1、共享单车共享单车1批改记录1 一个要点，多个句子表达2批改记录1 一个要点，多个句子表达3Para 1 reading Chinas bike-sharing has exploded from nothing about a year ago into a transport phenomenon in major cities.Just by scanning the QR code(二维码)that appears behind the seat,one can unlock a shared bicycle.Once the service has finished,the user
2、blocks the bike and the total is charged to his mobile account.The process lasts less than 30 seconds and costs no more than one penny.By the way,there are still no fixed places to find or leave a bike,although areas such as university campus,and metro or bus station are preferred.4Para 1 reading Ch
3、inas bike-sharing has exploded from nothing about a year ago into a transport phenomenon in major cities.Just by scanning the QR code(二维码)that appears behind the seat,one can unlock a shared bicycle.Once the service has finished,the user blocks the bike and the total is charged to his mobile account
4、.The process lasts less than 30 seconds and costs no more than one penny.By the way,there are still no fixed places to find or leave a bike,although areas such as university campus,and metro or bus station are preferred.topic sentence5Para 1 reading Chinas bike-sharing has exploded from nothing abou
5、t a year ago into a transport phenomenon in major cities.Just by scanning the QR code(二维码)that appears behind the seat,one can unlock a shared bicycle.Once the service has finished,the user blocks the bike and the total is charged to his mobile account.The process lasts less than 30 seconds and cost
6、s no more than one penny.By the way,there are still no fixed places to find or leave a bike,although areas such as university campus,and metro or bus station are preferred.topic sentencesupporting details6Para 1 reading Chinas bike-sharing has exploded from nothing about a year ago into a transport
7、phenomenon in major cities.Just by scanning the QR code(二维码)that appears behind the seat,one can unlock a shared bicycle.Once the service has finished,the user blocks the bike and the total is charged to his mobile account.The process lasts less than 30 seconds and costs no more than one penny.By th
8、e way,there are still no fixed places to find or leave a bike,although areas such as university campus,and metro or bus station are preferred.topic sentenceWhats the relationship between topic sentence and supporting details?cause and effect7Para 1 paraphraseChinas bike-sharing has exploded from not
9、hing about a year ago into a transport phenomenon in major cities.Just by scanning the QR code(二维码)that appears behind the seat,one can unlock a shared bicycle.Once the service has finished,the user blocks the bike and the total is charged to his mobile account.The process lasts less than 30 seconds
10、 and costs no more than one penny.By the way,there are still no fixed places to find or leave a bike,although areas such as university campus,and metro or bus station are preferred.topic sentence+supporting details1.Chinas shared bicycles are increasingly popular with public as a cheap and convenien
11、t means of transportation.2.Chinas shared bicycles develop rapidly and provide people with convenient and cheap way to move about.8Para 2 reading Many young people believe shared bicycles have many advantages.They are not expensive to rent,they do not have to be protected from thieves,and there is n
12、o need to repair them.You just have to change them for another one.They are also environment-friendly and lower the use of cars,which also helps to relieve traffic.In fact,it is considered an awesome combination of technology and tradition.9Para 2 reading Many young people believe shared bicycles ha
13、ve many advantages.They are not expensive to rent,they do not have to be protected from thieves,and there is no need to repair them.You just have to change them for another one.They are also environment-friendly and lower the use of cars,which also helps to relieve traffic.In fact,it is considered a
14、n awesome combination of technology and tradition.topic sentence+key detailstopic sentencesupporting details10Para 2 reading Many young people believe shared bicycles have many advantages.They are not expensive to rent,they do not have to be protected from thieves,and there is no need to repair them
15、.You just have to change them for another one.They are also environment-friendly and lower the use of cars,which also helps to relieve traffic.In fact,it is considered an awesome combination of technology and tradition.Whats the relationship between topic sentence and details?general and specific11P
16、ara 2 writing Many young people believe shared bicycles have many advantages.They are not expensive to rent,they do not have to be protected from thieves,and there is no need to repair them.You just have to change them for another one.They are also environment-friendly and lower the use of cars,whic
17、h also helps to relieve traffic.In fact,it is considered an awesome combination of technology and tradition.topic sentence+key details The shared bikes are inexpensive,convenient and environmentally friendly.12Para 3 reading There is no doubt about the benefits but the disadvantages cannot be ignore
18、d.Many problems related to shared bicycles have emerged.It is not only due to bad behavior from some users who always want to seize the bicycles,but also because of the mess that has been created since one can leave the bicycle anywhere,which is against public urban order management.There are so man
19、y poorly parked bikes that sometimes they end up blocking streets.13Para 3 reading There is no doubt about the benefits but the disadvantages cannot be ignored.Many problems related to shared bicycles have emerged.It is not only due to bad behavior from some users who always want to seize the bicycl
20、es,but also because of the mess that has been created since one can leave the bicycle anywhere,which is against public urban order management.There are so many poorly parked bikes that sometimes they end up blocking streets.topic sentencesupporting details14Para 3 writingThere is no doubt about the
21、benefits but the disadvantages cannot be ignored.Many problems related to shared bicycles have emerged.It is not only due to bad behavior from some users who always want to seize the bicycles,but also because of the mess that has been created since one can leave the bicycle anywhere,which is against
22、 public urban order management.There are so many poorly parked bikes that sometimes they end up blocking streets.general and specific1.However,there are many problems caused by shared bikes,one of which is that people leave bikes everywhere.2.However,for lack of management,users leave bikes everywhe
23、re,causing great mess.15Para 4 reading In Xi Luoyuan,Beijing,the“Civilized Use of Bicycles”campaign has been launched.In addition to having 40 officially permitted stops,there are also clear signals to lead users to these stops.A team of supervisors keep order in the area.This is the first area that
24、 is part of an official system to manage bicycles.The purpose of this campaign is to solve the mess that the popularity of shared bicycles is causing in Beijing,both with the participation of companies and the users.If the pilot plan works out well in Xi Luoyuan,it will be extended to all of the cit
25、ies in China.16Para 4 reading In Xi Luoyuan,Beijing,the“Civilized Use of Bicycles”campaign has been launched.In addition to having 40 officially permitted stops,there are also clear signals to lead users to these stops.A team of supervisors keep order in the area.This is the first area that is part
26、of an official system to manage bicycles.The purpose of this campaign is to solve the mess that the popularity of shared bicycles is causing in Beijing,both with the participation of companies and the users.If the pilot plan works out well in Xi Luoyuan,it will be extended to all of the cities in Ch
27、ina.topic sentencesupporting details17Para 4 writingIn Xi Luoyuan,Beijing,the“Civilized Use of Bicycles”campaign has been launched.In addition to having 40 officially permitted stops,there are also clear signals to lead users to these stops.A team of supervisors keep order in the area.This is the fi
28、rst area that is part of an official system to manage bicycles.The purpose of this campaign is to solve the mess that the popularity of shared bicycles is causing in Beijing,both with the participation of companies and the users.If the pilot plan works out well in Xi Luoyuan,it will be extended to a
29、ll of the cities in China.To solve the problem,Beijing started a campaign to regulate bike-parking,which will hopefully set a good example for other cities.18sample Chinas shared bicycles develop rapidly.The shared bikes are inexpensive,convenient and environmentally friendly.However,for lack of management,users leave bikes everywhere,causing great mess.To solve the problem,Beijing started a campaign to regulate bike-parking,which will hopefully set a good example for other cities.19
