1、Flowchart流程图流程图3流程图如写开头和总结流程图如写开头和总结3 Introduction（开头）（开头）(introduce the process in your own words)The diagram presents the manufacturing process of two types of tea,pu-erh raw tea and pu-erh ripe tea3流程图如写开头和总结流程图如写开头和总结4 SummaryOverview（总结）（总结）(give an overviewsummary of the complete process)Illus
2、trated in the illustrations is that,although the first three stages are the same for both teas,it can be seen that the methods of production differ in the final stages,which accounts for the resulting variations in the two teas.3流程图如写主体段落流程图如写主体段落5 3流程图如写主体段落流程图如写主体段落6 First,+sentenceFirst,the cows
3、graze in the field.After that,+sentenceAfter that,the milk is pasturized.Afterwards,+sentenceAfterwards,the milk is pasturized.Then,+sentenceThen,the milk is pasturized.Next,+sentenceNext,the milk is pasturized.Following this,+sentenceFollowing this,the milk is pasturized.3流程图如写主体段落流程图如写主体段落7 COMPLE
4、X STRUCTURESCOMPLEX STRUCTURESAfter SV,SVAfter+gerundAfter the milk is packed and labeled,it is delivered.After being packed and labeled,the milk is delivered.Before SV,SVBefore+gerundBefore the milk is delivered,it is packed and labeled.Before being delivered,the milk is packed and labeled.SV until
5、 SVThe milk is stored in a holding tank until it is ready to be delivered.Once SV,SVSVonce SVOnce the cows have been milked,they are then returned to the field.The cows are returned to the field once they have been milked.When SV,SVSVwhen SVWhen the cows have been milked,they are then returned to th
6、e field.The cows are returned to the field when they have been milked.3流程图如写主体段落流程图如写主体段落8 Two things happening at the same timeSV at the same time as SVAt the same time as SV,SVThe cows are milked at the same time as the holding tank is prepared.At the same time as the holding tank is prepared,the
7、cows are milked.SVwhile SVWhile SV,SVThe cows are milked while the holding tank is prepared.While the holding tank is prepared,the cows are milked.【高分范文高分范文写作特点写作特点深度点评深度点评】You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced.Summarise the information
8、 by selecting and reporting the main features.Write at least 150 words.Writing task 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.Write at least 150 words.【高分范文及深度点评高分范文及深度
9、点评】The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate.（The ten pictures demonstrates/illustrates/exhibits/depicts/describes/gives information about the different stages of making liquid chocolate.)【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：process或procedure整个过程；stage阶段；step步骤】【流程图特点之一流程图特点之一：介绍过程要使用一
10、般现在时】Chocolate comes from the cacao tree,which is grown in parts of South America,Africa and Indonesia.The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans.【开头不能一上来就直接介绍cacao tree，而是通过主题词chocolate引出，否则显得太唐突】【流程图特点之二流程图特点之二：大量使用定语从句，定语从句，将有关联的两句话连接，并少量结合其它从句并少量结合其它从句。】【流程图特点之三流程图特点之三：大量使用
11、被动语态被动语态,表客观性。】Firstly，when the pods are ripe,they are harvested,the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes.During the fermenting process,the beans turn brown.【流程图特点之四流程图特点之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接词】【三个句子的并列：“句子A,句子B and 句子C”。【流程图特点之五流程图特点之五：要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的一些
12、内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的主观观点，否则会扣分】beans fermented Next,the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry.They are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry.After this,the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius.After being roasted,the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed.This part is not needed for making chocolate.Finally,the inner part of the bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced.【流程图特点之六流程图特点之六：可以不写总结】
