1、 建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：服力。通常包括：1.说明写信目的。说明写信目的。2.提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。3.表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。文体概述文体概述 基本框架：基本框架：开头（开头（beginning）-写
2、信的目的（包括背景，写信的目的（包括背景，现状和存在的问题）；现状和存在的问题）；主体主体(body)-建议的内容；建议的内容；对所提出的问题进行对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)结尾结尾(ending)-表达希望（希望自己的建议能够表达希望（希望自己的建议能够对对方有所帮助）对对方有所帮助）(restate your opinion.)首段常用的句型：1.I am writing to express my views on/concerning2.You have asked for some
3、advice concerning and I will try to give you my suggestions.3.I would like to suggest that4.I am writing in reply to5.In my opinion,I would say提出建议时常用的句型：提出建议时常用的句型：In my opinion,it would be beneficial ifI would recommend thatYou do not have to devote all your time toThere is a suggestion as toI sug
4、gest that结尾段常用的结尾段常用的句型：句型：1.I hope that these suggestions/proposals/recommendations will be helpful/useful/beneficial.2.I would be ready to further discuss this matter.3.Please inform me when you have made a decision.4.I trust you will take my suggestions into account.Dear_,Im glad to receive your
5、letter asking for my advice on how to _./I know that _ from_.Backgrounds and problemsHere are a few suggestions/Here is some advice that/on_.First,it is important to _.Then/Second/Also,_.Besides/In addition/Furthermore,it should be a good idea to _.I am sure that/I hope that_.Suggestions,thanks and
6、hope Thanks for your consideration.Im looking forward to/Look forward to _.Yours_,_ Signature常用语块常用语块 1.给某人提建议给某人提建议 _ 2.如下如下 _ 3.在做某事时遇到困难在做某事时遇到困难 _ 4.利用利用 _ 5.向某人征求意见向某人征求意见_ask sb.for advicegive sb.some advice(on)as followshave difficulty/trouble in doing sth.make use of6.制订计划制订计划 _7.认为认为有用有用 _8
7、.参加参加 _9.听从某人的建议听从某人的建议 _10.把把考虑在内考虑在内 _take sth.into account/considerationmake a planfindhelpful/useful/beneficialtake part in/participate infollow ones advice11.得到改善得到改善 _12.有所好转有所好转 _13.依我看来依我看来 _14.我已收到你的来信，得知你我已收到你的来信，得知你 _15.我建议我建议 _ I would like to suggest that/I would like to make a recommen
8、dation that/I am writing to advise you of/If I were you,I would/May I suggest that/I would like to put forward the suggestion thatget improvedchange for the betterin my opinion/in my view/from my point of viewI have received your letter saying that you套用句式套用句式 1.你就你就向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的
9、建议。设性的建议。2.我觉得如果能够我觉得如果能够将会很有帮助的。将会很有帮助的。1.You have asked me for my advice on/concerningand I will try to make some constructive suggestions.2.I feel that it would be beneficial if3.我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。4.我相信你会考虑我的建议的。我相信你会考虑我的建议的。5.如能看到如能看到我会非常开心的。我会非常开心的。3.I hope you will find these sugge
10、stions helpful/useful.5.I would be more than happy to see4.I trust youll take my suggestion into account./I trust youll take good consideration of my suggestion.习作修改习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文做短文改错，背经典范文)Dear Roy,I am glad to receive your letter ask for my advice to how to learn Chinese well.Here are few sugge
11、stions.First,this is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspaper and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.asking on a it newspapers Beside,it should be a good idea to le
12、arn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easier.You can also make more Chinese friends.He will tell you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese.Try and write to me in Chinese the next time.Best wishes!Yours truly,Li HuaBesides easily They and 假定你
13、是李华，请根据所给材料，给假定你是李华，请根据所给材料，给Lora写一写一封回信。要点如下：封回信。要点如下：1.Lora父母不同意的原因。父母不同意的原因。2.你给你给Lora的具体建议。的具体建议。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右。左右。2.可以适当增加细节，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Lora,I have just read your letter in the magazine.I know that you want to work part-time this summer.But your p
14、arents dont allow you to do so.I understand your situation.I think your parents may have their reasons.They may regard learning as the most important task for you.Perhaps theyd like you to make use of this summer holiday to study.Besides,they may think you are too young to work.I think you had bette
15、r have a talk with your parents.If they agree,you should make a detailed plan for your study and work,ask your friends to work together with you,and tell your parents not to worry about you because you are old enough to manage things properly.Anyway,I would be more than happy to wish you a pleasant summer.Yours truly,Li Hua
