1、To talk about how a person has changed.To write a composition about how a person has changed.Before-writingBefore-writing1.Mario used to be _.He used to wear _.2.Amy used to be _.She used to have _.3.Tina used to have _ and _ hair.glassestallshort hairredcurlyshortWhat did they use to look like?Look
2、ing-backLooking-backIn the past Now 1.Paula used to be really_.She was always silent in class.She wasnt very_.She was never brave enough to ask questions.1.Now shes more interested in_.She plays _almost every day.Shes also on a _ team.quietoutgoingsportssoccerswimHow Paula has changedIn the past Now
3、 2.She got good grades in _.She was also good in_.She used to play the _.2.She still plays the _from time to time.sciencemusic classpianopianoWhat was Billy like in the past?What is Billy like now?1.shy and quiet 2.turned red talked to girls3.thin wear glasses4.read in the library every day5.studied
4、 hard and got good scores1.popular2.big and strong3.girls around himBilly has changed so muchAfter Candy becomes successful,she has a lot of differences in her life.She used to be _,but now _.1.Candy used to be _,but now shes not shy _.2.She didnt use to be _ in school,but now she gets _.3.She used
5、to _ with friends,but it is almost _ now.4.She didnt use to _ how she appears to others,but now she does.5.She used to sing to _ her shyness,but now she loves singing _.6.She didnt use to _ about what she says or does,but she is now.shyanymorepopulartons of attentionhang outimpossibleworry about dea
6、l within front of crowdsbe carefulPastNowHe felt _ and _.He was _ now,because he knew his parents _.He _ classes and _ his examinations.He worked _ than he used to.He was _ and was not be able to _ quickly in school.He became _ and _ in school.lonelyunhappymuch happierwere proud of himwas absent fro
7、mfailedeven hardershymake friendsmore outgoingmade some goodfriendsLi Wens ChangesChangesDaily lifeStudyHobbiesAppearancepersonalityBehaviors(行为习惯)Mind-mapAppearance:beam-wasis-wasare-weretall/shortof medium heightof medium buildstrong/fat/good-lookinghandsomeheavy/thinyoung/oldKey wordsKey wordsphr
8、asesphrasesstraight/curly hairlong/short hairblack/brown/blond/red hairtwo big eyesa big nosea long necka small mouthglassesjeansa hata T-shirta school uniformhave/has/hadwear/wears/worePersonality:outgoing funny lovely cute kind friendlyshy quietserious activesmart silent(沉默的沉默的)confident(自信的自信的)br
9、ave(勇敢的勇敢的)humorous(幽默的幽默的)beam-wasis-wasare-wereHobbies:read books/sing/dance/run/play basketball/play computer games/watch TV/listen to music/Daily life:get up/go to bed/do homework/go to after-school classes/chat with friends/hang out with friends/Study:be good at/do well in/be interested in/get
10、good grades/get good scores/get into high school/fail the examinationsBehaviors:be absent from/have much private time/fight with others/say something bad to others/1.I used to be,but now I am.I didnt use to be,2.I used to have,but now I have I didnt use to have,3.I used to wear,but now I I didnt use
11、 to wear,4.I used to like,but now I didnt use to like,5.I used to play,but now I didnt use to play,Key sentence patternsKey sentence patternsWhile-writingWhile-writing写作六大步骤：写作六大步骤：1.1.审：审：人称时态文体2.列：列要点3.扩:4.连：5.改:6.誊:Who?what?when?where?why?how?Good points,bad points过渡词拼写，大小写，标点，格式排版Write about how
12、 you have changed.What did you use to be like?Which change is the most important one,and why?How Ive changed!My life has changed a lot in the last few years.I used to _.Now Im _.The biggest change in my life was _.This is the most important change because _.Para.1 General introduction about the chan
13、ges in your life.Para.2 The most important change and how it happenedWrite notes about how you have changed in your appearance,personality,hobbies and other aspects(方面方面).Then talk with a partner about your changes.In the pastNow appearance personalityhobbiesshort and thintalllong curly hairshort st
14、raight hairshyoutgoingquietactivemusicdanceIn the pastNow daily life studybehaviorsget up at 6:30get up at 6:00go to bed at 10:00go to bed at 12:00lazystudy hardget bad gradesget good gradestalk loudly/sleep in classkeep quiet/listen to the teacher carefullyPost-writingPost-writing 评分档次和标准：评分档次和标准：第
15、一档：1720分。要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只 有个别语言错误。第二档：1316分。要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但 有少数语言错误。第三档：912分。要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚、连贯，基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。第四档：58分。要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少量正确句子，但整体表达不太连 贯，且语言错误较多。第五档：04分。只能写出一些单词，不成句子，缺乏逻辑性，错误很多内容要点遗漏、句子语法结构错误、时态、语态误用，均为大错。其它错误（如冠词、介词、拼写等方面的错误）均为小错。3个小错相当于1处大错。相同的错误，只扣1
16、次 How Ive Changed My life has changed a lot in the last few years.When I was a little child,I used to play with my friends all day long.We found that almost anything could bring fun to us.But now,I am growing up,things seem to change gradually that I dont realize.I had a lot of time to play before,b
17、ut now nearly all my time is spent on study and homework.I used to watch cartoons,but now I prefer news and English programs.Generally speaking,things turn better.Now,I am interested in reading and writing.I think that the more good books I read,the more knowledge I get.The biggest change in my life was that I began to love sports at the age of ten.This is the most important change.Because I didnt use to play sports after school.When I was ten years old,I often fell ill.So my parents encouraged me to play sports after school.Now Im really interested in sports and Im much healthier.
