1、:提供一篇提供一篇350词以内的语言材料，原文多是情节丰富词以内的语言材料，原文多是情节丰富的的记叙文记叙文，偶有少量的议论文，要求考生依据该材料内，偶有少量的议论文，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文和结构完整的短文。（满分25分）新高考考试说明第五档：21-25第四档：16-20第三档：11-15第二档：6-10第一档：1-5评分原则本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分第五档第五档(21-25)与所给短文
2、融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理衔接合理。内内容丰富，容丰富，应用了应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键个以上短文中标出的关键词语。词语。所所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能可能有些有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达。错误，但完全不影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短续写短文结构紧凑文结构紧凑。Read the passage Get the main idea (who?When?Where?What?Why?How?)Predict the possible plot d
3、evelopment (the plot,logical,reasonable,the given two sentences)Begin to write(the underlined words)Polish your writing(词汇、句式、语法的多样性词汇、句式、语法的多样性)How to write a continuation?how to get the main idea When?Where?Who?what?Why?how?Basic forms of the 6 questions When did the story happen?Where did the sto
4、ry happen?Who is the main character?What happened in the story?Why was the matter caused?How was the matter solved/ended?读后续写练习读后续写练习II When I was a little girl,every time my dad was repairing something,hewould ask me to hold the hammer,and meanwhile,have a conversation with me.I never saw my dad dr
5、inking or taking a night out.All he did after work was taking care of his family.I grew up and left home for college andsincethen,my dad had been calling me every Sunday morning,no matter what.Several years later I bought a house,whichmy dad painted by himself for three days in the 80-degree summer
6、heat.All he asked was for me to talk to him.But I was always busy,unable to find any time for conversation with him.One Sunday morning we had a telephone talk as usual.I noticed that my dad hadforgotten some things we discussed lately.I was in a hurry,so our conversation was short.Later that day cam
7、e a call saying my father was in hospital.Immediately I bought a ticket for a flight and on my way I was thinking about all the missed occasions to have a talk with my dad 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为60左右；2.至少使用4个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分只有一段，开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。When?Where?Who?What?Why?How?whenIwasalitt
8、legirlmydad,IhaveaconversationwithmemydadtakescareofmyfamilyRead the passage Para.1 When I was a little girl,every time my dad was repairing something,he would ask me to hold the hammer,and meanwhile,have a conversation with me.I never saw my dad drinking or taking a night out.All he did after work
9、was taking care of his family.Main idea:When I was a little girl my dad like to have a conversation with me,who takes care of my family.Read the passage Para2.I grew up and left home for college and since then,my dad had been calling me every Sunday morning,no matter what.Several years later I bough
10、t a house,which my dad painted by himself for three days in the 80-degree summer heat.All he asked was for me to talk to him.But I was always busy,unable to find any time for conversation with him.Main idea:When I grew up,my dad want to talk to me.But I was busy,unable to have a conversation with hi
11、mRead the passage Para.3One Sunday morning we had a telephone talk as usual.I noticed that my dad had forgotten some things we discussed lately.I was in a hurry,so our conversation was short.Later that day came a call saying my father was in hospital.Main idea:One Sunday morning came a call saying m
12、y father was in hospital.Para.4 Immediately I bought a ticket for a flight and on my way I was thinking about all the missed occasions to have a talk with my dad.whenIgottothehospital.In a group predict how the story will develop:To predict doesnt mean you can write whatever you like.Continuation wr
13、iting must be designed in a logical and reasonable way.And on top of that being creative will be appreciated.Begin to write 注意：注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为60左右左右；2.至少使用至少使用4个个短文中标有下划线的短文中标有下划线的关键词关键词语；语；3.续写部分只有一段，开头语已为你写好；续写部分只有一段，开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后请续写完成后请用下划线标出用下划线标出你所使用的你所使用的关键词关键词语。语。The underlined w
14、ords:I dad conversation talk unable hospital 参考词汇：参考词汇：pass away,die(vi),dead(adj.),lose sb.regret doing sth.后悔做过某事，find sb.lying on the bed,burst into tears,burst out crying,only then did I realize.get over the illness,recover from the illness,my heart is broken.selfless,be worried about,be concern
15、ed about When I rushed to hospital,I found my dad lying there,weak and hopless.Holding back the tears,I talked to him gently.His face lit up.Only then did I realize the conversation was more than conversation.It was love.I was grateful that my father got over the illness and now it is I who always e
16、njoy starting the coversation.(62字）By the time I got to hospital,my father had passed away.Now it was he who did not have time for a conversation with me.I realized how little I know about my dad,his deepest thoughts and dreams.After his death I learned more about him,and even more about myself.（53字
17、）Polish your writing简单句，复合句以及强调句、倒装句等特殊句式的使用情况。简单句，复合句以及强调句、倒装句等特殊句式的使用情况。主被动语态、非谓语动词、独立主格结构、主被动语态、非谓语动词、独立主格结构、with的复合结构、的复合结构、虚拟语气的使用情况。虚拟语气的使用情况。常见初级词汇、高级词汇，以及不同词性的使用情况。常见初级词汇、高级词汇，以及不同词性的使用情况。比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞格的使用情况。比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞格的使用情况。句式结构：句式结构：语法结构：语法结构：词汇选择：词汇选择：修辞手法：修辞手法：关于衔接：关于衔接：1.1.关注段落内部句与句之间的衔接；关注段落内部句与句之间的衔接；2.2.关注与续写段落首句之间的衔接；关注与续写段落首句之间的衔接；3.3.关注两个续写段落之间的衔接；关注两个续写段落之间的衔接；4.4.关注上下文间的前后呼应。关注上下文间的前后呼应。
