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5、ppiness belongs to our.2.Although he was tired,he was happy.3.Study hardly is the bridge to success.4.There are many people like pop music.-Many people like pop music.5.Whatever he happens,he never lose confident.-Whatever happens to him,he never loses confidence.6.Its important for us to keep healt
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7、g English songs.better and betterto save the earthcollectingswimmingbesingingtoPractice假如你是Frank,阅读邮件内容，然后根据提示给Danny 回一封电子邮件。Dear Doctor Frank,How are you?I often feel very weak and I dont know what to do.Could you give me some advice on how to keep healthy?Danny不吸烟不吸烟喝酒喝酒多锻多锻炼炼自拟建自拟建议议2吃健康吃健康食物食物自拟
8、自拟建议建议1How to keep healthy?The outline of the letter outlineBeginningMain partEndingDear Frank,Im sorry to hear that youre not feeling well.First：eat healthy food,such as.stay away from junk foodSecond:do more sports,run,play ball gamesThird:give up bad habits(drinking and smoking),I think:go to bed
9、 early and get up early.not stay up late,stay happy and talk with your parents and your friends more often.I hope youll feel better soon,best wishes!Dear Danny,Im sorry to hear that youre not feeling well.As we know,it is important for us to keep healthy.But do you know how to make it?Im happy to sh
10、are my ideas with you here.First,you should eat healthy food,such as apples,vegetables and so on,dont forget to stay away from junk food.Second,its necessary for you to do more sports.You can run every morning and play ball games after school.Third,you should give up unhealthy living habits,such as
11、drinking and smoking.I think youd better go to bed early and get up early.Staying up late is bad for our health.Whats more,youre supposed to stay happy and talk with your parents and your friends more often.I hope youll feel better soon,best wishes!Frank plant treesturn off the showertake your own b
12、ags when shopping dont use paper napkins（餐巾）（餐巾）stop riding in carsrecycle（回收）（回收）books,bottles and paperThe outline of the letter outlineBeginningMain partEndingIts our duty toThe environment is becoming.First：plant more trees and grass,protect the wild animalsSecond:save water,turn off the showerN
13、ext:take our own bags when shopping.recycle paper、bottles and books,stop riding in cars If everyone can.,the world will be.At last:stop using paper napkins Its our duty to protect the environment.The environment is becoming worse and worse,so we must do something to save it.First,I think we should p
14、lant more trees and grass,it is helpful to protect the wild animals.we all know,animals are our friends so we must stop people hurting them.Second,its our duty to save water,while we are washing our hair,we should turn off the shower.Next,make sure we take our own bags when shopping.Recycling paper、
15、bottles and books is also a good way to save the earth.Oh,yes,the traffic is busier and busier,so we should stop riding in cars if possible,you should walk on foot.At last,I want to tell you if youre used to using napkins,please stop it at once!If everyone can do as I say,the world will be more and more beautiful,lets take action.
