1、Attitude is Everything高中英语作文讲评高中英语作文讲评字体篇字体篇句型篇句型篇1.There be .2.I likevery much3.I am./he is./we are.4.It is+adj.+to do5.I/he/we will+do sth.6.too.to.7.not.until.8.both.and.9.I/we/he/they have.这些句子还在睡觉这些句子还在睡觉现成的好句子现成的好句子1.firstly;secondly,thirdly.finallyin the first place;first of all;above all 首先、
2、第一点首先、第一点 2.also=besides=more over 此外、而且;此外、而且;in addition 并且并且;apart from 除了除了之外;之外;on the contrary 相反相反3.in a word 简言之、总之简言之、总之;generally speaking 一般说来一般说来;in short=in a few words 简言之简言之;it is quite clear that 很显然;很显然;4.As for me对我而言;对我而言;as far as Im concerned在我看来;在我看来;as time went by,随着时间流逝随着时间流
3、逝 in my opinion依我看依我看5.by the way 顺便说顺便说;I am afraid that.我恐怕我恐怕;to tell the truth 说实话说实话;in fact=as a matter of fact=actually 事实上事实上 6.for example 例如:例如:;that is to say 也就是说也就是说;such as 如如 at the same time于此同时于此同时7.because+句子句子 therefore 因此因此;as a result(of)结果结果;because of+名词或短语;名词或短语;for this reas
4、on 由于这个原因由于这个原因 8.in the same way 以相同的方式以相同的方式;different from 与与不同不同;on(the)one handon the other hand 一方面一方面另一方面另一方面;9.in other words 换句话说换句话说;all in all 总之,总之,at last I want to say,最后我想说最后我想说 at last;finally;in the end 最后最后 as soon as possible常用连接词和短语常用连接词和短语 连词篇连词篇1.and,in addition,first,second,th
5、ird 2.before,after,when,later,immediately3.beyond,beside,behind,below,inside4.but,still,however,even,though5.because,so,therefore,thus,otherwise6.so that,indeed,above all,for example7.finally,in other words,in brief简简 版版纠错篇纠错篇1.Im is a builder.2.I m a Lihua,is a builder.3.At that fime 4.suggest sb t
6、o do sth.5.It is sell it or donated it.6.I think should donate to china.7.If I set it I have very much8.Hope your give me a lot of advise.9.Because sent relics can get some moneys.10.But I didnt agree them suggestions.11.You can let have very impotere12.I hope to yours could help me solve problems.1
7、3.So I decide will be donate for government14.I hopy you have deal with thing15.We should sell some money to the ancient culturalsuggest sb do sth.Im a builder.My name is Lihua,Im a builder.timeI doubt whether to sell it or not.I think we should donate it to china.If I sell it,I will have much money
8、.I hope you can give me a lot of advice.Because selling relics can make some moneyBut I didnt agree with theirI hope you can help me solve the problem.So I decided to donate it to government.I hope you can deal with it.We should sell the ancient relics for some money.字数篇字数篇 How to Write a Compositio
9、n?英语作文英语作文“六步法六步法”教学教学Step1 仔细审题仔细审题(题材题材,要求要求)Step2.理清要点理清要点(几处要点几处要点,思路思路,篇章安排篇章安排)Step3.译写单句译写单句Step4.连句成篇连句成篇Step5.检查润色检查润色(每句话写好后,用适当的连词接起来,每句话写好后,用适当的连词接起来,使之上下连贯,呼应,通顺,简洁使之上下连贯,呼应,通顺,简洁 适当地用一些高级词汇适当地用一些高级词汇短语和句式短语和句式)Step6.定稿誊写定稿誊写(检查一下有没有时态,语态,拼检查一下有没有时态,语态,拼写错误并逐一加以改正写错误并逐一加以改正)Step7.卷面干净卷面
10、干净整洁整洁1.请你根据以下要点并结合自己的亲身请你根据以下要点并结合自己的亲身体会体会,以以”Its important to take regular exercise”为题为题,写一篇写一篇100字左右的英语字左右的英语演讲稿演讲稿,说明锻炼的重要性说明锻炼的重要性.锻炼身体的好处锻炼身体的好处:1)伸展身体伸展身体2)放松精神放松精神3)学习合作学习合作 参考词汇参考词汇:stretch伸展伸展 cooperate合作合作 Its important to take regular exercise Its important to take regular exercise,beca
11、use .锻炼身体可以使我们的身体伸展锻炼身体可以使我们的身体伸展,也能使我们更也能使我们更强壮强壮.如果我们健康了如果我们健康了,我们就可以少去医院我们就可以少去医院;学生学生每天有很多的作业要做每天有很多的作业要做,每天都感到很累每天都感到很累,甚至有甚至有同学在上课时睡觉同学在上课时睡觉,做锻炼可以让我们放松精神做锻炼可以让我们放松精神,使使我们感到精力充沛我们感到精力充沛,使我们大脑活跃起来使我们大脑活跃起来,在课堂上在课堂上做得更好做得更好;和其他人一起锻炼可以使我们懂得与人和其他人一起锻炼可以使我们懂得与人合作的重要性合作的重要性,并且可以使我们建立牢固的友谊并且可以使我们建立牢固
12、的友谊.So,Its important to take regular exercise.操练篇操练篇1.请你根据以下要点并结合自己的亲身请你根据以下要点并结合自己的亲身体会体会,以以”Its important to take regular exercise”为题为题,写一篇写一篇100字左右的英语字左右的英语演讲稿演讲稿,说明锻炼的重要性说明锻炼的重要性.锻炼身体的好处锻炼身体的好处:1)伸展身体伸展身体2)放松精神放松精神3)学习合作学习合作 参考词汇参考词汇:stretch伸展伸展 cooperate合作合作Step1 仔细审题仔细审题(题材题材,要求要求)Step2.理清要点理清
13、要点(几处要点几处要点,思路思路,篇章安排篇章安排)Step3.译写单句译写单句Step4.连句成篇连句成篇Step5.检查润色检查润色(每句话写好后,用适当的连词接起来,使之上下连贯,呼应,通顺,简每句话写好后,用适当的连词接起来,使之上下连贯,呼应,通顺,简洁洁 适当地用一些高级词汇短语和句式适当地用一些高级词汇短语和句式)Step6.定稿誊写定稿誊写(检查一下有没有时态,语态,拼写错误并逐一加以改正检查一下有没有时态,语态,拼写错误并逐一加以改正)卷面整洁干净卷面整洁干净范文范文Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build
14、a“harmonious society”.I think it is every citizens duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As high school students,what should we do?Secondly,lets fill the world with love.We should show our respect for old people,our parents and our teachers.Thirdly,We should also care for each other and help those in need.Most important of all,all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.Finally,lets work together to save energy and protect our natural environment,including animals,trees,flowers and grass.HomeworkHomeworkTHANK YOU