1、M8U Writing:An expectation for my future school life3(Revision)Warm-up Get to know Sally through picturesbuildingsgardenplaygrounddining hallcampus(校园)coursesrelationsactivitieslibrary,swimming pool.interesting,colorful classmates,teachers surf the Internet,play chessWhat will your high school life
2、be like?1.There will be a large library in my future school.2.I will listen to music in my spare time.3.They will get along well with me.There will be a big library in my future school.I can read my favorite books there.There will also be a large swimming pool.I can go swimming with my classmates.Co
3、urses will be interesting and colorful and I can do different things,such as surf the Internet,play chess and so on.By the way,I will get along well with my classmates and teachers.I love my future school life!A possible versionThere will beThere will beI canI canI canspelling mistakessimilar struct
4、uressimple sentencesfew linking wordsGood?How to write a better composition?3.(连)Connect the sentences2.(列)List the outline4.(润)Polish the articleAn expectation for my future school life5.(检)Check the mistakes1.(审)Analyze the information三年快乐而充实的初中生活快要结束了，你将进入高中（高职）学习。展望未来，你对高中（高职）生活充满期待。请以“I expect
5、my future school life”为题，写一篇80-100词左右的短文。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。1.(审)Analyze the informationCampus(校园)beautiful，the dining-hall,the library,the playground.Relationsget along well with.Courses interesting,colorful.Activities in my spare time,surf the Internet.Your ideamake progress.I expect my future schoo
6、l life I will study in a senior high school soon.Everything will be new to me._010302outlineI will study in a senior high school soon.Everything will be new to me.The description of my future school lifeYour expectation for the future 2.(列)List the outlineBeginning:Body:campus,relationscourses,activ
7、itiesEnding:123Strategies(策略)Advanced words and phrases(高级词汇短语)Abundant sentence patterns(丰富的句式)4.(润)Polish the articleProper linking words(恰当的连接词)Phrases come first(短语优先)Eg.I think having a large library will be important for us.be of great importance in my spare time,after class,to get useful info
8、rmation,with the help of,luckily,Abundant sentence patterns(丰富的句式)合二为一 有头脑巧用谚语 多一招会用with 水平高主动不如 被动巧陈述不如 倒装妙351241.陈述不如倒装妙！Eg.Only if we have a large library,will we enrich our school life.2.主动不如被动巧！Eg.A swimming pool is expected to be built in my senior high school.3.会用with水平高！Abundant sentence pat
9、terns(丰富的句式)Eg.With many flowers planted,our school will take a new look.4.合二为一 有头脑！Abundant sentence patterns(丰富的句式)Eg.I will get along well with my classmates and make new friends,who share the same interests with me.5.巧用谚语多一招！Eg.As a saying goes,“Life lies in movement.”so I hope there will be a l
10、arge gym in my future school.Lets write 三年快乐而充实的初中生活快要结束了，你将进入高中（高职）学习。展望未来，你对高中（高职）生活充满期待。请以“I expect my future school life”为题，写一篇80-100词左右的短文。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Campus(校园)beautiful，the dining-hall,the library,the playground.Relationsget along well with.Courses interesting,colorful.Activities in my s
11、pare time,surf the Internet.Your ideamake progress.I expect my future school life I will study in a senior high school soon.Everything will be new to me._Lets be a judge(裁判)Standard(标准)Points(分值)1.Abundant Contents (内容充实，覆盖要点)72.Correct Grammar (用词适切，语法正确)73.Clear Logic (结构紧凑，意思连贯)44.Beautiful Handw
12、riting (书写规范，词数适宜)2Total _A better vision:I will study in a high school soon.Everything will be new to me.In a totally/completely new learning environment,Ill be very excited and curious(好奇的).I will attach my attention to the beautiful campus with a large and neat dining hall and a grassy playground
13、.What makes me really thrilled(极度激动的)is that there will be a bright library where I can acquire(获得)some knowledge.In the school,I will be on good terms with(与相处融洽)my classmates and make some new friends who share the same interests with me.Moreover,interesting and colorful courses will also be offer
14、ed so that I will get a good opportunity(机会)to develop other skills.In my spare time,I can also participate in(参加)some after-school activities,such as surfing the Internet and so on.Fruitful(硕果累累的)junior high school life is coming to an end and much more joyful senior high school life will soon unfo
15、ld(铺开)in front of me.I believe I will make great progress and embrace a bright future.Individual work:Correct the mistakes in your writing and thenwrite it again.Group work:Judge others writings and help them improve their writings or learn something wonderful from others writings.Homework What will your future life be like?2019Thank you!
