1、人教人教2019版版必修第一册必修第一册 Unit 3 话题写作训练话题写作训练波峰李树果9/30/2022Mr Lee1文体特征文体特征9/30/2022Mr Lee2本单元的写作主题是“为健康簿编写一页内容”，要求学习比较(comparison)和对比（contrast)的基本写作方法，对自己的心理健康（如压力、自信）和身体健康（如锻炼、饮食）进行反思，对比过去与现在或者将来的打算，培养关注健康的意识，形成正确的健康观。9/30/2022Mr Lee3请根据下面的提示，写一篇关于自己的健康报告书。请根据下面的提示，写一篇关于自己的健康报告书。过去过去1.幼年时身体虚弱，经常感冒幼年时身体虚
2、弱，经常感冒2.不能够正常上学不能够正常上学转折点转折点读到一篇关于早晨慢跑的文章现在现在1.读到早起和慢跑的文章2.感到精神焕发，精力充沛3.身体逐渐恢复，日常生活从中受益注意：注意：写作词数应为80左右。第一步第一步 谋篇谋篇9/30/2022Mr Lee4明确体裁话题1.过去：幼时体弱多病；不能够正常上学2.转折点：读到早起慢跑的文章3.现在：早起和慢跑；精神焕发4.总结：从中受益第一部分：描述过去状况第二部分：描述现在状况第三部分：总结一般过去时、一般现在时；第一人称应用文；健康报告书确定时态人称布局文章框架列出核心要点第二步第二步 遣词遣词1.weak adj.2.catch a c
3、old3.go to school4.article n.5.jog n.虚弱的感冒上学文章慢跑9/30/2022Mr Lee59/30/2022Mr Lee66.make a difference7.get up8.half an hour9.every day有作用或影响起床半小时每天第三步第三步 造句造句1.幼年时期，我身体虚弱。(when;一般过去时)2.我经常感冒。(一般过去时；now and then)3.正常上学对我来说是一个巨大的挑战。（动名词短语作主语；challenge)When I was a little child,I was weak.I caught a cold
4、 now and then.Going to school regularly was a big challenge to me.9/30/2022Mr Lee79/30/2022Mr Lee84.我读到一篇文章。（一般过去时）I read an article.5.这篇文章上说早晨慢跑有效果。（动名词短语作主语；一般过去时）The article said jogging in the morning would make a real difference.6.我起得很早，慢跑大约半个小时。(and;一般现在时)I get up early and jog for about half
5、an hour.7.通过每天锻炼，我的身体正在逐渐恢复。(build up;work out;by doing;现在进行时)My body is building up by working out every day.8.它对我的日常生活有极大的益处。(benefit;:一般现在时)It benefits my daily life greatly.第四步第四步 升级升级9/30/2022Mr Lee91.用用sothat连接句连接句1和句和句2When I was a little child,I was so weak that I caught a cold now and then.
6、2.用定语从句连接句用定语从句连接句4和句和句5。I read an article,which said jogging in the morning would make a real difference.3.用用make it a rule to do.,改写句改写句6。I make it a rule to get up early and jog for about half an hour.4.用定语从句连接句用定语从句连接句7和句和句8。My body is building up by working out every day,which benefits my daily
7、 life greatly第五步第五步 成篇成篇写摹背诵写摹背诵9/30/2022Mr Lee10 When I was a little child,I was so weak that I caught a cold now and then.As a result，going to school regularly was a big challenge to me.Then I read an article which said jogging would make a real difference.So I follow the advice and put it into practice every day.Now,I make it a rule to get up early and jog for about half an hour.After that,I feel refreshed and energetic.At present,my body is building up by working out every day,which benefits my daily life greatly.
