1、Part4Part4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-2-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5心情与态度心情与态度【魔句1】听到他竞赛获得一等奖的消息,我们又高兴又激动。The news that he won first prize in the competition makes us delighted and excited.On hearing the news that he finished in first place in the competition,we all feel delighted and
2、excited.语境1听到你要来参加英语周的一项活动时,我们又高兴又激动。(1)The news that you will be here to take part in one of the English Week activities makes us delighted and excited.(2)On hearing the news that you will be here to take part in one of the English Week activities,we all feel delighted and excited.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百
3、变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-3-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5语境2当得知学校图书馆要购置一批新书时,我们既高兴又激动。语境3得知你对中国历史感兴趣,我感到既高兴又激动。(1)The news that our library is intended to purchase more books makes us delighted and excited.(2)On hearing the news that our library is intended to purchase more books,we all feel delighted and excited.(1)The n
4、ews that you are interested in Chinese history makes me delighted and excited.(2)On hearing the news that you are interested in Chinese history,I feel delighted and excited.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-4-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5积累:win first prize/finish in first place获得一等奖on doing sth一做某事就on arriving.一到
5、达就on seeing.一看见就Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-5-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句2】能代表我校学生在这里发言,我感到非常荣幸。It is a great honour to give a speech here,as a representative of all the students of our school.I feel honoured to deliver a speech here on behalf of all the students of our school.As a representative of al
6、l the students of our school,it is my honour to give a speech here.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-6-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5语境1作为晨光中学的学生会主席,我很荣幸能有这个机会在这里致辞。(2016天津卷,书面表达)(1)As the chairman of the Students Union of Chenguang Middle School,it is a great honour to be given such a chance to deliver a speech t
7、o you.(2)I feel honoured to be given such a chance to deliver a speech to you,as the chairman of the Students Union of Chenguang Middle School.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-7-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5语境2与你一起在那儿,享受着多彩的日子,我们将十分荣幸。(2017浙江卷,应用文写作)(1)We would be honoured to have you there with us,enjoying the
8、colourful days.(2)It is a great honour to have you there with us,enjoying the colourful days.积累:a great honour一件荣幸的事情as a representative of作为的代表on behalf of代表Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-8-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句3】不知道该如何跟同学们相处,她感到有些困惑。She felt somehow at a loss,wondering how to get on with her class
9、mates.Because she didnt know how to get along with her classmates,she felt sort of at a loss.She didnt know how to get on with her classmates,feeling kind of confused.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-9-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5语境1对于如何能讲一口流利的普通话,你感到困惑。(1)You feel somehow at a loss,wondering how to speak Manda
10、rin fluently.(2)Because you dont know how to speak Mandarin fluently,you feel sort of at a loss.(3)You dont know how to speak Mandarin fluently,feeling kind of confused.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-10-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5语境2不知道如何与老师相处,有些同学感觉有些困惑。(1)Because some classmates didnt know how to get along
11、 with their teachers,they felt sort of at a loss.(2)Some classmates didnt know how to get on with their teachers,feeling kind of confused.积累:be/feel at a loss感到困惑sort of/kind of有点儿Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-11-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句4】这个小男孩懂得很多,我们对此感到惊讶。The little boy knows so many things that we
12、feel surprised.(so.that句型)It is that the little boy knows so many things that surprises us.(强调句型)The little boy who knows so many things surprises us.(定语从句)What surprises us is that the little boy knows so many things.(主语从句+表语从句)That the little boy knows so many things surprises us.(主语从句)We are surp
13、rised that the little boy knows so many things.(宾语从句)Much to our surprise,the little boy knows so many things.(运用插入语或固定短语)Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-12-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5语境1我们做的面人很精美,让这位匠人非常满意。语境2我们做得如此好,以至于被邀请与全校的学生一起分享我们的想法与经验。(2016北京卷,书面表达)(1)The dough figurines we made were so excellent that
14、 the craftsman was very pleased.(2)What made the craftsman very pleased was that we made such excellent dough figurines.(3)That we made such excellent dough figurines pleased the craftsman.(1)We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.(2)
15、It is because we did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-13-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5积累:much to ones surprise令某人非常惊讶的是much to ones satisfaction 令某人非常满意的是Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-14-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句5】老师的一
16、席话深深地打动了我,我决心更加努力地学习英语。Deeply moved by my teachers words,I have made up my mind to study English harder.Deeply touched by what the teacher said,Im determined to learn English even harder.What the teacher said left me affected,so I was determined to make more efforts to study English.It was the teach
17、ers moving words that made me determined to concentrate more on my English study.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-15-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5语境1他们娴熟的技艺令我惊讶,我决心像他们一样出色。语境2我决心更加努力地学习。(1)Amazed at how skillful they were,I made up my mind to be just as good as them.(2)Greatly amazed at their skills,I was determ
18、ined to be just as good as them.(3)It was their amazing skills that made me determined to be just as good as them.(1)Im determined to make every effort to study harder.(2)I have made up my mind to spare no effort to study harder.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-16-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5积累:amazed at.过去分词做状
19、语make up ones mind to do sth下定决心做某事It is/was.that.强调句式Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-17-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句6】一流的设计,漂亮的绿化,现代的建筑给参观者们留下了深刻的印象。The visitors were deeply impressed by the first-class design,as well as the beautiful trees and grass and modern buildings.The first-class design as well as t
20、he beautiful trees and grass and modern buildings left a deep impression on the visitors.语境你们在体育与艺术方面的表现,给我们留下了深刻的印象。(2016天津卷,书面表达)(1)We were deeply impressed by your performance in sports and art.(2)Your performance in sports and art left a deep impression on us.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-18
21、-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5积累:be deeply impressed by被深深地打动leave a deep impression on sb给某人留下深刻的印象Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-19-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5时间与地点时间与地点【魔句7】会议大约持续了三个小时。The meeting took approximately/roughly three hours.The meeting lasted three hours more or less.The meeting ended/came to an end about t
22、hree hours later.It took three hours or so to cover the meeting.语境展览时间为期两天。(1)The exhibition will take two days.(2)The exhibition will last two days.(3)The exhibition will come to an end two days later.(4)It will take two days to cover the exhibition.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-20-情景1情景2情景3情景4
23、情景5积累:last持续come to an end结束;终结it takes some time to do sth做某事要花费多长时间Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-21-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句8】公园是公众娱乐休闲的地方。A park is a place for the public to rest and enjoy themselves.A park is a place where people rest and relax.A park is a place where people can have a rest and ha
24、ve fun.A park is a public place for relaxation/amusement.语境广场是公众消遣、玩得开心的地方。(1)The square is a place for the public to relax and enjoy themselves.(2)The square is a public place for relaxation/amusement.积累:a place for.一个的地方a place where.一个的地方(where 引导定语从句)Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-22-情景1情景2情景
25、3情景4情景5【魔句9】他瞥了一眼地图,然后告诉我们,往前再走不到20英里就是一个村庄。Glancing at the map,he informed us that the next village was merely twenty miles away.He glanced at the map and told us that there would be a village less than twenty miles away.He took a glance at the map and told us that no more than twenty miles ahead w
26、as a village.Having glanced at the map,he informed us that the next village was within twenty miles.He cast a look at the map,telling us that there would be less than twenty miles ahead of us before we got to a village.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-23-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5语境往前走不到100米就是我们的图书馆。(1)There
27、is our library less than 100 meters away.(2)Our library is less than 100 meters ahead.(3)Our library is within 100 meters.积累:less than不到;少于within 100 meters(往前)不到100米Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-24-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句10】我们在一个窗子朝西的教室里学习。We study in a classroom,whose windows face west.We study in
28、a classroom,the windows of which face west.语境我们在一个窗子朝南的实验楼里做实验。(1)We do experiments in a lab,whose windows face south.(2)We do experiments in a lab,the windows of which face south.积累:定语从句中“whose+n.+其他”相当于“the+n.+of which/whom+其他”。Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-25-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句11】夜晚,同学们到达了这个小
29、村庄。In the evening,the students got to/reached/arrived at the small village.It was in the evening that the students reached the small village.It was evening when the students arrived at the small village.The students did not get to the small village until(it was)evening.Evening had already fallen whe
30、n the students found their way to the small village.语境那个周末,我们去了附近的一个地区。(2016北京卷,书面表达)(1)It was that weekend when we went to a nearby neighborhood.(2)It was at that weekend that we went to a nearby neighborhood.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-26-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5积累:It is/was.that.为强调句式Part 4Part 4百变魔
31、句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-27-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句12】我们盼望的春节马上就要到了。The Spring Festival that we look forward to is approaching.The Spring Festival that we look forward to is drawing near.Around the corner is the Spring Festival that we are longing for/are dying for.语境1我们盼望的中学生京剧表演比赛马上就要到了。(1)The competition of
32、“Peking opera by middle school students”that we are all looking forward to is approaching.(2)Around the corner is the competition of“Peking opera by middle school students”we are all longing for/dying for.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-28-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5语境2我们盼望的中国汉字听写大会马上就要开始了。(1)Chinese Characte
33、r Dictation Contest that we look forward to is approaching.(2)Chinese Character Dictation Contest that we look forward to is drawing near.(3)Around the corner is Chinese Character Dictation Contest that we are longing for/are dying for.积累:.is drawing near.就要到了。Around the corner is.快到了。Part 4Part 4百变
34、魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-29-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句13】一听到那个令人兴奋的消息,她就大笑起来。As soon as she heard the exciting news,she began to laugh.On hearing the exciting news,she burst into laughter.The moment/instant she heard the exciting news,she began to laugh.Immediately/Directly she heard the exciting news,she burst
35、into laughter.Hardly/Rarely had she heard the exciting news when she burst into laughter.No sooner had she heard the exciting news than she burst out laughing.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-30-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5语境听到这个消息,我感到很兴奋。(1)On hearing the news,I felt excited.(2)The moment/instant I heard the n
36、ews,I felt excited.(3)Immediately/Directly I heard the news,I felt excited.(4)No sooner had I heard the news than I felt excited.积累:burst out突然起来;大声喊叫Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-31-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句14】直到失去所有的财产,他才意识到被骗了。He didnt realize that he was cheated until he had lost all his belongings
37、.Not until he had lost all his wealth did he wake up to the fact that he was cheated.It was not until he had lost all his possessions that he realized he was taken in.He didnt realize he was taken in until he got all his properties lost.Only after he had lost all his possessions did he become aware
38、of being cheated.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-32-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5语境直到接到电话,他才意识到今天是母亲的生日。(1)He didnt realize that today is his mothers birthday until he received the call.(2)Not until he received the call did he realize that today is his mothers birthday.(3)It was not until he received the call t
39、hat he realized today is his mothers birthday.积累:not until置于句首时,主句用部分倒装形式It was not until.that.为强调句式Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-33-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句15】农历正月初一是春节。The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the first month of our Chinese lunar calendar.The Spring Festival occurs on the first
40、day of the first month of our Chinese lunar calendar.People celebrate the Spring Festival on the first day of the first month of our Chinese lunar calendar.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-34-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5语境农历九月初九是重阳节。(1)The Double Ninth Festival falls on the ninth day of the ninth month of our C
41、hinese lunar calendar.(2)The Double Ninth Festival occurs on the ninth day of the ninth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.(3)People celebrate the Double Ninth Festival on the ninth day of the ninth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.积累:fall on.表示“(庆典或特别事件)在(某日),适逢(某日)”Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点
42、靓写作情景-35-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5活动与过程活动与过程【魔句16】万一计划失败,我们将采取其他的措施来解决这个问题。If the plan were to fail,we would adopt other measures to solve the problem.If the plan should fail,other measures would be taken to deal with the problem.Should the plan fail,we would take other steps to settle the problem.If the plan
43、 to solve the problem failed,we would take other measures.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-36-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5语境万一失败,我们也不能灰心丧气。(1)If we were to fail,we wouldnt get discouraged.(2)Should we fail,we wouldnt get discouraged.(3)If we should fail,we wouldnt get discouraged.积累:if+主语+should/were to do 表示对将
44、来情况的假设get discouraged灰心丧气Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-37-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句17】我们怎样克服这些困难呢?How is it that we get rid of the difficulties?How shall we overcome the difficulties?How shall we smooth away the difficulties?What measures/steps should we take to overcome the difficulties?What is it tha
45、t we should do to get over the difficulties?语境我们怎样解决空气污染的问题呢?(1)How shall we overcome the problem of air pollution?(2)What measures should we take to solve the problem of air pollution?(3)What is it that we should do to get over the problem of air pollution?Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-38-情景1情景
46、2情景3情景4情景5积累:How/What is it that.?为强调句式take measures to do sth采取措施做某事Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-39-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句18】他突然想起一个好主意。Suddenly he hit on/upon a good idea.Suddenly a good idea came to his mind.A good idea suddenly flashed across his mind.He suddenly thought out a good idea.A good
47、idea suddenly struck him.A good idea suddenly occurred to him.语境回家以后,他突然有了一个好主意。(1)After arriving home,he suddenly hit on/upon a good idea.(2)Suddenly a good idea came to his mind after he arrived home.(3)A good idea suddenly flashed across his mind after he arrived home.(4)A good idea suddenly occu
48、rred to him after he got home.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-40-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5积累:hit on/upon a good idea想起一个好主意a good idea comes to sbs mind 某人想起一个好主意flash across sbs mind在某人的脑海中闪过a good idea occurs to sb某人想起一个好主意Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-41-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5【魔句19】他正在努力实现他的目标。He is making
49、every effort to achieve his goal.With great efforts,he is struggling to achieve his goal.He is sparing no effort to realize his aim.He is doing everything in his power to realize his aim.He is doing/trying his best to achieve his goal.He is doing what he could to make his goal come true.He is doing
50、as much as he could to realize his aim.语境我过去经常尝试有效的方法来实现我的学习目标。(1)I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals.(2)I used to try effective methods to make my academic goals come true.Part 4Part 4百变魔句百变魔句,点靓写作情景点靓写作情景-42-情景1情景2情景3情景4情景5积累:achieve ones goal 实现某人的目标come true实现Part 4Part
