1、读后续写技能之感情描写who when where whatwhyThemea woman;a manon a raining nightat an airporta cookie thiefate her Cookies without permissionmain idea?On a raining night at an airport,a woman thought a man was a cookie thief because he was eating her cookies without permission.new jobLondon-new cityexcited，ner
2、vousWriting tip1:Use _ to describe ones feelingsReading,comprehension and writing skills Para 1new bossgentlemanadjectivesManWomangrabbed cookies _it to avoid an argument _ too to show that she was the owner kept eating_ some cookies_ the clockimpatientannoyedWriting tip2:Use_ to show ones feelingsR
3、eading,comprehension and writing skills Para 2-3ignored took cookiesmunchedwatchedbody languages(actions)She was getting angrier as the minutes went by,thinking,“If I werent so nice,I would blacken his eyes.”Writing tip3:Use _to express ones feelingsWith each cookie she took,he took one,too;when onl
4、y one was left,she wondered what he would do.Reading,comprehension and writing skills Para 4subjunctive mood(虚拟语气虚拟语气)Comprehension and writing skills Para 5ManWomantook the last cookie grabbed the last halfglared at the manbroke it in half Writing tip 4:Use_ to show ones feelingsWhat did the woman
5、think here?angry Writing tip 5:Use_ to show ones feelingsoffered her the last halffacial expressionsquestions or dialoguesWhy didnt he even show any gratefulness?Reading,comprehension and writing skills Para 5Womansighed in reliefheaded to the gate quickly refused to look back impatient,angry情感支架情感支
6、架：Comprehension and writing skills Para 6Conclusion:How can we show our feelings in a story?Tip1:Use adjectives to describe our feelingsTip2:Use Body languages(actions)to show our feelingsTip3:Use subjunctive mood(虚拟语气虚拟语气)to express our feelingsTip 4:Use facial expressions to show our feelingsTip 5
7、:Use questions or dialogues to show our feelingstip:actionsReading,comprehension and writing skills Para 6well-manneredrudea cookie thiefa ladyAbout the charactersCharacter analysisParagraph 1 As she reached in her baggage,she gasped(喘气喘气)with surprise._Q1:What was the woman surprised to find?Q2:Wha
8、t was the womans feelings?Q3:What would she do?Q4:How could Paragraph 1 end reasonably?(Para.2 Surprisingly,she found the man sitting just behind her)Plot one：Group discussionwell-manneredrudea cookie thiefa ladyAbout the charactersa gentle mana cookie thiefcharacter analysisParagraph 2 Surprisingly
9、,she found the man sitting just behind her._Q1:Who could the man be?Q2:What was the womans feelings?Q3:What would the woman do?Q4:What would the man do?Q5:How could the story end reasonably?It was said that her new boss was a typical English gentleman polite,modest,humorous and considerate.Plot two：
10、Group discussion 1.Adjectives She stood beside her chair,surprised and embarrassed.So embarrassed was she that she stood there clumsily,feeling the blood rushing to her face.2.Body languages(actions)She cupped her face with her hands,scrached(挠挠)her head,breathed and breathed until she felt calmer.S
11、he lowered a bit of her body,hesitated for a moment,wondering how to hide her inner embarrassment.3.Facial expresions She opened her mouth with her eyes widening and face turning red.Suddenly,she leapt up,embarrassment written in her red face.4.Other indirect descriptions All the air seemed to disap
12、pear and she felt as if the whole world was watching her.(scene and rhetoric修辞修辞)She was struck dead with embarrassment,heart beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs(肋骨肋骨).(rhetoric修辞修辞)surprise or embarrassment Emotional languages：Key words：匹配、协同：匹配、协同gentleman；the woman；packet of cooki
13、es；the man,cookie thief；nervous；ate；thought；rude；the planeParagraph 1 As she reached in her baggage,she gasped(喘气)with surprise._Q1:What was the woman surprised to find?Q2:What was the womans feelings?Q3:What would she do?Q4:How would Paragraph 1 end reasonably?possible key words:the woman;packet of
14、 cookies;thought;the man;rude;cookies thief.Key words：匹配、协同：匹配、协同gentleman；the woman；packet of cookies；the man,cookie thief；nervous；ate；thought；rude；the planeParagraph 2 Surprisingly,she found the man sitting just behind her._Q1:Who was the man?Q2:What was the womans feelings?Q3:What would the woman
15、 do?Q4:What would the man do?Q5:How would the story end reasonably?possible key words:the man;rude;cookies thief;the woman;nervous;thought；gentleman；the plane；.key words and phrasesgentleman,the woman,packet of cookies,the man,cookie thief,nervous,ate,thought,rude,the planeParagraph 1 As she reached
16、 in her baggage,she gasped(喘气喘气)with surprise._Paragraph 2 Surprisingly,she found the man sitting just behind her._ Self-writingOne possible version Paragraph 1:As she reached in her baggage,she gasped(喘气喘气)with surprise.She took it out carefully and was surprised to see her own packet of cookies.At
17、 that moment,the woman was so ashamed that she covered her face with mouth open widely and face turning red instantly.The plane seemed to stop there,rooted to the spot.Why had I ridiculously considered him as a cookie thief?I owe him a sincere apology,she thought.Just as she was blank in her head,su
18、ddenly,a soft and clear voice,Excuse me,Lady,woke her up to the real world.She looked back instinctively to see who he was.Paragraph 2:Surprisingly,she found the man sitting just behind her.It was the man who,she thought,was rude and ate her cookies,smiling at her.She lowered a bit of her body shame
19、fully,hesitated for a moment,and introduced herself nervously.After further communication,she was surprised to find that the gentleman was actually his new boss in London.She was struck dead with embarrassment with heart beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs.All the air seemed to disappear and she felt as if the whole world were watching her.Seeing her embarrassment and nervousness,the considerate boss calmed her down patiently and asked her to discuss her new job ahead of time.What a coincidence!What an unforgivable mistake!,she thought.
