1、 人教人教2019版版必修第一册必修第一册 Unit 3 话题写作训练话题写作训练1Learning objectives:本单元的写作主题是“为健康簿编写一页内容”，要求学习比较(comparison)和对比（contrast)的基本写作方法，对自己的心理健康（如压力、自信）和身体健康（如锻炼、饮食）进行反思，对比过去与现在或者将来的打算，培养关注健康的意识，形成正确的健康观。Eat healthy foods Regular exercise Get enough sleep Drink water(keep well-hydrated保持体内湿润)Reduce stress(stress
2、 management)What should we do to keep healthy?A high school class has a wellness book in which they exchange ideas about health and fitness.KaylaGoing positiveShe was worried about her weight and appearance.It means she nearly went crazy because she was so worried,and tried various methods.An articl
3、e that said instead of asking“Am I fat?”people should be asking“Am I fit?”What problems did Kayla have in the past?What does the sentence“I almost went bananas”mean?What made her change her thinking?Read the passage again and figure out the organization.Title going positiveThe turning pointThe pastT
4、he presentaim mood worriedactionshappier and positive2.run 2 kilometers in eight minutes 1.do 30 push-ups 3.add healthy foods to my meals2.Tried every new diet like no fat,low fat,5:2,only bananas,no bananas.1.cut out the foods she enjoys to keep slimto keep fitread an article about being fit.Whats
5、the function(功能)of the underlined words and phrases?Then I read an article that said instead of asking“Am I fat?”I should be asking “Am I fit?I had no idea a letter could make such a difference!Once I started thinking about fitness rather than weight,things began to change.Finally,I stopped comparin
6、g myself with actresses and models and looking for things that were wrong with my face or body.Instead,I made a list of the things I liked about myself.比较(comparison);对比（contrast)Read the passage again and figure out the language features.请根据下面的提示，写一篇关于自己的健康报告书。请根据下面的提示，写一篇关于自己的健康报告书。两年前1.忙于学习，经常感到疲
7、劳、焦虑、压力很大。2.无法平衡学习和休息。转折点及行动 .现在1.感到精神焕发，精力充沛。2.可以平衡学习和休息。3.学习效率提高了。Brainstorm：What kind of turning point and actions do you think will change such a situation?Para.1 Two years ago,occupied with my study，I couldnt balance rest and study.As a result,I often felt tired,anxious and stressed.Para.2 Turn
8、ing point and actions:.Para.3 Now,I manage to balance rest and study and become refreshed and energetic.I seldom fall behind my classmates.Instead,I study more efficiently than before.Draft the second paragraph by using the following words:rather than,instead of,instead,compare.with.,make a differen
9、cePost-writingpolishing the passageExchange your passage with your partner,and pay attention to the following points.1.Does the writer explain why he/she changed/wanted to change?2.Does the writer tell how the changes have improved or will improve his/her life?3.Is the text well-organised?4.Does the
10、 writer use words and expressions to show similarities and differences?5.Are there any grammar or spelling errors?6.Does the writer use correct punctuation?Two years ago,occupied with my study，I couldnt balance rest and study.As a result,I often felt tired,anxious and stressed.Then I read an article
11、 that said instead of keeping studying I should strike a balance between rest and study.Once I realized the importance of balancing rest and study,things began to change.Rather than studying all the time,I began to spare some time to have a rest.Instead of doing my homework all the day,I went to pla
12、y football for an hour a day.Rather than comparing myself with my classmates,I sticked to my own arragements.Now,I manage to balance rest and study and become refreshed and energetic.I seldom fall behind my classmates.Instead,I study more efficiently than before.One possible version:HomeworkPolish your writing.
