our daily life and the money spent on space exploration can have been used to deal with problems such as starvation and pollution.On my views,I think the seeking of the space is worthwhile to do it.In my view,space is worth exploring.In my opinion,space is wo
13、rth exploring.As far as I am concerned,space Personally speaking,I think 1.Recently,our classmates have held a discussion whose topic of that was whether worth exploding in space.Recently,our classmates have held a discussion whose topic is whether space is worth exploring.Recently,our classmates ha
14、ve held a discussion on whether space is worth exploring.2.30%students disagree because they considered that it was far away from us and our daily life.30%of the students disagree because they consider that space is far away from our daily life.3.Besides,it wasted money which should have solved some
15、 problems such as starvation and pollution.Besides,it wastes a lot of money,which could have been used to solve problems such as starvation and pollution.4.But the others agreed with the opinion that was worth doing that and gave some reason about that it benefited solving earths energy shortages pr
16、oblem.结构混乱结构混乱 But the others who agree with this idea that space exploration is worthwhile claim that we have benefited a lot from space research and it may help us to solve the earths energy shortage problem.5.And it is known to all the satellite is used to make communication or forecast.It is kno
17、wn to all that satellites have been used for communication and weather forecast.被用来做某事被用来做某事 1.be used to do sth 2.be used for sth Sample 1 Recently,our class has held a discussion about whether space is worth exploring.30%of the students object the idea of exploring space.They feel that its a waste
18、 of time and resources to do so and the large sum of money spent on the exploration could have been used to deal with problems such as starvation and pollution.However,70%of the students consider it worthwhile to explore space.As we all know,satellites have been used for communication as well as wea
19、ther forecast,which make our lives more convenient.Besides,if resources are found on other planets,energy shortages on our earth can be solved.Sample 2 Recently,students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worth exploring.30%of the students think space exploration is not worthwhil
20、e.They think space is too far away from us and our daily life,and the money spent on space exploration can have been used to solve problems such as starvation and pollution.70%of the students think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it,such as using satellites for communication and weather forecast.Also,space research will enable us to find new resources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth.
