1、写作写作题目:题目:How I have changed!Learning aim Write about changes of yourself.Watch and tell difference.She is Sun Yanzi.She used to She is Sun Yanzi.She used to wear glasses.wear glasses.Watch and tell difference.He is a boy.He is a boy.He is Han Geng.He used to have short hair.He used to be like a gir
2、l.appearance(外貌)(外貌)personality(性格性格)hobby habit learninglifestyleshort hair long hairstrong slim/thinHow people have changed!.used tonow.used tonowDiscuss in groups and write down as many phrases/wordsas possible about the following aspects:changesappearancepersonalityhobbieshabitlearninglifestyle
3、How I have changed!I have changed a lot in the last few years.My life is different!When I was young,I used to be shy,but now Im outgoing and I enjoy talking with others.In the past,I used to be interested in Chinese,however,now I like English.I think English is useful and important.And I am an Engli
4、sh teacher now.I often went fishing with my friends,now I m used to going shopping in free time.Whats more,I used to ride the bike to school,now I walk there instead.What great changes I have.beginningendingHow many changes?How I have changed!I have changed a lot in the last few years.My life is dif
5、ferent!When I was young,I used to be shy,but now Im outgoing and I enjoy talking with others.In the past,I used to be interested in Chinese,however,now I like English.I think English is useful and important.And I am an English teacher now.I often went fishing with my friends,now I m used to going sh
6、opping in free time.Whats more,I used to ride the bike to school,now I walk there instead.What great changes I have.So many changesyou can do it this way:How Ive Changed!My life has changed a lot in the past few years.I used to _.Now Im _.The biggest change in my life was_.This is the most import ch
7、ange because_.过去与现在的生活情况I used to.,but now.In the past,I often.Now.In the past,I used to be.but now I am.总结观点My life has changed a lot in the past few years.自我感受It seems that.I really miss the old days.现在你已经是一位九年级的学生了,你感觉自己现在你已经是一位九年级的学生了,你感觉自己和以前有变化吗?请根据自己的体会,多角度,多方和以前有变化吗?请根据自己的体会,多角度,多方面谈谈自己的变化。请
8、以面谈谈自己的变化。请以“How I have changed!”为题写一篇文章为题写一篇文章。要求:要求:1.至少谈至少谈3个方面的变化个方面的变化;2.语句通顺、连贯语句通顺、连贯;3.词数约词数约80左右。左右。自评标准自评标准:大声朗读自己大声朗读自己的文章,从结构、人称、时的文章,从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修标点符号等方面进行自我修正。正。Task 1 自我欣赏与修正自我欣赏与修正我欣赏,我快乐我欣赏,我快乐欣赏角度欣赏角度:1.写作基本要求写作基本要求:人称人称,时态时态,2.要点齐全要点齐全,3.结构结构:开头,正文,结尾开头,正文,结尾,4.好词好句。好词好句。注意:注意:(作文通用修改字符:优美句子;漏词(作文通用修改字符:优美句子;漏词;错处:;去掉;错处:;去掉,语法错误,语法错误 G,人称错误人称错误 P,时态错误,时态错误 T)Task 2 集体赏析,共同进步集体赏析,共同进步Task 3Summary How to write an article about changes.Be the person you want to be!Homework Rewrite your article and hand it in.二次修改作文二次修改作文Thank you!