1、2 0 2 1 届 全 国 高 考 英 语 冲 刺 复 习读 后 续 写 技 巧续 写 技 巧原句同义替换细节补充改变句式人生巅峰可用词汇(高兴激动)v.1.dance2.whistle3.jump/leap with joy4.feel a surge of happiness/delight/joy/excitement;5.be overcome with happines/delight/joy/excitement6.(ones eyes)twinkle(ones heart)beat/pound wildly adj.happy;delighted;overjoyed;excite
2、d;thrilled;wild with joy【版本一】When she knew the result of the test,she felt excited/thrilled.【版本二】When she knew the result of the test,her eyes twinkled with excitement.【版本三】When she knew the result of the test,her heart was pounding with wild joy.【版本四】When she knew the result of the test,a wild exci
3、tement took hold of her.【版本五】Knowing the result of the test,she felt a surge of excitement.【版本六】Knowing the result of the test,she was overcome with excitement.当她知道考试结果时,她兴奋极了。版本一：He laughed happily.（原句）版本二：He burst into laughter.（同义替换）He roared with laughter.版本三：He roared with laughterand his eyes
4、glistened with excitement.（细节补充）版本四：Roared with laughter,his eyes glistening with excitement.（句式变换）版本一：He beamed at me.版本二：He beamed at me with pleasure/excitement.版本三：He beamed at me with pleasure/excitement,saying.可用词汇（笑）1.laugh2.smile brightly3.grin at sb（grin from ear to ear）4.beam at5.light(sth
5、)up6.burst into laughter7.wear a bright/broad smile 8.jump/leap with joy9.sb be overcome/overwhelmedwith/by happiness/delight/joy/excitement他笑着看着我。版本一：They wore a smile on their faces.版本二：They were so delighted that they wore a smile on their faces.版本三：So delighted he was that a smile unconsciously
6、spread over his face.使充满：be overcome(多被动)/overwhelmed/consumed with/bysth overwhelm sb突然感觉：feel a surge of (sadness)surge within sbsth seize sbsb was seized by 声音充满.：in a voice charged with.,he said,“.中性短语关门的那一刻，他再也忍不住的哭了出来。比一比版本一：He cried./He cried his eyes out when he shut the door.学生版本：Hardly cou
7、ld he resist the urge to burst into tears when he snapped the door.关门的那一刻，他再也忍不住的哭了出来。眼含泪水如何写？版本一：Tears filled his eyes.版本二：He had to restrain himself from crying out in pain.版本三：His vision obsured,tears of regret and appreciation welled up.版本四（字典）She gulped back her tears and forced a smile.眼含泪水如何写？谢谢观看
