1、TaskLearning Aims By the end of class,we students are expected to1.Find out highlights and problems in our own writing as well as our peers while fulfilling some tasks.2.focus on writing problems of contents and languages,such as the lack of details about ideas,poor word choices and boring sentences
2、,etc.3.improve our oral and written ability in evaluating(评估)and improving both our pieces and others,especially editing our own first drafts.What problems of writing will be mainly solved?I like art best Both my teachers and classmates think I am able to sing well because I have a gift for singing.
3、I began to learn my first song Twinkle,twinkle,little star when I was six years old.At that time I found that singing was such an interesting thing,up to now,I have learned over two hundred songs.In my spare time,I often sing songs to others.Everyone is happy to be my listeners,because of my passion
4、 and confidence.Even though I cannot be a professional singer,I still get a lot of fun from singing.Because of singing,my life becomes more colourful.Lets review if the piece is finished well enough.一一.查作品完成度查作品完成度Does the writer manage to tell readerswhat art form he likes best?whether he is good a
5、t this art from?when he became interested in this art form?whether he has any stories about this art form?How important this art from is to him?Adapted from the questionnaire in the text bookLets check if the writer finishes the writing taskGood organizationCharacteristics of good writingGood writin
6、gFine languageEnough contents二二.评作品成熟度评作品成熟度I like art best Both my teachers and classmates think I am able to sing well because I have a gift for singing.I began to learn my first song Twinkle,twinkle,little star when I was six years old.At that time I found that singing was such an interesting thi
7、ng,up to now,I have learned over two hundred songs.In my spare time,I often sing songs to others.Everyone is happy to be my listeners,because of my passion and confidence.Even though I cannot be a professional singer,I still get a lot of fun from singing.Because of singing,my life becomes more colou
8、rful.二评作品成熟度二评作品成熟度结构:1.文章段落是否清晰易读?2分 2.文章开头是否吸引读者?1分 3.文章结构是否有所感悟?1分内容:1.文章是否讲述故事而非告诉事情?3分 2.文章是否有生动情节和细节描写?3分 3.文章全部内容是否与主题密切相关?2分语言:1.文章是否有令人眼前一亮的用词?3分 2.文章是否有句子尝试创造画面感?3分 3.文章是否借鉴了教材中的语言?2分Lets review if the piece is finished well enough.三三.赏同伴好作品赏同伴好作品 The art form I like bestCalligraphy is a k
9、ind of beautiful handwriting I like best.However,I couldnt enjoy its charm years ago,“Just so so.I thought to myself.On a hot,noisy summer afternoon,my father showed me lots of calligraphy works he wrote when he was 11.“For what?I asked.“Teach you to learn the art of calligraphy.he looked at me,smil
10、ing.“Ha-ha,is it of any value to a busy student like a bee?I couldnt help laughing.My father didnt say a word.He just put a piece of rice paper on the table and picked up a Chinese writing brush.He was so serious that I even felt everything got quieter at that moment.Also I realized something surpri
11、sing was to take me to another fantastic world I had never been to-I was completely attracted by its magic.So AMAZING.It was from that afternoon that I started to learn calligraphy from my father and gradually lost myself in the art form,which taught me to keep peace and simple in the heart no matte
12、r what was happening outside.By zhonglong 三三.赏同伴好作品赏同伴好作品The art form I like best1.Does the writer use any details to make the story more interesting or easier to understand?2.Does the writer use any specific effective or memorable words to tell the story?3.Do any students help to create pictures in
13、 your mind when you are reading the story?4.4.-Lets appreciate,and learn from our peers piece.三三.赏同伴好作品赏同伴好作品1.Show enough details instead of telling a fact.2.Use good words or sentences to create pictures.3.-In this way,you can make the piece more interesting toread or much easier to understand.In
14、a word,when you are writing a piece,dont forget about its readers.Lets-四四.组员齐献策组员齐献策I like art bestBoth my teachers and classmates think I am able to sing well because I have a gift for singing.I began to learn my first song Twinkle,twinkle,little star when I was six years old.At that time I found t
15、hat singing was such an interesting thing,up to now,I have learned over two hundred songs.In my spare time,I often sing songs to others.Everyone is happy to be my listeners,because of my passion and confidence.Even though I cannot be a professional singer,I still get a lot of fun from singing.Becaus
16、e of singing,my life becomes more colourful.五五.练修改展示与评价练修改展示与评价1.The biggest problem in my first draft is-.2.a.I try to add/cut off/change/-because I hope my readers can know/understand/realize-better.b.I make such a change in my piece because I want to express/show/find a way to-c.The best words/se
17、ntences/most interesting details in my pieces are-.I wrote them because-.d.I am satisfied with the change most because-.e.Compared with my first draft,the new version-.3.What do you think of my new piece?Can you give me some advice for future improvement?Lets edit the first draft on your own and the
18、n show.Before classWhen I wrote a story,I did/didnt-.During classI make such a little/much progress in-.After classI need more/want to-.1.Continue to edit your first draft and hand in your2.favourite version tomorrow.3.2.Do after-school exercises.4.3.Prepare for next unit.He has the habit of reading
19、.n.习惯习惯the four great classical Chinese novelsadj.古典的古典的Mr Wu wants to find out about his students reading habits.He drafted the following questions for the survey.Complete it with your own information.1 How much time do you spend reading each week?a Less than 1 hour.b 1-2 hours.c 3-4 hours.d More t
20、han 4 hours.2 When do you usually read books?a Any time I can.b Every night.c At weekends.d During holidays.3 What is your favourite type of book?a Novel.b Science.c History.d Travel.Other:_4 How do you get most of your books?a Borrow from libraries.b Buy at bookshops.c Borrow from friends.d Receive
21、 as gifts.5 Why do you usually read?a To relax.b To improve my knowledge.c To collect information for a report.d Because someone has recommended a book.6 Who do you usually ask for advice on books?a Teachers.b Parents.c Friends.d Librarians.Millie is writing about her reading habits.Here is her repo
22、rt.Read and answer the questions.1.How many paragraphs in the passage?2.A.Two B.Three3.2.What is the passage about?4.A.Reading habits B.Eating habits5.3.Can good books open up a whole new world to us?A.Yes.B.No.6.4.How much time does Millie spend reading different types of books?7.A.over seven hours
23、 a week8.B.less than five hours a week5.How long does Millie usually read before going to bed at weekdays?A.about thirty minutes B.about twenty minutes6.What book does Millie like best?A.History B.Science C.novels 7.Where does Millie get most of her booksfrom?A.Sunshine Library B.Her teachers C.Her
24、friends8.Who gives her lots of advice on books?A.Her friends B.her parents I love reading.I spend over 1_ hours reading different types of books.On weekdays,I usually read for about an hour 2_ going to bed.I am 3_ in history books,but I like 4_ best.The four great 5_ Chinese novels are my favourite.
25、I get most of my books from Sunshine Library-it is just 6 _ my home.My friends give me lots of 7 _ on books.We often meet together and discuss 8_ to read.sevenbeforeinterestednovelsclassicaloppositeadvicewhat Passage 1 Where to get books How to read What to read the meaning of reading Read and match
26、 the main ideas.Passage 2 Passage 3 1.I spend over seven hours a week reading different types of books.我一个星期花费七个多小时的时间来我一个星期花费七个多小时的时间来阅读不同种类的书。阅读不同种类的书。over意为意为“超过、多于超过、多于,相当于相当于more than。e.g.There are over five hundred students in our school.我们学校有我们学校有500多个学生。多个学生。different types of 意为意为“不同种类的不同种类
27、的。e.g.There are many different types of books in the library.图书馆里有许多不同种类的书。图书馆里有许多不同种类的书。2.it is just opposite my home.它就在我家对面。它就在我家对面。opposite prep.在在对面对面,与与相反相反 e.g.The post office is opposite the bank.邮局在银行对面。邮局在银行对面。3.My friends give me lots of advice on books.我的朋友们给了我许多有关书的建我的朋友们给了我许多有关书的建议。议。a
28、dvice n.建议建议,忠告忠告,劝告劝告 e.g.I asked the teacher for her advice.我征求了老师的意见。我征求了老师的意见。give sb.some advice on sth.给某人一些关于给某人一些关于.的建议的建议e.g.Could you give me some advice on my plan?你能就我的方案给点儿建议吗？你能就我的方案给点儿建议吗？4.They also open up a whole new world to me.而且他们给我开辟了一个全新的世界。而且他们给我开辟了一个全新的世界。open up 翻开翻开;开发开发;开
29、辟开辟 e.g.This new job will open up a whole new world to me.这项新工作将为我开辟一个全新这项新工作将为我开辟一个全新 的世界。的世界。Write a report on your own reading habits.You can use the following useful expressions to help you.I spend hours a week reading.On weekdays,I usually I at the weekend.I am interested in books.My favourite
30、book is.I get most of my books from.My friend(s)/teacher(s)often.I love reading because.1.我非常喜欢读书，我通常一周读六小时的书。like reading very much/spend six hours a week reading books.2.在工作日，我在早上或者中午读书；在周末，我在晚上读书。at weekdays/in the morning/at noon/at the weekend/in the eveningI like reading very much.I usually sp
31、end six hours a week reading books.At weekdays,I read books in the morning or at noon.At the weekend,I read in the evening.3.我喜欢科幻书，我最喜欢我喜欢科幻书，我最喜欢the Harry Potter series./science and fantasy books4.我经常从图书馆借书，因为那儿有各种各我经常从图书馆借书，因为那儿有各种各样的书。样的书。borrow books from library5.读书的意义，至少给出两点。读书的意义，至少给出两点。good
32、 friends/make me forget my sadness.I love science and fantasy books.I like the Harry Potter series best.I often borrow books from our school library,because there are many kinds of books there.范文展示范文展示:My reading habits I like reading very much.I usually spend six hours a week reading books.On weekd
33、ays,I read books in the morning or at noon.At the weekend,I read in the evening.I love books and fantasy books.I like the Harry Potter series best.It is very interesting and the main character is amazing.I often borrow books from our school library because there are many kinds of books there and I c
34、an always find books easily.I like talking with my classmates about what to read.We often give each other useful information about books.That is really helpful.Books are my good friend.Whenever I feel sad,I will get an interesting love reading.Homework:1.L e a r n t h e k e y w o r d s a n d p h r a s e s.2.Read the passage fluently on Page 61.
