1、B1U1 Teenage life -Write a letter of advice Reading for Writing课前准备：课本，学案，双色笔，激情。Learning aims1.Express teenage problems they encounter and know how to seek for help.2.Summarize the organization and language features of a letter of advice.3.Choose one of the situations to write a letter of advice ac
2、cording to your discussion.Self-studySelf-study04010203Read the letter and answer the following questions on paper.(1)What is Worried Friends problem?(2)Do you think Ms Luos advice is useful?Why or why not?(3)What other kinds of advice would you give?What is Worried Friends problem?1.Spend too much
3、time onlineDifficult to focus on other thingsPlay games2.Become addicted to the InternetUnable to concentrate on school and family What are Susan Luos suggestions?1.Talk to your friend2.Try to have a new hobbyWhat other kinds of other advice would you give?I would offer other kinds of advice to some
4、 students who become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.We can make the team of five people to beat him.If he is always defeated,he will lose his interest in playing computer games.Then he will have no happiness because happiness can keep people going on,so hav
5、ing no happiness will stop people doing what they love.BeginningEndingSignatureGreetingBodyDateStructure of the letter of adviceYou wrote that you are very worried about your friend,Chen Lei.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your friend plays computer game
6、s too often and spends too much time online.I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.(It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on o
7、ther things in life.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.)I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together?I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.Structure of the let
8、ter of adviceShow the reader that you know what the problem is.Tell the reader that you understand how he/she feels.Tell the reader what you think he/she should do.Explain your reasons.Tell the reader what you think will happen.Study the organization.Layout（谋篇布局）（谋篇布局）Beginning state your purposeBod
9、y give advice&reasonsEnding express your hopeUseful sentencesA.state your purpose 1.I understand quite well that you 2.Knowing that,Id like to give some suggestions.3.It is my pleasure to offer you some advice onB.give your advice 1.I recommend that you 2.I think you should3.Why not do./why don t yo
10、u do.?4.It will be a good idea if you.Its a good ideaway to do.5.What is strongly recommendedsuggested is that.6.You might as well do.Youd better do.7.When it comes to learning English,my suggestions are as follows.On the one hand.on the other hand.C.express your hope1.Im sure2.I hope you will find
11、these suggestions helpful.3.Im sure if you take my advice,you will 常见连接词常见连接词罗列观点罗列观点 Firstly,First of all,To begin with,Secondly,Besides,Moreover,In addition,Whats more,Finally,At last,In the end,Last but not least,Group workChoose one of the three situations and discuss his/her problem.List possib
12、le suggestions and reasons.NameProblemSuggestionReasonEric Xu Ting Min Ho While-writing喜欢班上的一个女孩,太害羞不敢和她讲话.Dear MinHo,You wrote that you are too shy to talk to the girl you like.I understand that you are very anxious and worried now.My suggestions are as follow.First,I recommend that you should tell
13、 it to your teachers and listen to their advice because it can help you make a wise decision.Besides,I think you should tell the girl that you like her bravely because if you dont tell her about it,she will never know.And if you keep the secret in your heart for a long time,it will have influence on
14、 your study.Last but not least,why not try to be her close friend?Personally,I think it is the most direct way to show your advantages to her.Im sure that you can make her pay attention to you if you take my advice.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.Best wishes,Li Hua经常感觉到孤单,因为父母在另外一个城市.
15、Dear Xu Ting,You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city.I quite understand that you miss your parents very much and feel lonely every day.Here are my suggestions.To begin with,I recommend that you should learn about what your parents do and try your
16、best to understand them.Because whatever they do,they are good with you and they love you best.Besides,I think you should call them and talk about the problem with them directly.Because I think it is the most useful way to solve the problem.Last but not least,why not go to the city where they work t
17、o visit them?I think they will feel happy and touched when they see you.Im sure that you will feel less lonely than before.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.Best wishes,Li Hua父母不会听我说话,听我倾诉.Dear Eric,You wrote that your parents wont listen to you when you tell them things.I quite underst
18、and that you are really worried and fell terrible now.Here are some of my suggestions.First of all,I recommend that you should write a letter to your parents by yourself.Because it can help them understand you and know more about your thoughts.Whats more,I think you should listen to them first and l
19、earn to understand each other.Because understanding is mutual,you shouldnt always ask them to listen to you,you should listen to them as well.In the end,why not sit down and communicate with them directly.Personally,I think it is the most useful way.Im sure that they will listen to you if you take my advice.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.Best wishes,Li HuaChecklistLetter format 信的格式 Organisation 信的组织结构 Language 语言运用 Handwriting 书写 Evaluation 评价评价Thank you
